Well here's the next chapter.
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for reviewing. Thanx guys!
Again I really appreciate reviews and I encourage everyone to please r/r! It really doesn't take that much to write a simple "hey nice story" or "your story sucks" does it? It really makes my day. And I just figured out how to make it so it accepts anonymous reviews, so if you were trying before and it didn't work, it does now.
A/n the stuff in italics is there thoughts.
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Chapter 2- "Your daughter?"
"Hey Lorelai" Luke said walking over to her. "I didn't know that you worked here"
"Umm… yeah. I uh… I work here. Yep" Lorelai said, trying to put Rory in her car seat and hide her from view without Luke noticing.
"Who's that?" Luke asked, gesturing towards Rory.
"Crap! He noticed. Now what do I do?"
Lorelai sighed. She wasn't going to lie to him. "That is Rory" she answered simply.
"Oh?" Luke said in a tone that said "And she is?"
"Rory is my, umm, my, my-" Lorelai stuttered "Rory is my daughter"
Luke looked surprised. "Your daughter?" He exclaimed "wow"
"Yeah" Lorelai said, looking down at her shoes. "And to think, I really like this guy. He'll never go out with me now."
"O.K. so you weren't expecting that. But she's so pretty and, oh God! Look at those eyes. O.K. get a hold of your self Danes!"
Lorelai shifted uncomfortably.
"So Lorelai," Luke said "I don't mean to pry, but, uh, where's her…"
Lorelai looked at him confused. "Oh you mean her dad?" she asked finally catching on.
Now it was Lukes turn to stare at his shoes. "Ummm… Yeah"
"Oh he's long gone." Lorelai answered relieved. "Asking about he dad could be good. Maybe he does like me."
"Oh" Luke said, a little too cheerfully. "So she is still free"
"Lorelai, umm, would you, maybe, sometime, only if you want to-" Luke sputtered "would you like to go out for dinner. With me."
"YES!"
"Sure, maybe" Lorelai answered, not wanting to sound too eager... "I have Sunday's off. Or I get off at 6pm on Saturday."
"How's Saturday night, around 7?"
"That sounds great." She told him, smiling.
"God that smile"
"O.K. I'll pick you up." Luke suggested.
"Umm…O.K' Lorelai said, deciding she might as well tell him that she's living in a potting shed, now before he finds out somewhere else. "Actually, I'm staying in the potting shed. Here."
"Oh?" Luke asked. "O.K."
"Yeah, I uh ran away from home and this is where I ended up. Mia gave me a job and a place to stay." She told him truthfully.
"Oh" Luke said. "How come you ran away from home?"
"My parents wanted me to marry Rory's father and, well, basically they wanted to control me. I didn't want Rory to grow up in the same kind of home that I did."
"Not a happy childhood?" Luke asked, sympathetically.
"No." Lorelai answered. "Let's just say my parents are rich snobs"
"Enough said" Luke agreed.
They smiled at each other. "Well, I better get back to work." Lorelai told him.
"Yeah. See you!" Luke said.
"Bye!"
I have a date with Luke! And he knows that I'm a mom!
I have a date with Lorelai! So what if she's a mother, you can deal with that. Can't you?
Mia walked over and asked "what was that all about?"
"I'm going on a date with Luke!" Lorelai squealed "And, he knows I'm a mom and still wants to go out with me!"
"That's great" Mia told her "but speaking of being a mom, what about Rory?
"Oh I never thought of that" Lorelai admitted "I guess she could come with me…"
"Oh, no. I'll watch her for you" Mia said and smiled.
"Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!" Lorelai screamed.
"Now get back to work" Mia told Lorelai. 'Or I'll change my mind"
"Yes ma'am" Lorelai said, saluting.
Mia chuckled. (A/n chuckled is a fun word. Much more fun than laugh, or giggle. Well maybe not giggle 'cuz that's a pretty fun word to…)
"I'm all done Mia" Luke called.
"Thanks Lucas" Mia called back "I really appreciate it"
Luke smiled and waved, as he passed Lorelai.
She returned the gesture.
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That week went be very slowly for both Lorelai and Luke. Lorelai kept busy by trying to catch up on all her school work. It was October, so she missed the first month or so of school. Never mind the stuff she missed from grade 10. Luke was a senior that year, and kept busy playing baseball, with his friends Adam, Sean and Nick. (A/n all the boys names are from a band! Lol! Can you guess which ones? Buh buh buh!)
"Oooo! Lukey's got a girlfriend" Nick teased, when Luke told them about Lorelai "Luke and Lorelai sitting in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-"
Luke punched him the face. "Shut-up!"
"You could have just said that" Nick whimpered.
Sean and Adam just laughed. "That will teach you Nick" Adam said.
Nick glared at them all.
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On Saturday, Lorelai was so happy and excited, that she could barely stop smiling. Finally 6 o' clock came and she went to the potting shed (a.k.a. her home) to get ready. She changed her clothes, brushed her hair and put on a little make-up. She packed Rory's diaper bag, and took her over to Mia's.
"I want to thank you again for looking after her for me" Lorelai said to Mia.
"Oh, it's no problem" Mia told her, talking Rory from Lorelai. "Now you go back, and wait for Luke."
Lorelai smiled, said good-bye and did exactly as Mia said.
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So, what do you think? Good? Bad? Should I dig a tunnel to China and change my name and identity and hid forever? God, I hope that it's not that bad! I tried to make it longer, just for you Maria14! I hope I did O.K. I hope you don't mind me babbling in the middle, 'cuz that's just what I do. I babble. A lot!
So, about tonight's episode, (if you haven't seen it yet don't read this) KIRK IS DESTURBING! I'm gonna have nightmares! I'm only 13, I should have to see this ahhhhhhhh! But the rest was awesome, in my opinion. I love that Richard and Emily, finally found out that Lorelai is telling the truth. I really hope that Rory doesn't marry Logan "Hamburger" (I love that!") I really don't like him any more. He's funny and all, but he's not right for Rory. Maybe Jess will come and break them up. We can only hope!