Ok guys this story is so close to deletion it's just not funny. It really is starting to piss me off.
It seems really stupid now. I mean the plot seems ok but the way it's written… I feel stupid.
The chapters are short and it makes me mad that they're so short.
Something unexplainable about just shouts 'retarded' every time I re- read it.
If someone could find a way to prove me wrong so I'll keep going plz do. (Unless you guys don't care. Then it will be gone ASAP.) Other than that it just seems stupid.