Thank you so much for the reviews! They give me this big silly grin whenever I read them :) Well, I wont keep you waiting. Oh, btw, when Jack thinks its bold. Here you go,
"Oh man!" said Jack.
"Uh.. now would be a very good time to get out of here!" stressed Daniel.
"Yeah, lets go," replied Sam.
"Teal'c! Gimme a hand!" Daniel said as he adjusted Jacks arm over his shoulder. Teal'c wrapped Jack's other arm aroundwhich helped Daniel a lot.
"O'Neill, you must attempt to run, " said Teal'c.
"I'm tryin' T!" replied Jack.
"Well, at least remembering Teal'c's nickname shows that the machine works!" said Daniel.
"Yeah well that wont mean much in our situation at the moment!" yelled Sam.
The guys looked behind them to where Sam was. By this time Jack could run on his own.
Behind Sam about 20 creatures had started running after them. The good news was that SG-1 had a head start.
"Daniel! Take the colonel and get him to the gate!" yelled Sam as yellow flashes flashed behind her. She turned around long enough to return some fire, then resumed running. They were almost to the gate.
"Come on Sam!" yelled Daniel.
"I'm coming!" Sam replied.
As Sam turned around for one last shot at returning fire, Jack looked back at her. She had had only a few seconds of firing shots before she got hit with a yellow blast and knocked to the ground a few meters from the creatures.
"NO! Carter!" screamed Jack.
"Jack, be careful!" yelled Daniel as Jack ran to Sam.
"Daniel! Dial home now!" replied Jack as he reached Sam's side. She had a nasty burn on her left shoulder that looked similar to a staff weapon, and was unconscious.
"Carter!" Jack yelled.
Come on Sam! Get up!
"Come on Carter! Wake up! That's an order!" Jack kept yelling. The Krictarich kept getting closer.
"Sam!" he yelled, hoping if he called her by her first name she'd wake up.
Sam! Don't you do this to me! You promised nothing would happen! This is all my fault! I never should have brought you here!
The few meters suddenly started getting a lot smaller as the Krictarich started hiding behind rocks, firing, and getting closer.
When they saw Sam and Jack together, a few creatures got a bit stupid. Dropped their guns and decided to rush Jack and Sam.
Oh this is gonna be good! thought Daniel from his position behind the DHD. As people started going through the stargate, he whipped out his camcorder and started filming Jack. Luckily they were close enough with the zoom on.
Jack was still calling Sam's name when he noticed the creatures running at him and Sam, closing in fast.
Heehee, couldn't stop typing again. Lemme know what you think!