LOTR story - Chapter One
(A/N: I wish for you to read this author note before reading the chapter. This chapter was originally named 'OMG MY T.V. SENDS YOU TO OTHER DIMENSIONS BY SUCKING YOU INTO IT WHICH TOTALLY FREAKS YOU OUT!', which, by the way, is meant to be said in one breath, but the title wouldn't fit. Anyway, I wrote this chapter a while back. I know it isn't the greatest thing in the world, but I hope that you will enjoy it and trust me when I say that it will hopefully get better throughout the story. If you don't like it then, hey, I'm not making you read it. You don't have to read it if you don't like it. Just one more thing, feel free to review and give opinions, advice, suggestions, etc. It will be much appreciated. Thanks for reading. - Jen)
Disclaimer: No, I do not own LOTR or any of its characters. I do own my characters, fanfic, and ideas.
"blah" - speaking
'blah' - thinking (thinking will be in italic)
blah - change of scenery
Chapter One
Shine and Rebal were at Jen-Jen's house for the sleepover they had planned earlier that day. It was around 8:00p.m. Parents were out for the evening and her sister was with her fiance. They were all alone in the house. The pizza guy just came and delivered some delicious cheese and pepperoni pizza. Shine and Rebal were in the kitchen getting the pizza while Jen-Jen prepared the movie. They were going to watch Lord of the Rings: Fellowship of the Ring.
in the kitchen
"Do we have to watch LOTR?" Rebal asked.
"I guess." replied Shine.
'I wonder how Jen can watch that movie so much without getting bored of it.' Thought Rebal.
in the living room
Jen-Jen walked out from her room and into the living room. She took the movie out of its case and turned on the dvd player. She put the dvd in and waited for the menu screen to come up before putting down the remote and heading into the kitchen. "Hey! Are you guys almost done?" Jen-Jen asked Shine and Rebal.
They replied at the same time, "Almost. Just wait in the living room."
"Aye Aye, chiefs. Just make sure you turn off the light in here when you're done."
"Sure."
Jen-Jen walked out of the kitchen and turned off the lights in the rest of the house except for a few lamps around the living room and in the foyer. She came back into the living room, set up the bed for her beloved Jack Russel Terrier, Chloe, and sat in her father's favorite red chair.
(A/N: That chair is actually quite comfortable to sleep in. I should know since my friends took over my bedroom at my sleepover birthday party, and I was forced into the living room along with one of my other friends that had to sleep on the couch while I got the red chair. Very comfortable to sleep in, except when you wake up and find that your neck is hurting from it. Anyway, enough rambling, BACK TO THE STORY!)
It was all quiet in the room except you could hear Shine and Rebal laughing about a joke and Rebal screaming, "WE MUST DANCE LIKE THE SQUIRRELS THAT ARE IN THE HOUSE!" 'Oh my gosh. Squirrels? She's definitely talking about herself.' Jen thought, fighting off the urge to roll her eyes.
The menu screen for the movie was playing over and over on the t.v. and all Jen-Jen could do was stare at it as if she was in a trance. She got up and slowly walked over to the t.v. screen and touched it lightly with her hand. 'I wish I could go there.' She thought. All of the sudden, the screen started glowing and Jen's hand was being sucked into the t.v. ' WTF! ', was all she could think. Her right arm was quickly being sucked into it. She tried putting her right foot on the t.v. so she could try to get her arm out, but her leg was starting to get sucked in too.
"Well, this stinks...SHINE, REBAL, SOMEBODY HELP ME!", was all she could say. Shine and Rebal rushed into the room and stared at Jen. When the entire bottom half of Jen's body and her right arm was in the screen, she screamed, "GET ME OUT PLEASE, HELP!"
They snapped out of their thoughts and rushed over to her to help. She was still getting pulled in at a fast rate. Only her head and half of her left arm was left. Shine and Rebal ran over and tried to pull Jen out of the problem she was in.
She gave one last cry for help as her face was sucked in also. Rebal was trying to pull Jen out while Shine was keeping hold on Rebal. Jen was still able to hold on with her hand while they tried to pull her out. Then, as Jen's hand started going in, Rebal started to get sucked in too.
Rebal, who was now trying to get out, let go of Jen's hand and Jen disappeared into the t.v. "Jen!" They screamed. Shine was not able to pull Rebal out on her own and got pulled in too. All Shine felt after that was a feeling that she was falling as darkness clouded her mind and she blacked out. 'This can't be happening.' were Shine's last thoughts.
(A/N: Not too bad, was it? I promise to make it better. As I said before, I wrote this chapter quite a long time ago, so it is very rusty.)