Disclaimer: I do not own Jak or anything from the Jak and Daxter Series, except for some of the new characters that have yet to come.

EJ Amber: Thank you soooo much for the names. They are wonderful and I'm using them in the metal heads' points of view. Yes, the metal heads will have an important part in this story.

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Glad you like the powers, oh and I love your story. And sorry for the lateness.

LunarSquirrel: Hope this one pleases you as well.

ShalBrenfan: Glad it made you laugh, this one is not as funny, but humor will be in store for the later chapters, when the action really starts.

jaklover123: Sorry for confusing you, I guess it wasn't as clear as I thought. Anyway, I don't really write prolonged romance, lovy, dovy kinds of scenes. But, I hope this is more clear than the last chapter.

Farr2rich: I love your ideas, and trust me, more light powers and Light/Dark combined powers will come when Jak fully controls all of his powers.

Darkening Light: Glad you liked it, and I'm trying to put in more battle inside the battle scene. Also thanks for the site, I'm going to use those names when elves refer to metal heads.

M-python-girl: Don't worry, I'll update til I finish the sorry.

waterbabe: Thanks.

Chibi Jak: Thank you sooo much for the advice, and read the Author's Note and it will clear it up, I hope. And LOL stands for laugh-out-loud, unless you were joking, then, heh… heh… I'm kind of slow if you haven't noticed. Heh.. heh…

Masmo: Don't worry, light powers are in store. And the wings will come when Jak can fully control both powers at the same time.

Dragonslegend86: Glad you like the idea, I had it in me for a long time, but just finally started to write it down.

Author's Note: READ THIS BECAUSE IT IS IMPORTANT. Okay, from now on when Dark Jak talks, it will be in between … and will be bold. When Light Jak talks, it will be in between … and will be normal font. This is to make your reading easier and also my typing.

Chapter 5: Attack

Death, gore, and blood everywhere. The cause: Jak. Torn, including all of the remaining troops, were terrified. Terrified and amazed. So much power, so much death. Jak was a killing machine. It looked like a hurricane blew through the forest. Trees destroyed, metal head corpses littering the ground, blood soaking the grass and rocks.

Jak had unleashed many powers never seen or even imagined before. Torn watched as the transformed Jak spun around and around, thus creating a tornado of dark eco. Jak stopped and pushed it toward a group of metal heads. All were thoroughly slaughtered.

Jak squatted and gathered dark eco from within that seemed to swirl around each of his claws. Then he smashed them together above his head and aimed it at the ground; a dark eco beam shot into the ground, them shot back out. But twenty feet away from Jak, killing fifteen metal heads caught in the blast and injuring countless others.

Torn felt an emotion he never felt since he was a new recruit in the Krimzon Guard. Fear. Jak was a killing machine. Would he be able to himself? Would he stop this destruction once the metal head threat was eliminated? Thinking it better to be safe than sorry Torn shouted an order to his troops.

"Weapons at the ready, if Jak suddenly attacks us, then-then shoot him."

Murmuring and whispers were present throughout the Freedom League, then guns were raised at simultaneously aimed at the transformed Jak.

Jak loved it. The power coursing through his veins. Death at his fingertips, blood on his chest. He loved it.

Jak continued to kill, all the while trying out newly acquired powers. His favorite was his ability to channel dark eco into orbs surrounding his hands, thus making his punches dissolve anything it touched. He called this his Dark Hands.

Jak's other powers included the Dark Eco beam, shooting a beam of eco at the ground and having it explode upward at whatever he wanted; the Dark Tornado, pretty self-explanatory; the Light Mist, Jak's ability to dissolve into a mist of white and reach unreachable places; and the Light Ball, an ability to gather a ball of light eco into his palms and send it into a group of metal heads thoroughly blinding them.

Jak used everyone of his powers on the metal head threat. And after a while his power was evident, all that was left of the metal heads were their bodies. Jak stopped. He turned to Freedom League, not much surprised at the sight of the barrels of their guns aimed at him. They were scared. To tell the truth, Jak, himself, was kind of scared. So much power, and in his blood lust, he almost had to restrain himself from killing the other elves.

Where were his other forms? Light and Dark, where did they go? The answer came from a burning sensation traveling throughout Jak's body. They were there. They had somehow combined into Jak. They truly were a part of Jak. But would they stay that way, or separate once Jak transformed into his normal self?

Jak smiled, which thoroughly unnerved the Freedom League troops. He could imagine Dark One's reply to that question. 'Well transform back and find out, dumbass.' Then Light One would of course have a statement along the lines of 'he's learning, cut him some slack.' Jak liked it when they argued. It helped add humor into Jak's life.

Jak had only spoke with them for a while, but in reality, he had known them since he gained his powers. They were like brothers to him. And Jak knew he would need their advice, and cynicism, in the coming battle with this monster of sin.

Jak looked around realizing that the Freedom League still had their guns aimed at him. He had spaced out for a couple of minutes. To stop the fear that was present in every pair of eyes of the troops, Jak transformed into his normal state. Which was painful to say the least.

When Jak transformed into this new form, he felt fire and ice coursing through his body. When he transformed back, he felt fire and ice course through his body also, but it was like it was leaving him.

When Jak was normal, he walked through the ranks of the Freedom League, who all visibly relaxed and lowered their weapons once he was normal.

A brave young soldier spoke up, "An honor to fight alongside you, sir." The statement was aimed at Jak.

Jak turned to the soldier. So naïve, he has no idea of war, thought Jak. "Honor is for ceremonies, to fight is a must. Keep that in mind soldier."

Jak surprised himself with the deepness of his reply.

Yeah, don't get used to it, Dark one put in.

Glad to see that your back, thought Jak sarcastically.

Jak walked from the battlefield and went to the platform that would take him back to the entrance of the agricultural section of the city. He had a lot of talking - or thinking, whichever works - to do with his two 'soul brothers.'

Keira was terrified. She was currently in her apartment (near her mechanical workshop) going over the events that had happened. An hour ago she saw a whole battalion of soldiers marching into the forest. She hoped Jak was alright. How could she just leave him like that?

No. She didn't leave him, he forced her to go. But it wasn't like she could do anything anyway.

Quit acting like this Keira, she mentally told herself. Jak has saved the world many times before, he'll be alright.

But then again, there were a lot of metal heads. Too many it seemed. That's the second full-scale attack that they have executed in just a week. They were getting reckless. What's up with that? Keira had to do something, she had to find out why the metal heads were so reckless.

She left her apartment and jumped onto a zoomer. She was heading to her father's house to find out an explanation to this new turn of events. If she couldn't help Jak in physical combat, then she'll sure as hell try to help him in any other way she could.

Borir was scared. He had the unfortunate job of telling their new leader of the failure in the attack of the mutated elf. He hated being a messenger.

Borir was an Alagam. One of the lowest ranked of the Hora'quan. He was the scorpion-like metal head. Borir shivered as he passed by a couple of Zeltir, who growled slightly at him. He hated the Zeltir. They were the leopard-like metal heads and were part of the elite class of the Hora'quan.

Though unknown to the elves of this world, the Hora'quan was a hierarchy. They were classified in ranks. The Alagam and Xec'ter's (the flying bug-like metal heads) made up the lowest class. Even the Birhom (the small jumping metal heads that jump non-stop) outranked them. They were the next class, along with the other small Hora'quan and made up the majority of the Hora'quan army.

In the elite class were the Zeltir, the Jucsent (the big metal heads who carried long blaster that could shoot and electrocute), the Hol'qa'norir (the huge crab-like metal heads with guns as arms), the Metano (the metapedes), and the Dir'roge (the massive dinosaur-like wasteland metal heads with huge cannos).

As an Alagam, Borir was a messenger for the Zeltir. He, along with many other Alagam, took the message to their leader. If the message was of bad news, as it was now, then many were not seen again. Borir was terrified.

Especially since their new leader had a short temper and lethal powers. Not a good combination if you were an Alagam.

Borir stopped at the entrance to their leader's quarters.

"What do you want Alagam," barked one of the Zeltir who guarded their leader's quarters.

"I-I wa-was sent to de-deliver th-this me-message to Ger," replied Borir in the Hora'quan language.

The Hora'quan language consisted of barks, clicks, and growls.

"Ger will want this message then," said the other Zeltir who also guarded the entrance. "Proceed." The pair of Zeltir's slouched over to their posts with the smooth agility of a large cat. Which they sort of were.

Borir paused before going into Ger's quarters. Then he slowly crawled inside and called out.

"My, my master, th-the high Ziron o-of the Zel-Zeltir sends th-this message."

"What is it," said a deep, grumbling voice that belong to Ger, the new Hora'quan king.

"Th-the cam-campaign a-against the mu-mutated elf has, has fa-failed, my master," Borir squeaked out.

"Failed," said Ger in a calm and dangerous voice. "Failed, have they. Leave, I have much pondering to do."

Borir couldn't believe what he had heard. He turned around and hastily left the chambers before Ger changed his mind. He was alive. Borir was alive!

Amazing, thought Borir. He was still alive.

Jak paced in his apartment in the newly rebuilt slums of Haven City. Anyone seeing him would think he was just pacing, but the truth was that he was having a conversation in his mind with his two 'soul brothers.'

So, thought Jak, you're telling me that this 'evil' in the form of a monster is going to be coming within a week or two?

Yes.

Shit.

I know, you have to warn the others to prepare for it's coming.

But hurry Jak, because their is a place where we must take you.

Where?

A place to train you Jak, your powers are not fully developed.

Wait, they're not fully developed? thought Jak trying to imagine how they can get even more powerful.

Trust me, they'll get pretty damn powerful, but it still won't compare to shit once the 'big bad thingy made of sin' comes.

Dark One is right Jak, even with your powers fully developed, it will be near impossible to defeat this monster.

Wou-wouldn't it be logical to just use light powers on it, I mean, this thing is made of evil, wouldn't my dark powers be feeding it.

Jak, just because something is dark does not mean it is evil. As in the case of your dark powers.

Yeah, in essence I'm evil, but you're using me for good, soooo, it sort of counterbalances it.

Uhh…

Don't think about it buddy, you'll just get confused. Cough, cough…. retard, cough, cough…

You're in my head fag, I can still hear you.

Oh, well………

Moving on, Jak, you must go now, warn the others. You'll need all the time you can get to train.

Jak grabbed a coat and left his apartment, he wondered where Keira was and even still was going over his feelings.

Ooooh, Jak's in l-

Shut it Dark!

It was time to think up of a way to find out how to attack this creature, before it attacked them.

Okay, sorry for the lateness, but I was replaying the series and just got Jak X, which is really fun.

I'll try and update quicker from now on.