As an author, I feel I have grown and improved with my work, and therefore felt the need to revise this story- I felt that the small chapter I had already wrote…well, it was hasty, some things sounded…amateur as far as the way I wrote it went. I'm sorry if you guys (people who were waiting for me to carry on with it) liked it the way it was- but I want to make it better, more understandable and for it to make sense.
So- this first chapter that I have now replaced…the chapter I originally wrote- Kagome's first day at school- is now replaced by a chapter that took place before Kagome arrived at the new school. It's about where Kagome originally lived, her life before that time- in America, with her twin brother and father. Her mother is basically involved with the siblings in some tragic, horrifying past- enough so that Kagome can barely stand her- while Souta is entrapped in their mother's sickeningly sweet innocent act, and starts turning against Kagome.
However- Kagome, and the rest of the group are yes, still Goth, Kikyo is still an evil whore but not Kagome's sister, however, but a distant relative. Inuyasha is still bad-boy of the group, a little rough around the edges, but strangely at ease with Kagome, and they gradually get together as the story goes on. In this story, Inuyasha's mother is alive and the only weakness Inuyasha has (Ooh, big softie!), and Kagome's character- well, she's shy at times, kind of cute, sometimes vulnerable, sometimes very strong willed. At some point, I'll darken her character- there will be angst in here- as well as comedy, so don't worry.
As the story goes on, I must hint to you- Kagome learns that her mother's side of the family is not entirely human. At some point, Naraku shows up, secret pasts are revealed, threats are made, there's trouble- I intend for this story to get just a bit complex.
Well, that's all I really have to say about this story, until I think otherwise- so read on!