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I saw Harry Potter #4

How great was it... one thing was wrong.. Dumbledore was a bit mean in it..

I would lurve 2 hear wat u guys thought... ENJOY

Everyone was leaving the hall.

'It's now or never James!' he screamed to himself. He couldn't do it, this poor innocent girl had never done anything wrong.

'Except be a freak! Come on James,' the voice inside him (which sounded amazingly like Sirius) yelled, 'Do you ever want to use the 'Corner' again?'

Here goes.

Lily was sitting, waiting for James to move so they could go back to the Common Room, but her wasn't moving, he looked like he was having a inner war….. until finally…

'That's it Lily, we're over!' he screamed in a very high voice.

She didn't know what to say, so she stayed silent. The problem was so did he. She finally decided to say something.

'I thought you loved me?'

'YOU! Lily look in the mirror, then look at me, I am the most popular boy at school. Who are you?'

'I thought I was your girlfriend?'

'Well honey. You thought wrong. I never really liked you. DID EVERYONE HEAR THAT? I NEVER LIKED LILY EVANS! I wanted to see how far you would go. Sorry darling, but it wasn't far. I would also like to point out tha-'

'That James Potter has a dick the size of a used lipstick!' Lily unexpectantly threw in.

There was a loud groan from the boys. She had sunk low. It was common knowledge that James had not wanted to have sex until he was married. Many girls had already tested him.

'HOW DARE YOU!'

'NO HOW DARE YOU!' This time it was Harriet who yelled, this took James by surprise, 'DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW MUCH THIS WILL KILL HER?'

James was so surprised his mouth lay open waiting for flies.

'No I suppose you wouldn't would you James. You've never stuck around long enough to have your heart broken. Have you?'

Then without waiting for an answer she grabbed Lily by the shoulders and stormed out of the hall. They were followed by many of the girls who had been out with James and knew what it felt like for him to trample on their hearts. The remaining people in the hall were a few shocked professors, a lot of boys who were shaking their heads and a whole lot of girls hoping to be the first one to 'comfort' James.

He felt a hard tap on his shoulder. When he looked up he saw Proffessor Dumbledoor, the new princaple for this year.

'I'd like to talk.' He said in a low voice. James nodded and much to the girls' dismay followed the Headmaster out of the Hall.

'Lily! What's wrong?'

'Don't worry Remus, she'll be fine,' replied Harriet.

'Who did it? Lets go get him!'

'No need Sirius, Lily and I gave him what he deserved.'

'Nice work!' The two boys agreed.

The girls proceeded towards their own dormitory.

'Lily are you ok?'

Lily looked up, tears streaming down her face.

'I thought he loved me, I loved him! Why couldn't he love me. He told me he did.'

'Don't be ridiculous. How can you be in love? You're 14 for goodness sake!'

'Being silly. Wanna bed.'

'I know but I'm not as good at Charms as you so you're going to have to get yourself into your PJ's.'

Lily woke herself up immediately.

'That's it. I hate James Potter. I want him to rot. I hate him. Don't talk to me about him and if you want to talk to him, don't expect me to be friendly.'

'Does this mean I –'

'No it does not mean you can tell Remus… I kept a promise, unlike Potter, I'm true to my word.'

That was the last time Lily Evans cried.

'You did a horrible thing tonight James.'

'Yes sir.'

'You broke a girls heart.'

'Yes sir.'

'I wanted to make sure you know what this ….. what's it called? FLOWER PLAN could get out of control if you not careful.'

'Yes sir.'

'That is all James, I just want you to know that I am very disappointed.'

'Yes sir,'

'You may go.'

'Yes sir.'

With that James left the Headmaster's room, as he left a small tear escaped James' eye.

That was the first time James Potter cried.