Chapter One
"No, no, no," Bentley moaned. The Guru had just come and
attempted to heal Sly. However, he had barely any success. Sly was still in a coma, and that was the way things were. Bentley sighed and wondered how things happened….
The facts were: Panda King had betrayed them, mortally injured Sly, broke the rest of the Fiendish Five out of jail, and found and employed Arpeggio to help Raleigh create a body for Clockwerk. They succeeded, and created a new hate chip besides. And Sly was in a coma. Things looked bleak.
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Meanwhile, a jaguar ran across the roof of the Cooper gang hideout. Nimbly, he avoided the lasers and sliced through the triple-padlock hatch. Jumping through the lasers, he quickly sidestepped the flamethrowers and bypassed the traps. At last, he reached his destination.
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Bentley quietly rolled into the room where Sly lay. When he saw him, he shuddered at the amount of damage that had been done. Sly, by the looks of it, was near death. And that was with the help the Guru had done! Bentley sighed and walked out. As he did, a jaguar with a strange weapon dropped in front of him and said "Hello, Bentley. I believe I can help".
End of chapter One.
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