Here is my new story.
Epilouge
"um Jeremie could you come here for a minute?" Aeilita said in a very feminine voice. "um sure" Jeremie said. So he walked to over to Aelita. "I just want to check something" Aelita said. Then she kissed Jeremie right there! Then she broke the kiss after 5 seconds and walked away and said "I knew it". Jeremie stood there frozen.
Hours later...
Jeremie sat there on his bed. "what the hell!" "Aelita kissed me!" Jeremie thought to himself. "matbe I should tell her the truth!" Jeremie said. Then there was a knock on the door. "who is it?" Jeremie asked "it's Aelita" He immediately ran up to the door and unlocked it. "hello Jeremie" Aelita said. "hey Aelita" Jeremie said. "so what do you need?" Jeremie asked "this!" Aelita said jumping on Jeremie and started making out with him.
"Wow!" "look at this school!" Ian said. (that's me) I looked at the school yard filled with people. Then a girl came up to me and said "you must be the new kid!" The girl said. "um yeah" I said putting my hands behind my head (like I was lying down), smiling. "well i'm Sissi" Sissi said. "well um I'm Ian" I said. "well you better watch out this year and if you get on my b..." Before she could finish, Odd came over and said "Sissi give the new kid a break! Geez!". "hmphh" Sissi said turning away and then walking away. "thanks for getting her out of my way" I said.
"who are you?" I asked. "name's Odd" "and your's?" He asked. "my name is Ian" I said. "whoa" "nice clothes" Odd said. I was wearing fingerless gloves, a black short sleeve shirt, long urban camo pants, and on the side of my pants was a thigh holster. (just for decoration) "thanks" I said. "why don't I give you a tour" Odd said. "cool" I said