Roserain chapter 4
A.N. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in such a LOOONG time! I hope that you'll like this chapter; I'm going to make it extra long for my patient fans. I was off somewhere or other and now school has started…..plus I'm doing all of the sports soo….
Also, Now, if you have any ideas, please review. Should I make this more of a reader's choice thing or what? Or should I just go on with my plot and make this more suspenseful? Review and tell me your opinion! Thanks, cutefreaksam. A.N. complete
Chapter 3.
After an hour George stood up and wiped his eyes. After a moment he began to walk back inside. All the servants began to scurry out of his way because they knew that if he had a temper tantrum again, he could do more damage considering Alanna wasn't there.
"George, oh, here you are, now take her." Mandy said, shoving the baby into his arms.
"What… oh well," he took her and walked to the windows. It had been a cloudy yet sunny day but now it was completely cloudy and raining slightly.
"Ah, I'll have to name you without Alanna now. She always wanted a Therese or an Ingrid. But not you, you are a feisty, bravebaby and it's a rainy day so you are.."
5 years later
A happy 5-year old RussiRose DaphneRain played in the garden with her best friend Lysand. Her father, George of Pirates Swoop sat inside, watching Rosie play. He sighed he did not really want to see Marana, the lady who insisted on chasing him.
"How are you George dear? You look so pale you know. You need to go out more, go to town you know. I could accompany you later this week if you want?" Marana asked.
"No thank you Marana, I need to watch Russi so she won't try to pull any stunts like last time she tried to fly. But you can go if you want to and I can watch Lysand for you" George replied.
"How many times have I asked you to please, call me Mara? I feel so old when you call me Marana. Why, we're only in our early thirties! Call the midwife to take care of Russi and Lysand, and let's go to Port ----------¹ (you, my readers fill it in for me, please?)
"Okay, okay, I'll go." George reluctantly agreed. "I'll see if I can get Daine over here quickly."
" Does it have to be Daine? She, um, frightens me with that dreadful magic of hers…. must you get her? How about B'larsa the K'miri? She enjoys being with the children and I think she's good. It also helps she doesn't ask for more than a few coppers." She added on the last sentence with a whisper meant to be seductive.
He sighed. "Okay Marana", instantly earning a gentle elbow to the ribs and a flirtatious glare. "okay, okay. Mara." That earned him another elbow and a smile.
And off we go.
A.N. PEOPLE, again, I am soo sorry for leaving this hanging. The entire story is revised and updates should be within a week of each other unless I have an event I have to prepare for, then I will inform you whether it's going to be a late update or so.
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