Title: Deltora's Sins
Summary: See first chapter.
Disclaimer: Same as the summary.
Notes: The next chapter has been completed and will be up tomorrow.
Words: 101
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Tora, a city carved with magic from a mountain of white marble. A city without crack, without seam, without fault. A place of peace not passion. By magic protected both from weather and evil.
It provided its people with all their needs. Tora was perfect and as such its people grew to believe in them self and lost all interest they had had in anything outside of their walls.
The Torans saw the power and peace their city gave them and wanted nothing more.
So when requests for aid came they where refused.
Thus Tora fell to its own people's pride.
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Thanks to every one who reads this.
This chapter's dedication goes to my first reviewer
Obsidian Crystal
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you think this story has potential, fell free to make stories of any of the ideas I might tough on because I won't be exploring them in depth, that also go for anyone else who reads this.
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