Okay, this is going to be the "revamp" of my first ever fanfic, "The Other Side"
For starters, I changed some of their personalities...Goku is still going to be immature, goofy, and naive...actually, the only person that changed is Keri. She's still a sweetheart, at least to everyone except her brother...
So, you can sit back, read, comment, and all that good stuff. By now you know how it works.
Btw, I'm broke therefore proving there is no way I could own DBZ
It was a peaceful day at the Otsuka houshold, the birds were chirping, the sky was blue, and the weather was perfect; needless to say, it felt as if nothing could go wrong. Of course, with two hyperactive 16 year old twins, disaster was brewing.
"Hey Keri! Come here, you have got to see this, it's amazing", screamed a handsom Saiyan by the name of Kakarato. A smile spread across his face as he ran throughout the house, his wild hair flying about his head. "What are you DOING! Hurry up and get DOWN HERE!"
Believe it or not, Kakarato's twin sister, Keri, was not listening to a word he said. As far as she was concerned, nothing Kaka-chan had to say was of importance, all he did was talk about training anyway. She continued to sit there, twirling her spiky ponytail throughout her fingers as Kakarato finally made it to her upstairs bedroom.
"You know, for once you could actually acknowledge the fact that I exist, it would be nice."
"Hmph, by acknowledging you that would start to make you think that you're important, and guess what boogar butt. You're not." Leave it to Keri and her shrewd attitude to put someone down, but hey, as the older out of the two, she had to live up to the older sibling code. Not that 5 minutes really counts for anything, but to Keri, it meant the world.
"Your loss then, I actually came up here to show you something, but if you want to be such a stuck up, annoying, waste of air...fine." With that Kakarato promptly turned around and proceeded to walk out of the door. Keri didn't notice the smirk on his face, because if she did he probably would have had the lamp thrown at his head, but she instead decided to follow. There was no way he was going to get the last word, and her stubbornness was exactly what he was counting on.
Kakarato hopped around the yard, practically bouncing around like a school girl, he had something to show Keri all right. Not more than 10 minutes later they stopped in an area at the farthest reaches of their property. Seeing that everyone was way too lazy to come back here (with the exception of Goku), it was pretty much a new sight to Keri.
She gasped as she realized that she was surrounded by roses. Some were red, some were pink, and some were even blue; but none of them caught her attention like the gold rose growing right near the stream. Keri slowly crept closer to the flower, marveling at its beauty, unknowing to the creeping of her brother behind her.
"Oh Kaka-chan, thank you so much for bringing me here," she said as her eyes welled up with tears. "I always thought you were an evil rodent from hell, but maybe there is something good about you after all..." She continued to kneel in front of the flower, inhaling its scent, when out of nowhere a sharp kick to her romp sent her flying.
"Why you stupid son of a B...", Keri yelled as she flew headfirst into the speeding current. Kakarato wasted no time running like a maniac, knowing all too well that when Keri managed to get out of that river, his ass was hers.
Well, there goes the first chapter. I know it might have been a tad slow, I have to get back into the habit of this writing thing...I haven't written anything besides formal papers and journal entries in YEARS.
But anywho, don't worry, next chapter you will be introduced to the rest of the Z gang, and the love thing isn't far off...yea, it is a Goku and ChiChi story, with a tad of the other couples...I think you just need a little personality explanation, thus, this chapter.
-Nisha