This is my first WAT Story so constructive critism welcome :)
The team discover more than they bargined for when the investigate the dissapearance of a young woman. Some people fall back in love while other couples fall apart. Possible JS
TEARS AND RAIN
Chapter 1: Mysterious Girl
Danny walked into his office, just like any other day. He listened to the familiar voices, talking and shouting. He looked around and seen the white board, filled with writing and pictures. He looked around once again and sat at his desk, pulling off his coat.
"Hey Danny" shouted Jack over the noise of the office
Danny stood up and walked towards the board where his boss stood.
"Yeah?"
"This is Maria Lopez, aged 20, she went missing last night after meeting a friend at a bar."
"Who reported her missing?"
"Her parents, she still lives at home…Sam and I are going to check her room, I want you and Martin to go to the bar downtown, check it out. Apparently its she visits the bar a lot."
Danny walked towards Martin who stood at the door.
They walked towards the busy bar; the smell of alcohol and smoke met them as they stepped through the door.
"We don't open till 4" moaned young woman standing cleaning glasses.
"Hi…I'm special agent Danny Taylor and this is Special Agent Martin Fitzgerald"
"Oh…how can I help you two then?" she said nervously.
"A girl went missing last night, Maria Lopez, we were wondering if you know her, she comes in here a lot." Martin held up the picture of the girl.
"We have a lot of girls that come it here…I wouldn't know anyone pacific"
"So you don't recognize her?"
She shook her head.
"Ok then, are you the owner miss…? "
"Jennifer Collins…No, Mr Roberts isn't here…he's out…"
"Ok then have you got any security cameras in here or outside?"
"Yeah, I'll get the tapes…"
She disappeared, for a moment and returned holding a tape.
"That's all we got…"
"Thanks for your help Miss Collins, we'll be in touch."
They walked out of the bar. Martin stopped and looked around.
"She's hiding something."
"What?" asked Danny
"I don't know but I'm going to find out…"
They got into the car and drove off.
"We got some security footage of the bar last night." Martin informed Jack
"Ok, did you get any witnesses?"
"Well, no…There was this barmaid, said she didn't know her, but she seemed suspicious. The bar doesn't open till 4 so she was the only one there."
"Watch the security footage see of you can spot Maria and see what the barmaids up too as well."
They came back an 10 minutes later and handed the tapes to Jack.
"Well?" asked Jack
"There's nothing on the tapes." Complained Martin "I knew that barmaid was up to something"
"Maybe she gave us the wrong tapes?" Danny answered
"I don't think so…"
"Ok then Sam and I will go down to the bar, watch this barmaid and see if she's up to something"
Jack and Sam sat at a table in the bar watching Jennifer chat to the customers.
"I'm going to get another drink you want anything?" Jack stood up.
"No, I'm fine." She smiled at him as he walked towards the bar.
"What can I get you?"
"Another beer please"
"You seem familiar" smiled Jennifer putting the beer on the bar.
"Really I don't usually drink round here."
Jennifer smiled but was interrupted.
"Jennifer! Jennifer!" Someone shouted from the other side of the bar.
"Sorry" She rushed over to two men sitting at a table. Jack watched as she stood and argued with them quietly. One of the men grabbed her wrist; she pulled away sharply and walked towards the bar.
"What do you think that was about?" Sam asked Jack as he sat down at the table.
"I don't know…"
"Did she say anything at the bar?"
"She said I look familiar"
They watched as Jennifer walked towards the table again and she handed an envelope to them. They opened it and hid the contents. One of the men stood up and pulled a gun out of his pocket.
"Is this it! Is this all you've got."
Jack and Samantha jumped up and pulled out there guns. They shouted at the man to drop his gun. He ignored them and pointed the gun at Jennifer.
"You stupid little bitch! Look what you've done now."