Disclaimer: I do not own LotR. Period.
BellaRu- I'll get to the description of them (somehow) Promise. I apologize for my dialogue I will omit that from future chapters. I also appologize for the elaborance in the wrong spots and not enough in others. All in all Thank you I appreciate the pointers very help ful thank you. lots of hugs
TopazOwl- as you wish
Amusing-cheeses- I apologize, I think I only used the POV's to keep my self on track, I will be sure to omit them in later chapters. I haven't exactly read the dictionary but I will try not to use one word to many times. Promise. I didn't exactly pass English class and I'm barely learning the use of a semi colon and colon again. I know I can do a better story, as soon as I get into the practice of writing it down. I have no idea what a beta reader is.
ChirikoFan- You are SO right! Go you!
I'm terribly sorry if the chapters are short but I try to update as constantly as possible and when I type it from my note book I tend to cut things that I didn't need out thus making them shorter. Oh well I'll work harder. (and I know it doesn't exactly work but I haven't figured out how the orcs were in Lorien yet)
Haldir looked at the person that the orcs had been chasing and saw a young woman with shoulder length auburn hair in strange clothes that had the air of being extremely tall yet she was just under his shoulder.
She had stood there watching them fight which had surprised him he had expected her to run away while the orcs were distracted, she blinked at them owlishly with a dazed look on her face.
His eyebrow went up as she reached over her shoulder; he winced when she basically ripped the arrow out of her shoulder without making a sound. She stared at the bloody arrow as if fascinated by it. Haldir opened his mouth to question her and she collapsed into a pile.
Haldir ran over to her with a couple of others right behind him, he turned her over and breathed a sigh of relief when he saw her chest rise and fall telling him she was alive.
He looked up sharply when one of the others gasped in shock and saw pointed ears.
"Get my horse," he commanded, "I'll take her to the city." He gently gathered her up into his arms and waited for them to bring his horse. He handed her to another elf and climbed upon the horse then gathered her back into his arms holding her as if she was terribly fragile.
Haldir sped into the beautiful elven city calling for healers and slid off his horse gracefully with the girl in his arms. He helped the healers take her to the infirmary not wanting to leave her feeling an attachment to her and the need to protect her.
The healers forced him to leave so they could dress her wounds; he paced nervously in front of her door impatient to hear if she would be OK after her encounter with the orc weapons and poison.
Finally they let him in; the news wasn't good; she had exhausted herself trying to keep ahead of the orcs so she had no energy left to heal from the wound on her shoulder. He stayed by her bed after that for days afterward watching her toss in a feverish dream.
Adrianna sat up looking and rubbing her temples. She stood up totally at loss of her whereabouts and started to wander around cautiously, to make sure she didn't run into something she didn't want to.
After a small amount of time she came upon an unpaved road that was more beautiful than any road she had ever seen. She stood staring in awe at the beautiful scenery that surrounded her. 'This is a nice dream' she thought walking slowly down the road and looking around trying to see everything at once.
Suddenly she felt something grab her from behind and cover her mouth. She struggled against the grip that held her then stopped when some dirty men appeared in front of her. 'Oh no! This sooo not good!' she struggled againto no avail, 'I know I can use those self defense techniques Arielle taught me!' A man who appeared to be the leader grinned wickedly at her showing rotten teeth. She wrinkled her nose as the smell of the men wafted over her giving her nausea.
"Well what have we caught in our trap this time boys," asked the leader swaggering up to her, "An elf maiden wandering alone? We'll fetch a hefty price for you..." he muttered grinning when she struggled. 'Come one inch closer I dare you,' she thought maliciously and glared at him. "Feisty aren't you?" He stepped closer too her grinning.
She took her chance and kicked him in the groin then stomped on her assailant's instep causing him to drop his hands. As soon as her mouth was free she started shrieking like a banshee and turned kicking him in the groin too. Another man grabbed her and she elbowed him in the gut breaking from his grip, then suddenly something big ran straight into her knocking the wind out of her, stopping her screaming and causing a small shock.
She collapsed under the weight twisting slightly and saw the leader had tackled her from behind in desperation to keep her from running. The man stayed on top of her as they bound her hands and feet and stuck something nasty into her mouth to serve as a gag. She had managed one more shriek before they had gagged her and the leader backhanded her then put a blind fold on her as she gasped in pain from the blow.
Legolas' head shot up as a shriek rang across the valley; he turned to Aragorn who had also heard it, "That was no animal Aragorn." And in silent agreement they sped up into a run heading for the source of the noise.
They galloped into the small clearing just in time to see a big man haul a young elf woman to her feet. Seeing as she was bound and gagged they figured she wasn't there willingly.
Aragorn galloped forward with no hesitation yelling and swinging his sword causing the group of men to scatter; just behind him Legolas swooped down and snatched the elf girl from the leader's hands.
Knowing they were out numbered they sped right through the group of slavers and headed straight to Rivendell.
Horribly short I know but I'm working on a short time space. R&R please I'm open to writing tips seeing as how this is my first fic. I haven't exactly studied the elven language so I don't think there'll be much Elven tongue until later chapters.