Ok, here is a question for all of you. Would you prefer longer, better, more indebth chapters, or do you want more faster? I can do either or. I might be able to do both, but I want your oppinion.


Who We Are, The Hidden Meaning Continued

Still Yumi:

"There are two Yumi's?" Ulrich asked utterly confused.

"What?" I asked. "No, I, um…"

"She's a fake, she is one of them!" I heard someone yell and when I looked to see who it was I saw Sissi standing on top of the hill that the others had come from.

Sissi was wearing something different than the others. She was wearing more normal clothing, clothing that one would see from our universe. I was surprised to see this, because all the others were wearing such amazing clothing.

"I don't think she is one of them." Odd said from next to me. I hadn't even noticed him move. "She doesn't smell like a metamorphic."

"So, can't they mask their smell?" Sissi asked.

"No, only their image. That's why Xanadu tried to kill off my race."

"Well, if she isn't a metamorphic then what is she?" Jeremie asked. "There can't be two Yumi's can there?"

They all looked at each other for a moment then they looked at me. Ulrich walked up to me and looked me in the eyes, he placed his face so close to mine that our noses nearly touched. I could feel my face begin to get warm as the blood rushed into my cheeks; I knew that I was blushing. Ulrich was so hansom as an adult I was stunned by it. Suddenly Ulrich looked away, at the other Yumi. He smiled slightly and then turned back to me.

"Yumi, she is you, at least a younger version of you." Ulrich said smiling. "And I should know, we have known each other for so long."

"But how is this possible. How can there be two of me?" The other me asked. "I know that this isn't my younger self, I would remember it."

"That is because she isn't you, not exactly." Said a voice. "Remember what I told you all about different universes?"

I turned to look at the speaker. It was a woman. She looked familiar somehow, something about her I had seen somewhere before. I couldn't quite place it, but I did recognize the clothing. It was very much like the traveler's.

"Yes, we remember Ginda." Jeremie said. "So are you telling me that this is a Yumi from another universe?"

"Exactly, and if I know Gwydion he will be here in a few minutes to take her back... I just wonder when he will be coming from."

"Many years in the future, Ginda." I heard the familiar voice say. "And she is in trouble. I told you not to touch anything, yet, not only do you look for something to touch, but when you find something you not only touch it but you play with it."

"I didn't touch anything. All I did was look at it." I said aggravated. "And why are you so angry? I saved someone's life."

The traveler sighed. "Didn't you ever thing that perhaps he was supposed to die? What if his sacrifice would have ended the war? What if now all of his friends are going to die?"

"That can't happen. You told us what happened here... I think." I replied.

"No I didn't. All I told you was what your person in this universe was like. I didn't tell you anything about the content, just the characters."

He walked over to me and looked directly into my face. He then turned to the other in the field. "I am sorry about that, and I am sorry that we had to interfere. Ulrich would not have died, and yet this was exactly how it happened. We will take our leave now." He then looked directly back at me and said, "Did you know that your body is stuck with out a mind or soul in your universe. Do you have any idea how worried Ulrich is?"

I was about to answer but I suddenly found myself spinning into darkness. I couldn't see, hear or feel anything. There wasn't anything to breathe, and I felt as though I were suffocating. I couldn't move at all and I began to panic.


So tell me whether you want more faster or better slower. I am already working on some things, but I would like to know the stile that you all would prefer. And not to be breaf but I am on dialup after all. Tell me what you think.