Wisteria Lane - Daytime

: Susans house, out the front:

Susan was leaning against the pole holding her porch up while slouching on the steps out the front of her house..in on hand she had a phone the other rested on her stomach as if she was trying to settle and upset feeling, her face was blank yet told a story, she was worried.

:Cut to Gabrielles Phone:

Gabrielles Phone lay on a cement floor ... lights flashing alternativley pink and purple..the small screen on the front read 5 msgs recieved and every few minutes the phone announced "you have New Voice mail recived at.." each time giving a different time coinsiding with the time the msg was recieved. suddenly everythink went quiet and all that could be heard was sirens ... Then out of nowhere came a person, a police officer... her reached down peered at the phone...gave a worried look over his shoulder then tucked the phone into his pocket.

MARY ALICE: "Yes it was true people often wondered jus how well they should know there neighbour, when was enough, enough and where was the line to be drawn... Susan wasnt one of these people...she always ment well..she wore her heart on her sleave and never had any lines...especially not for those who knew her best...so when susan was out of the loop about anythink she made it her buisness to find out on her own... this was a quality with a darkness...that would soon show its ugly head..."

:Cut to Susans house:

Susan sat anxiously staring into space every so often hitting redial on her phone...then breaking her stare and looking over to Gabrielles house.

Susan: Oh Gabby where are you! (pause) come'on pick up!

Lynette is outside with Tom trying to keep the boys in one spot ... when she peers over and Susan catches her eye, Bree to is out the front, she is watering her flowers when she to notices susan... both make there way over to their friend.

Lynette: Hey ...

Bree: Hey sweetie..

Susan looks up... after taking the phone away from her ear the sounds of "beep, beep beep" echo...

Susan: Oh hey...you guys

Lynette: Hey is everythink okay...you look a little upset...honey what is it

Susan jus stares on as if she didnt hear a word of what lynette had jus said

Bree: (sits next to Susan.. and touches her shoulder by way of comforting her friend) Sweetie... what happened did you and mike have a fight?

Susan: (snapping out of it) What...o--h...N.o..o, no (long pause) Gab--by... have either of you two heard from her?

Lynette: No why...

Susan: (breaks eyed contact and lowers her voice) Oh no!

Bree: I spoke to her this morning... she was going shopping i think... you know Gabby...why

(silence)

Susan: I got a call from her jus before...she said something was wrong...

Lynette: What did she say was wrong...

Susan: I dont kno my phone went dead before she got a chance to tell me...

Bree looks on with concern

Lynette: Oh honey im sure shes fine..like bree said (Looks to Bree) you kno Gabby... she probably did a whole lot of shopping ...the--n saw a pair of shoes she liked and ...and you kno couldnt buy them cos she couldnt carry them or somethin...

Susan: Nope (shaking her head) she was ...i think she was crying.. i kno she likes shoes and she might even cry over a pair but ... i dunno lynette somethinks wrong..

Bree: Susan im sure..she was jus... (trying to think of somethink...she was honestly worried but didnt wana show it)

Susan: No Bree..! she was crying like she was in pain or somethin..

Lynette: Well...honey she would have called back...right...if it was somethin bad..?

Susan: thats the thing ive been trying to call her...it jus rings out...or diverts to msg bank...Guys Gabbys phone is like her shopping addiction...sh--e cant go a day with out it...why wouldnt she be answering...?

Bree: Im sure there is a logical explination ...she could jus be outta range or...or.. maybe she cant hear her phone...

Lynette: Yea maybe..she is visiting Carlos and you kno maybe its a new rule , you cant take cells in...i mean you cant bake cakes and stuff..(bree looks at her ).it could be that

Susan: (susan sighs) you kno you guys are right... im jus ...i freaked a little thats all... everythnk jus seems to stress me out right now...im sure Gabby is fine..

Lynnette: Thats right...shes fine ( the three exchange looks) Mike?

Susan: Am i that transparent?

Lynette: Yea!

Bree: (quickly cuts in) No, No sweetie its jus we kno you and mike have been havin problems...

The three continue to discuss

:Cut to the location of Gabrielles phone:

The officer who previously picked up Gabrielles Phone is talking with another officer...

Officer#1: Did you see what happened...?

Officer#2: Yea... not pretty ..do you think she'll be okay...?

Officer#1: Dont kno...doesnt look good...i heard the paremedics they had a hard time...said it was a job and half ..

Officer#2: Yea...well she looked fine when she came in... even smiled... she was almost cheerey...not like normally ...she had her hand rubbing her tummy as she signed in... should have picked it up...

Officer#1: Hey no! what could have you done...you didnt kno... she came in sat down ..then started breathing heavily and grabbing her stomach..mid conversation. .. i didnt even pick it up !

Officer#2: Yea i jus sorta feel bad for her you kno... shes probably not gonna make it...

Officer#1: yea i feel for the husband...i mean he obviously wanted it...

Officer#2: Yeah i think she was cheerey but uncomfortable... like she didnt wanna have to do it...so he must have made her...i jus didnt get the feel that she was that type of person you kno...oh well i better go get that report written up...

Officer#1: Yea ... ill be up in a minute (referring to the stairs they are standing at) guess i should go tell the husban the bad news..."Hey you remeber yor pretty wife...well hope you never forget cos...i dnt thnk youll be ssing her again..."

Officer#2: Eh..(as if to say tone it down...not funny)

Officer#1: sorry, sorry ..(goes to walk off) hey if im not up in 15 send in reinforcements hes got a tempor! (the pair say good bye as they go different ways)

It becomes clear that the officers are guards at Carlos's prision...

Carlos is sittin at the visiting table with his head in his hand...there are other tables around one jus next to him... has the chair tipped over and two small spots of blood...he looks over then quickly burries his head in his hands...

Wisteria Lane: Later that day..

Lynettes house- downstairs playing poker

Susan, Edie Bree and Lynette all sit in almost perfect silence...

Edie: hit me! (referring to poker game) (all three other women stare at her) What... What? ... why is it that the three of you always make me feel like im at a funeral..and not a very nice one , one thos cheapo didnt really like ya ones...huh (all still stare) wheres the pretty one...huh...least she livens you mourners up a bit..

The television is on in the background suddenly a news piece catches susans, lynette and Bree's attention, Edie turns...only because its the most exciting thing she has seen since the poker game started..

Carlos's prisions is flashed all over the television

Televeision reporter: The mayor has vowed to provide a substancial.. sum of money to our city prisions after under staffing the facilities resulted in the death of a 30 year old woman earlier today. The woman a vistitor to the prision was believed to be visting her husban when she became ill...due to a roit in another sector the woman did not recieve first aid or assistance in time and later died in hospital. Soon after the woman feel ill her husband became enraged at the lack of assistance and a fight broke out.. resulting in injury for 4 guards...Police have said the woman died of a drug overdose, it is believe she swallowed a bag of heroin due to under staffing sucessfully passed through the guards...the drug was intended for her husband. Police have said things went wrong when the bag spilt...leaking a deadly dose of heroin into the womans body...the family of have woman have refused to comment...

All three women...look at each othe each one knowing what the other was thinkin when the news cast came on...Over by the small window that shows the outside street...Edie who quickly grew bored of the news cast is peering out...something has caught her eye...

Edie: Well least she looks like she is having fun...

All three break there concerntration

Bree: Who are you talking about...?

Bree goes oer to join Edie

Edie: Princesse over there in her castle..

Bree: Gabby!

The other two hear this and jump from there seats to got look...

Lynette: Oh thankgod!

Susan runs up stairs over to gabby's to greet her...the other two follow...Edie rolls her eyes and gives them a "Omg you are all so lame look"

Susan runs across the road to Gabby who is grabbing bags from the boot..

Susan: Gabby, your okay!

Gabrielle: Yea im better than fine... i went to a shoe sale...

Susan: What do you mean...you called me...you were upset i --i though something had happened to you?

Gabrielle: Oh that...(knowing very well what had happened and why she called Susan, Gabrielle hid the reason) Yea i though i had left my cheque book at home...

Susan: Gabby i was worried you sounded upset

Gabrielle: Yea well you would be to ...if you saw shoes like this marked down to $200...

Susan: So you called cos you were upset about shoes..

Gabrielle: Sure...it was very emotional ( Gabby trying very hard to hide why she called susan)

Susan: So why didnt you answer your phone?

Gabrielle: Huh?

Susan: Your phone i left like a million msgs...didnt you get them..?

Gabrielle: Oh yea...i musta left my phone at the prision when i went to see Carlos ...yea there was a fight and some woman collapsed..i dnt kno..much jus they had to evacuate the visitor room.. so i left...i musta been in a hurry...i didnt even realise i had dropped it...

Susan: (interigating) I thought you were shopping...

Gabrielle: I was...then i went to see Carlos someone has to sign my cheques..what dont yo believe me...(Knowing very well she is kinda lying)

Lynette: (butts in) Jus so long as your okay...

Bree: That right honey...right susan..

Susan: Yea...(not convienced actually very convienced she was lying and very eagar to find out why!) (snapping out of it) Of course...so long as your okay (smiles like i kno your hiding something)

MARY ALICE: " It was true Susan did always mean well ... but the darkness and secretive nature in Gabrielle Sollis wasnt about to let her find out her secret...at any cost"

NOTE: Heya! guys thanks for the reviews i decided to do a quick follow up now...as i was writting this making it up in my head it all flowed but im sorry if i lost yas a bit i was trying to be clever...but i didnt think it worked...anyways let me kno..MegsXxx

PS: Oh and jus to hopefully keep ya'll interested this is no where near the end...okay there is way more drama to come...this is nothing yet...Gabrielle is hiding something...what could it be? some tension between her and susan could be ahead... Susan thinks she knows whats going with Gabby but could she be way off and end up losing Gabby forever because of her suspision...and Gabrielles baby... will there be a twist will there be a baby..? i tried to intrigue you all ... haha im a lil crazy atm...enjoy! Xxx