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Opposites
The story takes place in Woodridge, Connecticut during the season of autumn. Jamie enters her school wearing a green dress with her matching sweater in Keds sneakers. She always keeps her hair in a low ponytail with bangs hanging in her forehead. She's very low-profiled when it comes to popularity, but she does very well in her academics.
As she passes the popular group (Eric,Landon,Belinda and Dean) she gives a quick glance as she sees Landon and Belinda making out. Eric teased her "Oh..if it isn't Reverend Sullivan's daughter! OMG! She's wearing the same sweater!" And all of them laugh. Jamie pretends she didn't hear because she knew that she didn't care about what they think about her. All she needed was God's opinion, and that's what keeps her going.
Jamie and Landon attended the same math class. Ms. Olsen called Landon over and said "Landon, your grade in math is an absolute failure. You get F's in practically all your quizzes." As Jamie entered the classroom, Ms. Olsen caught her attention and said "Jamie, why don't you tutor Landon in algebra? He needs your help and if you do this, I can exempt you in 2 quizzes." Landon caught Jamie's eyes, staring at him. He knew she had a few doubts, but Jamie said "Ok I'll do it." She talked to Landon and said "Meet me at my house at 4. Please, don't do anything rancid. My dad will be there and I need you to be at your utmost respect."
That afternoon in the Sullivan's porch, Jamie read her book while waiting for Landon to arrive. It's been an hour and Landon wasn't there yet! She was bored, so she walked around the village.
As she passed the park, she saw Belinda and Landon together, drinking a few bottles of beer. Landon caught Jamie's eyes and came running towards her to apologize. "OMG! I'm so sorry Jamie. I totally forgot. Belinda and I arranged to meet in the park. I'm sorry." Jamie gave him a straight face "You know, here I am giving you a chance to improve yourself in math, a major subject that can affect your high school grade, and you're ditching it to be with your girlfriend drinking beer. I thought I saw something in you. Something good. But I was very wrong."
Belinda heard everything Jamie said and gave her a little push "You don't go around telling Landon what to do! He wants to be with me and that's none of your business! If you're crushing on Landon, well don't because there's never in a million years that he's going to fall for a dorky girl like you! Look, you wore that sweater in the 4th grade! So just please, go home and read your 18th century books!" A tear ran down Jamie's face and she walked away. Landon looked at Jamie with a bit of concern as she walked away.."Don't you think you were a little too hard on Jamie? I mean, it was kind of my fault." Belinda kissed him and said "Whatever. Come on, let's finish the beer and drop me home. You don't need Jamie to ruin this date. I just wanted her out of it. Landon stil had some concern, but another kiss from Belinda took his mind away from Jamie.