GoodMorningBeautiful2005: That was a very good chapter you wrote.
Animedragongirl: Thank-you.
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: We also received quite a few reviews too.
Animedragongirl: Yeah, I know...
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: I get really excited when we get reviews is all...
Animedragongirl: I see...Well it is exciting when you get your very first reviews on a story...(begins thinking back to when she first received a review on her very first story)
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Okay let's answer the reviews.
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wierd one 99999: We're glad you like our story...The next chapter may not be up until after Christmas or New Years Eve.
EJ Amber: Yeah, we saw that after we submitted it...Though it was already too late.
Your Biggest Fan: I'm glad you like it...The story will get funnier before it ends.
Silver Horror: We're glad you like this story so much.
randomcat23: Acually the last chapter will be longest chapter.
East Coastie1500: Was this chapter updated fast enough? We update weekly actually...(smiles)
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GoodMorningBeautful2005: So without further a due...
Both: Here's Together Forever
Chapter 3: Torn Receives Advice...
As Torn entered the Naughty Ottsel he noticed that the rat wasn't here...Though Jinx and Tess were here. "Hey Torn." Jinx greeted as he spotted the Commander.
"Jinx." Torn said as he sat on one of the bar stools next to him. Tess came up to Torn and was about to ask him what he wanted when he answered the unspoken question, "The usual Tess." he said. As Tess began mixing the two alcoholic toxins together, you could hear a definite fizzing sound. "Jinx, I need advise from you." Torn began.
"Advise?" questioned Jinx, "On what?"
"How were you able to tell Keira that you loved her?" Torn asked, "And ask her to marry you?"
Jinx stared at Torn like he a just grown a new head or something, then the look turned into on of awe. "Let me guess..." he began, "Its Ashelin." Torn nodded. "Well...I never really told Keira that I loved her until the day I asked her to marry me. According to her, even though I never said it, she always knew I loved her. I'm sure Ashelin knows too, she's a smart girl."
"Oh." Torn replied
"So when are you going to ask her?" Tess asked, deciding now was the time to enter the conversation.
"Huh?" Torn asked stupidly and then looked at Tess.
"You see Torn," Tess began, "You need to ask her at the right time."
Torn looked at Jinx and Jinx nodded. "Listen to her buddy," Jinx said seriously, "If it weren't for her great advise, I wouldn't be getting married to the hottest mechanic around these here parts."
"You mean, she's the only reason you two are getting married in four months?" Torn asked
"Yepper." Jinx replied with a smile. Torn turned back to Tess to listen to her.
"Now Ashelin's birthday is coming up very soon right?" Tess questioned
"Yeah." Torn replied suspiciously
"Good." she began again. "This is what you do. Take her to Al Clame, I'll reserve a place under your last name, Mr. Gruman. Do you know her favorite sang?"
"My December." he answered, "I think."
"I'll have a band play it for you." Tess said
"Why?" he asked
"Because like it or not, you're going to dance with her." Tess said, "And don't you dare try to get out of it." Torn nodded, "Next, after you eat, you're to take her to the balcony at the restaurant, where you'll purpose."
"How can I? I can't even say the words." Torn reasoned in frustration.
"Easy." Tess said, "you'll have a small mic in your ear... I'll tell you what to day...Okay?"
"Sounds good." Jinx reasoned, "Well Torn, buddy?"
Torn had one of his I'm-thinking-don't bother-me expressions plastered on his face. "Sounds like a plan." he said, "It just better work."
"Good." said Tess, "Now you and I need to go shopping."
"What for?" Torn asked
"You need a nice suit for the date." she replied
"Why?" he asked as he followed her to where his zoomer was parked. This is going to be a long day. He thought as he started the zoomer. He had no idea how right he was.
GoodMorningBeautiful2005: How was that? I had to bring Tess into the story. I received a private message from Up-High say that I had to. I hope you all liked it.
Animedragongirl: You have to love Tess. She's so cute and sdorible. She's going to drive Torn crazy in the next chapter.
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