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Chapter 2: Was it only a dream?
Torn yelped and covered his eyes. "Ahh!"
"Torn? What're you doing here?" Ashelin's incredulous voice asked.
Torn blinked a few times, trying to get his sight back. "Uhhh," he said stupidly. "Uhh, sorry, must've taken a wrong turn or something!" He fled back the way he came.
"What? But you know the city like the back of your hand-" Ashelin began, but Torn was already out of sight.
Torn gasped for air in one of the many side alleys around the city. He couldn't believe he didn't ask her! He mentally berated himself, asking how he could have been so stupid.
He stalked down the alley, heading back to Freedom Headquarters. He used a different route than usual, because he didn't want to get on any of the busy streets right now. However, up ahead, he heard voices… No, he was not going insane. He was hearing actual voices.
"That was seriously good," A familiar and not-to-welcome voice said. "You got the hottest girl in Haven City to kiss you! You've got all the luck, man!"
"Hello, I don't know why she did it or not," said the also familiar companion's voice, known as none other than Jak Mar and he was sounding slightly annoyed. "Yeah, sure, having Ashelin kiss you is nice. I suppose you could say I'm lucky."
Torn's mouth was a little 'O' (by now both authors are laughing for the fun of torturing him.) He couldn't believe it! Ashelin kissed Jak, with Daxter watching? He thought to himself
His mind was just repeating one thing: OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!
He stumbled blindly back the way he came, for the second time that day.
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The two heroes continued their conversation. "Like I said, you could consider me lucky, but I've already got a girl. Ashelin and I already agreed that it was only excitement, nothing more," Jak admonished Daxter.
Daxter grinned. "Yeah, but still," he exclaimed. "If it was me-"
"-Tess would kill you," finished Jak, grinning.
Daxter sighed. "Yes," he admitted gloomily.
Ashelin had been left staring out the open door after Torn had made a run for it- or, lost his way. She had really hoped he was coming to visit her. But he was gone so fast, it was almost like a dream…
She sighed. If only, she thought, he'd tell her he liked her. But that was a dream… She didn't really know if he liked her or not, though she knew SHE liked him. Maybe she should tell him, instead of him tell her… yeah, that might work!
She grinned to herself, then decided to work on formation tactics and two prolonged attacks…By the time morning rolled around, the meeting appeared to have been just that...a dream.
animedragongirl- Yeah, well, some of my classic stupid humor in here! If you know O. Henry, then, well, there you go.
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animedragongirl-…okay. Never mind.
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