Sorry for the wait. I know its been awhile since I've done a chapter. I had to arrange the story in the way I wanted it so, sorry. Also, PLEASE REVIEW MY STORY. I've had only 1 review so far, and I don't know if ANYBODY is reading my story. It's up here for you to read, you know. As for the character profiles chapter, FORGET I EVER CAME UP WITH IT.

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Chptr 4: TWO SHINOBUS?! Pt. 1 or My Yami and I.

Yami Shinobu stands up and says: It's good to be free from my normal self! It's just so stuffy in there!

All are stunned to see the second Shinobu walking around chatting animatedly to everyone. Kaoru manages to snap out of it and says: How is that possible?! TWO Shinobu-sempais?

Su suddenly goes into deep thoughts, and says: Maybe she is Shinomu, but isn't…

May: You mean, she's an evil clone?!

Su: No, maybe she's just the thoughts, emotions, memories, and feelings that she kept suppressed!

Yami Shinobu: You're right, Su! However, I am merely and extension of those things! My real self still has them!

Suddenly she is beside Brandon, twirling her finger on his chest.

Yami Shinobu: And I can tell you this, Brandon-honey, she and I REALLY like you…

Both Brandon and Normal Shinobu blush heavily and Shinobu says: Auuuuuu!!! What do you think you're doing, telling him that!

Yami Shinobu: Oh, nothing harmful…

She then proceeds to grab Brandon's butt, and lustily says: Ooooh, such a nice ass…

Brandon freaks out, yelling: Gyah! You're not supposed to do that! What are you, a lecheress? Oh…

He then realizes that if she did that, then Shinobu might've wanted to do that too.

Yami Shinobu: I can tell you, BOTH of us have wanted to do that for about half a day now!

Shinobu: Auuuuu! Nooooo! Don't tell him that!

While Shinobu was freaking out (and providing a handy distraction), Yami Shinobu took the opportunity to activate a smoke bomb.

Motoko: Dammit, Ura-I mean- You other Shinobu!

Ema: She must be Shinobu's Yami!

Sarah: Great! Give her a title, why don't you?!

Himeko: This is crazy!!!

Kaoru: Not as crazy as you are!! You're into that S&M thing!!

Himeko: How did you- I mean, NO I'M NOT!!!

As the smoke cleared, everyone managed to settle down, except for Su, who was obsessively checking to see if her gadgets were still in her room.

Su: Guys! I've got bad news!

Peter: Great! What?!

Su: She took some booby traps and a bunch of raw materials I was going to use!

May: So, what should we do?! Find her?!

Su: Yes, in teams, just to be safe!

Su then assigns everyone into search teams.

Su: Team "A" will be me, Sarah, and Ema! Team "B" will be Kaoru, May, Motoko, and Himeko! That leaves Peter, Brandon, and Shinobu as "C"!

Peter: Heh! The same as her bra size! How ironic!

Brandon and Shinobu both pummel Peter.

Brandon: You little perv…

Peter: Oww… that was mean…

Brandon: If you would get your head out of the gutter, then I wouldn't beat the crap out of you!

Shinobu: Brandon's okay, but why must I go with Peter, too?

Su: We are put into equally strong teams. "A" has me and Sarah…

Sarah: I know several martial arts, so I'll be fine.

Su: …"B" has Motoko and Himeko!

Brandon: Okay… I understand a little more now, but again, why my little brother?

Su: 'Cause he's as smart as I am!

Himeko: I'm not so sure about that, Su…

Peter: Shut up!

Brandon: Enough! Let's find this Yami and capture her before anything else crazy happens!

All: Alright.

Group A heads down to the basement, group B scouts the second floor, and "C" checks the first floor. As group B enters the landlord's room, they come across something unusual.

Motoko: Brandon's clothes are on the floor. How messy…

May: He did change clothes before coming down to breakfast…

Kaoru: Speaking of breakfast, I didn't eat much. I'm getting hungry again…

Himeko: Wait! I heard something!

Motoko: May, Kaoru, stay back! It could be her!

Motoko and Himeko slowly enter the room, checking where the source of the noise is coming from. Suddenly…

Motoko: Yeeeee?!

Himeko: What is it, Motoko-sempai?

Motoko goes into a dead faint, having been surprised by none other than Tama-chan!

Himeko sweatdrops: You'd think she would have gotten over that fear by now…

Just then, Himeko is gassed in the face and passes out before she hits the floor.

Kaoru: Waagh! May, what do we do?!

May: Find my brother's or Su's team. Come on!

They begin to race downstairs, but a trap door opens beneath them, and they fall into a sleeping gas chamber.

Yami Shinobu: Hohohohohoho!

Group A at this point has finished examining most of Peter's lab. As they take a rest, Ema tries to come up with some way to get rid of Yami Shinobu.

Ema: Su, maybe you could seal her in another dimension!

Sarah: Nah, Su's just discovered dimensional physics. She wouldn't mess with something she hasn't perfected yet…

Su: Maybe I should make you and Peter my assistants, Sarah!

Sarah: No way! Not with that pervert! Maybe if I was by myself…

Ema: Guys! I found a hidden room!

They go to investigate the room and Ema stumbles over something.

Ema: Oooomph! Owwww…What did I slip on?

Sarah: Lemme see…Holy crap! They're porno mags!

Su: Hehe…Peter is and even bigger pervert than I thought!

Ema gets back up, turns on the light switch to the room, and gasps at what she sees.

Ema: Guys, I think we have a problem…

Su and Sarah turn around and see Motoko, Himeko, May, and Kaoru in giant individual tubes filled with bluish-green liquid.

Su: What the?! They copied off of my technology!!

Sarah: What are they doing in there?!

Yami Shinobu's voice comes in from a loudspeaker: Hohohoho! I'm doing a little experiment on them! I've discovered they have a significant amount of what I call "Love-Love Power", and I wanted to see if I can manipulate it!

Su, Sarah, and Ema are shocked to hear the dastardly plan.

Sarah: Why?!

Yami Shinobu: Because I have plans for ALL of you….

Yami Shinobu flicks a switch in the control room, a false door closes behind the girls, and sleeping gas fills the room.

Su: Ohhh no…..we fell…into a…trap….

Peter suddenly gets a peculiar feeling.

Peter: Something is wrong…we need to check on the others…

Brandon: I'm worried too…Let's go see Su…

Just outside of the "secret room", Shinobu sees two watches: One red, the other light blue, addressed to her and Brandon.

Shinobu: Hey, I found something!

Upon closer examination, the red one says "for Brandon", and the light blue one says "for Shinomu". Both read underneath, "By Su :3".

Shinobu: All these years and she still gets my name wrong. I'm starting to think she does this on purpose…

Peter: Say, Brandon, don't these look like V-watches from-

Brandon: You're right! Shinobu, put on the light blue one, quick! Su just gave us some major power!

Shinobu: Alright…

Suddenly, the false wall opens up.

Yami Shinobu: Ohohohoho! No matter what Su leaves you, you'll fail! Soon I will be queen of the world, and Brandon will be my subservient king!

Brandon sweatdrops: Shinobu, I had no idea you had these thoughts in your head…

Shinobu sweatdrops: Eehhh… I guarantee you, I don't think about those things. In fact, I think she's her own personality now.

So, how do you like this story so far? Yami Shinobu is quite the devious vixen, isn't she? Lol Part 2 of this bracket will be up as soon as possible, but I'm going to have to do a rough draft first. Anyways, until then, EVERYBODY FACEFAULT! AND PLEEEEEEESE REVIEW!!!!!!