Harufu
2005-12-27
ch 2, reply Good so far...Only a few things that seemed to be off or strange...Biggest thing was the very long paragraph in the beginning...Good to describe, but you might want to see into breaking it down abit...
Also "Why did you get us out?"... Umm I think you might be thinking of "How", not really "why"
I meant how but it was a typing error.. thx for reviewing :)
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Ron and Mira were going to there houses...when a tank came by them... they hid behind a building.. they looked at the street infront of them.. it was full of military with machine guns... anad a helicopter was flying in the sky..."What witchery is this?" Mira asked confused...Ron looked at her and smiled..
"Technology... we need to take off these armours and masks.." he put his hand on her.. she nodded and they entered an abandaned building.. they changed and emerged as Ron and Mira..."Lets go home".. Ron put his hand around his sister...
"Ok" she smiled and walked leaning on him...
"you alright?" Ron asked concerned.. she was very exhausted...she looked at him and smiled..
"Yes... just this force field really drained my energy..." her eyes were half closed...
"I know just moving that arrow was tiring... hold on... when we get home you can rest..." he smiled and held her between his shoulders...she nodded and drifted to sleep...Ron looked at her and smiled... "lets go home" he started walking between the military.. they didn't give any attenetion...Ron went to his home and opened his door...
"Honey are you alright I saw every thing on the TV.. are you hurt?" his mother asked... she knew that the two on television where her son and daughter...
"No... we are just drained..." he entered holding his sister and put her on the couch.. her mother and father were staring at her...
Ron's dad put his hand on Ron's shoulder..."Son... we need to talk..." he lead him to the other room and started a conversation with him... "Ron... i know what we did was inexcusable... but when she started showing these strange signs we freaked.. we feared for your safety.. or if someone found out what will happen to your future..."
Ron smiled..." Its ok dad... I guess i should also apologize for snapping like that... i was having a hard week... a very hard week... sorry I blew in your faces..." he looked at his father and gave his hand out to shake his.. "Forgiven?" Ron asked...his father smiled and shook his hand...
Meanwhile Mira and her mother were having a conversation of there own..."So you understand dear... thats why we had to let you go.. if we knew t.." her mother was stopped by Mira...
"Its ok mom... I know... Ron told me.. I forgive you.. where is dad?" Mira asked as she searched the room... her mother wiped a tear of joy and pointed at the other room's door.. Mira jumped and went through the door when she saw her father and Ron talking "DADDY!" she ran and jumped into his arms...her dad caught and hugged her...
"Hey there squirt..." her father hugged her... then Helen( Ron's mom) entered the room..
"I am sorry if I have to interrupt this reuinion... but the Possibles have invited us over" She smiled at her husband and daughter..
"Possibles?" Mira asked in confusion...Ron just sighed..
'They are our neighbers... KP is there you already met her... when we were fighting... and there is Jim and Tim.. they are both 13 (i boosted there age up.. sorry ..but I will still make there behaivior child like) years old they are about your age so you can play with them..." Ron spoke and Mira jumped of joy..."but first... we need to shower..." he spoke and Mira blew a hair out of her face in disappointment..
"Do we have to?" she asked her mother who just nodded..
"there are some new cloth on Ron's bed.. I bought them for you go sh..."Helen stopped as she saw her daughter run with inhuman speed up to Ron's room... after five seconds she was dressed and ready...
"Done... the water was a bit cold though" she spoke with a smiled... her parents gasped...
"I guess thats what you get for having a sister with super powers.." Ron just shaked his head... "i'll be down in half an hour... go i'll follow you in a while..." they all nodded and left...Ron entered his room and the shower the water was ice cold "MIRA!" he yelled.. out side his house Mira heard it and smiled...
They went for the Possibles... Helen rang the bell... Mira looked confused.. her mother looked at her.. "This is how you alert the people in the house instead of shouting..." she was going to have a very long chat with her daughter later...her daughter just nodded.. the door opened and Andrea (Kim's mom) appeared...
"hello come in..." she then noticed Mira... "oh aren't you cute.. but your hair..." Mira's her was covering half of her face.. she put the her behind her ear..."thats more like it.."... she entered the house... Mira touched her hair... feeling it was strange she returned it like it was before...and Mira followed in...
"So what is your name?" Kim's father asked as he bent down for Mira...Mira heard a slight 'Hika boo' and a 'hoshow'... she smiled those were Jim and Tim..
"Its Mira" she then put her hand out as if to shake.. then feelign that a water baloon was coming for her she shifted her hand to another position and caught it... she smiled and looked at where Jim and Tim were hiding...
"Jim Tim no throwing baloons at Ron's sister..." After agreeing with the Stoppables Andrea had told her family about Ron's sister...
They sat down at the table.. Kim soon joined in..."So where is Ron?" she asked... Helen looked at Kim and smiled..
"he will be here any minute..." she answered... "Mira this is Kim" she looked at her daughter..
"Hey" Mira spoke as she stopped playing with the video game with the Twins... BOOM..." hey no fair you cheated" she looked at Jim and Tim...
"No we didn't you were too slow..." they laughed not knowing of Mira's powers...
"Really.. rematch?" she asked holding the controller again.. this earned every one's attention.. they all looked at the twins..
"Your on" Jim replied and started playing.. "Ahhh" hey were barely keepign up with Mira's speed...
"Bye bye" Mira smiled as she used more speed... BOOM... she had a smile on her face she then looked at Jim and Tim..
"WOW!" they said in unision..
"Ok Kids enough video games... come sit with us..." the parents motioned for the Kids... Jim and Tim sat around their mother and Mira next to them...
"So Mira...erm.. that was interesting... can you do any thing else?" Dean ( Ron's father) asked...Mira looked at him and smiled..
"Invisibility..." She smiled earning the attention of Kim's father..
"No way.. that is scientificaly impossible" he convinced himself...Mira looked at him and turned invisible.. his jaw hit the ground..
"COOL!" the Twins spoke in unision...
"No there is something you don't see every day" Kim spoke in disbelief...Mira then reappeared...
"I know... hard though.. drains a lot of stamina" she spoke.. then a bell was heard..."Ron's here"...
"I'll get it" Kim got out of her seat and opened the door to see Ron there...
"Hey K.." he was cut of by Kim holding his hand and going with him out side...their parents just smiled... Mira and the twins looked at each other with smiles on there faces.. they snuck out... Mira turned invisible and sat next to Ron and Kim..
"Some thing wrong KP?" Ron asked in concern..
"Every thing is wrong Ron... whats going on?" she asked.. Ron just gave out a breath and told her the whole story...after he finished.. "oh... so thats where the attacks on the school were coming from.." Ron just nodded..
"And because of earlier today... you know the military firing at us.. we can't show our identiry to know one.. our family's only know..." Ron spoke as he felt a tear run down his cheek.. Kim noticed this and wiped it away and spoke...
"You need to know Ron.. that whatever happens.. i will always be with you" Kim smiled... Ron looked at her and hugged her.. Kim returned the hug.. there was a giggle next to them.. Ron broke the hug and looked aroud..
"Mira Dean Stoppable... show your self" he then looked next to him where Mira reappeared...
"hahaha" she was laughing... "Now boys" she yelled as water baloons were fired at Kim and Ron... Ron just put his hand infront of him and Kim the baloons stopped in mid air...this earned a gasp from the twins...
"very funny.. lets see you soaked Mira..." he launched the baloons at Mira... she created a force field around her that repelled the baloons...
"Not today" she stood up as if to chalange Ron..
"Really" Ron accepted the challange... he stood up and held a water baloon in his hand.. Mira did as well they slowly approached each other.. paying no attention to their surroundings .. a baloon hit each of them.. they looked at the source and saw Kim laughing... they looked at each other and nodded... Kim looked at them..
"No... don'.." she couldn't continue her sentence when the baloons hit her..." I am gona get you for that..." she jumped at Ron... Mira just got out of the way and went for the Twins..
"Mission acomplished.. phase one of 'Getting Kim and Ron together' complete" she high fived Tim...
Meanwhile in the CIA,
An agent was looking at the news... "... new villians in town with super powers.." the reporter spoke and the agen turned off the TV...
"Sir.." another agent came for him.. "are you sure about this?.. I mean they saved the town"...
The other agent sat up..."It is a set up... they probably released that dragon.. any way the public believe so... so we can proceed as planned... John.." he yelled for someone.. a scientest aproached...
"Sir" he asked..
"I need you to find every thing about these two... identities weekness powers.. every thing.." the agent spoke as he looked at the screen again..
"Yes Sir" the scientest replied and left...
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