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As soon as they shook, more yellow shots started coming. SG-1 got into position and started returning fire.
"Get back to the gate! Now!" O'Neill yelled.
"But sir…" Carter yelled back.
"There's too many! Go!" O'Neill ordered.
Daniel dialed, then he and Teal'c went through the gate.
"Go Carter!" O'Neill yelled.
"What about you sir?" Carter yelled.
"I'm right behind ya! Now go!" he yelled.
Carter and O'Neill ran to the gate and Carter jumped in, but O'Neill turned around and took a look behind them. All he saw was a strange creature running right him before he jumped in.
Meanwhile, on the other side of the gate there were three very worried SG members.
"C'mon Jack!" Sam whispered quietly.
Suddenly Jack walked through the gate, not knowing a hand was reaching toward him.
"O'Neill!" bellowed Teal'c just before Jack was pulled back into the wormhole.
"NO!" Carter and Daniel screamed. But it was too late.
"Dial back!" Carter screamed at Walter from the gate room.
As soon as they got to the control room, they found Gen. Hammond and Walter desperately trying to redial the gate again. Then Walter said what Carter feared.
"Chevron 7 will not lock!"
heehee! more suspense! Please review!