I am actually keeping up with this updating business, I know, wow...so thankies to all who reviewed so far, I appreciate it!
Once again, Toriyama + copyright Dragonball
Kakarato continued to run through the town, the wind streaming through his hair, and his cheeks turning bright red from exertion. Somehow, despite the ten minutes it took for Keri to get out of the river, she had managed to catch up and was only a few seconds behind her twin brother. Sparing just a couple seconds to look over his shoulder, Kakarato glanced back and witnessed the scariest thing he's ever seen in his 16 years of life.
Keri's face was a bright tomato red, not from exertion like Kakarato, but from red hot rage. In her left had she carried a metal pole, who knows where she found it, but she was carrying it nonetheless. Her eyes didn't even look remotely Saiyan anymore; they had some kind of glint that could only be possessed by the mentally crazed, and the people who claimed they were sane, like Keri. The minute she saw that her brother was looking at her, she started to growl, a fierce and terrifying sound emitting from her throat and making her whole body vibrate with her hatred. That was all Kakarato needed to see, he knew his sister had issues, but yet he still hadn't learned to leave her crazy behind alone.
"You had better run, you bastard!" Keri yelled as she waved her pole around her head, "There is no way in hell you're getting away from me this time!"
If she had been in her right mind, she would have realized that she was loosing her prey. If there was one thing Keri ever credited Kakarato with, it was that he wasn't stupid. She didn't notice that she was circling around the town, and that she was slowly making her way towards Kakarato's best friend, Krillian's house, but instead only continued to howl, roar, and curse the day her brother was born.
Taking a sharp right, Kakarato ran like he never had before, and rounded into the backyard of someone's house.
"Hurry up! Open the friggin door, I haven't got all day Krillian!" Kakarato screamed as he pounded on the back door of his best friend's house. Krillian continued to take his merry time getting there, Keri and Kakarato fought all day, everyday, it's not like she was going to kill him or anything.
"You act like Keri's never beaten the crap out of you before, calm down." replied Krillian as he opened the door, "She's just temperamental, it'll blow over in a few minutes."
"HA!" Kakarato chimed as he walked into the humungo living room, "You would think that after the sixty million years that you've known her, you'd know that she's not all there in the head. I mean, who gets pissed off just because she got pushed into a rushing current with brand spanking new, expensive shoes on. She's just not normal I tell ya."
"Something's wrong with the both of you", Krillian mumbled as Keri screamed on his back porch.
Even though I hated this chapter in the original, I found that I couldn't exactly delete it. But yea, since this was such a short crappy chapter I decided to give you two for the price of one. At the moment, well, the moment after this moment XD I'm going to start working on the next chapter, which finally gets to one of my favorite characters, CHICHI! I doubt I'll have it posted toninght, I'm getting really, really sleepy, but hopefully it'll be out tomorrow, or the next day...most likely the next day, mom's b-day is tomorrow
It's really sad that the one thing I hate most about books is the beginning when it's slow and has no point...well, I'm doing the exact same thing. I can't win snort