Heya guys! added a new chapter im trying not to get lost in it by going off topic but hey...anyways enjoy - Xxx
Megs
Wisteria Lane - Daytime
: Susans house:
MARY ALICE: "It was a bright sunny day on Wisteria lane, the sun was shinning bright the flowers were perfectly spread and the grass was sparkling as the sun hit the tips of the bright green grass"
:Susan sits on her porch seemingly enjoying the sun:
MARY ALICE: " ... the day was too perfect but still Susan Myers couldnt help but wonder whether the grass was really greener on the other side... of the solis house that is.."
:Susan starred intrigingly at the Solis house, that was until she was distracted by her daughter Julie and her friend:
Susan: (gettin up from her sitting position) Hey Sweetheart how was school..
Julie: U-h.. yea good...Ma you remember Ash...from school..(points to a Short blonde girl with bright blue eyes)
Asha: Hi misses Myers! (the girl flashes her smile that lights up her face)
Susan: Of course, how are you Asha...?
Asha: Fine thankyou (susans mouth moves as if she is about to say somethink but before she gets the chance Juile grabs her friend and drags her inside) (off side) Nice seeing you again...misses myers!
Susan: (girls have disappeared upstairs, says softly(pause) You...to (as she goes inside still with her eye on closely on the solis house)
:Cut to Gabrielle who is standing in her living room, on the phone to Carlos:
Gabrielle: Carlos... look ..no im sorry ...i cant..(pause)...i jus cant... what'doya mean...jus im busy okay... jus because you call every five seconds doesn mean i can come running ya kno... (waits as carlos replys we dont hear but his answer is clearly doesnt understand why she cant come ) You dont needa keep tabs on me okay...(pause) No you dont...look what am i gna do... huh..run off to the circus and become one of those girls who wear all the sequins and hangs from the bar thingy.and flip in the air and do tricks...Look honey i have a doctors appointment okay..and i get tired okay..ill come tomorro...i promise okay? (doesnt wait 4 reply) Okay honey love you (makes kiss kiss sounds with her lips)bye!
Gabrielle: Sigh!... (knocks her purse off the side table and her ultra sound pix falls out, she bends to pick it up getting caught in a moment... the pic is dated to the previous day) ( Gabby snaps outta it with sad eyes and quickly picks up the photo and other bits and pieces shoving them into her bag...)
:Phone rings:
Gabrielle: Ya, hello
Susan: Gabby hi!... listen the poker game...lynette sent the boys on a play date so..
Gabrielle: Oh...its cancelled?
Susan: No no, jus Tom is having some friends over to watch the big game so were moving it to my house...
Gabrielle: Oh okay then...ill be over in jus a minute...
Susan: Im glad...see u soon!
:Cut to Susans kitchen the four ladies and Edie are sitting around the table:
Bree: So whos got the baby then...?
Lynette: She's with Tom, yea since the boys are out ... she's like the angel child... no boys to influence her..
Bree: Poor Penny stuck with all those boys...all the time
Lynette: Nah... shes stronger for it... Anyways Tom is going to bring her over at half time...
Edie: You guys are great parents... that poor child is subjected...to a whole lota gambling and drunken men...not to mention those...little brats of yours...
Lynette: Hey gotta learn some time she's gettin and early start ... and my children are brats... so sorry edie but your words dont hurt me... now if u hada said they are bad mannered little brats then i woulda slapped that royal flush (referring to cards) outta your hand ... they know there pleases and thankyou...most of the time! (The other three laugh)
Bree: Drink anyone..? (she gestures as she gets up to get herself a drink...)
Lynette: Nope im gd to go for now..
Susan: ya...(giving edie sort of the evil eye...as if she is gesturing 4 her to do somethin.)...thanks bree im good to.
Gabrielle: I'll have a soda..thanks!
Edie: Ill...(bree walks off to get hers and Gabrielles drinks) nevermind..! (reolls her eyes at susan) so ah...Gabrielle... hows your husban ..? still in jail?
(susan rests her head in her hand...)
Susan: Edie...
Edie: What!
(looks to Edie as with her expression she says nice going...sarcastic expression!) (she then quickly turns and smiles at Gabrielle)
Gabrielle: Its okay... and yea he is still in jail... thanks Edie!
Edie: Oh well that must be good for you... no need to have to sneak around with that little boy huh? (john)
(susan face looks like OMG! she did not jus say that)
Gabrielle: Excuse me!
Edie: You know that teenage boy...john something... use to do you garden... (pause) ...im jus sayin it would make thngs a little easier 4 the two of you..
Gabrielle: Not that that is any of ur buisness...!
Edie: Well ... wen you flaunt it... not so secretively.. what do you expect princess...anyways ... hey im all for it i say good for you...
Lynette: Edie... Jus play cards okay...
Gabrielle: Yea you kno what i might leave...
Bree: What no...oh gabby stay...
Edie: Dont leave on my account (throws out her cards and sits back in her chair)
Gabrielle: Whatever Edie...( at this point she is standing up and looks at edie but quickly turns)
Edie: Hey... im sorry if i offended you...even if it is the truth...and besides...i only said what little (extends her arm to susans shoulder with a big smile) Susie told me to say!
(Lynette and bree sighs ...)
Gabrielle: What!...(everyone is quiet) Susan...
Edie: (she sips Gabrielles soda) Its true...
Susan: Edie... shut up okay...
Edie: What... you told me to find out if Gabrielle was still having an affair with that kid ... thats what you said... (susan makes facials as is to say stop talking) What? you did!...you said...
Susan: (throws her hands up cutting in on edie mid sentence) Okay okay...thanks Edie...
Gabrielle: So you did... you think im having an affair...still...is that what you think?
Susan: Gabby of course not... (pause) so your not right?
Gabrielle: (sighs) (walks to leave)
Susan:(susan jumps up) Hey Gabby wait...no! come back GABBY!
Gabrielle: What What!... ( she says firmly)
Susan: Its not like... it sounds okay... i was jus worried about you...and..
Gabrielle: What... so you get Edie(points to) to do your dirty work!
Susan: no i didnt want you to find out...i-i
Gabrielle: Oh well okay...
Susan: Gabby... fine you kno what im sorry...okay...
Gabrielle: No im sorry ... cos you kno its not like i havent had an afair before right so like its only logical that i would do it again...its fine...(sarcastic)
Susan: Really? (clicks hat it is sarcasim she shakes it off) No Gabby... its jus... what going on with you...?
Gabrielle: You wana kno what going on with me...My husband is in jail... im pregnant and all alone ... okay...
Bree: Your not alone you kno that!
Gabrielle: No i i cant do this with you guys right now... Susan i trusted you... i cant do this right now...
Susan: Gabby you can trust me im sorry about what i did but your not alone im here for you...
Lynette: Yea were here for you sweetie...
Edie: God...i thought she was cheating...im lost as to what the hell is going on here...it sounds as if you dying...(to Gabrielle) she looks fine to me..
Gabrielle: (all ignore edie) i kno you are...i do...its jus... im jus its like im at kid at home with ma parents... im so confused...
Bree: Sweetie... its okay were all confuesed...(says very cheery)
Lynette: Yeah Gabby lotsa stuff has happened this year... its been a big year...
Gabrielle: Yea... im jus gonna go and ... (to bree) im fine okay jus these damn hormones...cya guys
(all look on as she leaves) (susan walks her out)
Susan: Gabby i really am sorry...
Gabrielle: Sure.
Susan: No Gabby i am...hey listen maybe you should go on a little break mayb go stay with your parents 4 a bit...im sure they would love to hear from you
Gabrielle: Thanks susan but no thanks...
Susan: No it could be good give you some time to figure things out...
Gabrielle: Susan my parents are no Carol and mike Brady okay.. i left home at 15 i haven spoken to them since... and i dont intend to...ever! okay... look i kno you mean well but jus dont okay... my hormones are on overdrive and i may say somethin ill regret later.. okay
Susan: Yea sure..no i understand... im sorry about your parents...
Gabrielle: Hey cant choose your parent right..but you can choose not to live with them...(gabrielle walks across to her house)
:CUT TO GABBY'S HOUSE:
(her house is mildly dark... as the curtains are draw with a slight opening)
(Gabrielle throws her bag towards the stairs and begins to cry... as she slides down the front door until she is in a sitting position)
Gabrielle:(to tummy) Please ... be okay...(she closes her eyes as tears run down her face)
:CUT TO HER SIDE TABLE NEAR STAIRS:
(There are two msgs on her answering machine... and beside he machine there is a book date diary its opened to the present week two days are circled ... todays date is one and it says " results" the other date reads "hospital-tests 11.15")
:CUT TO SUSANS HOUSE:
(Julie and her friend Asha come down stairs)
(susan looks over and she catches a glimpse of Gabby in her home throught the gap in the curtains, She is standing peering out the gap for a moment her eyes lock with Susan... then Susan see's julie and asha and for jus a moment she locks with Ashas eyes...there is a certain familar presence there)
Julie: Mom were going to get a dvd okay...
Susan: Okay honey..
Julie: Oh hey Ma is it okay if Asha Stays over tonight?
Susan: Sure...as long as its okay with your parents..
Asha: Yea they dont care where i am as long as im not annoying them
Susan: Oh Asha im sure that not true...
Asha: Yea..it is but its okay...Hey cant choose your parent right..but you can choose not to live with them...
(susan has a flash of dejavu..?)
Susan: ...Uh yea ...okay girls have a good time...
(susan goes back to the window and peersover to the solis house)
MARY ALICE: " So maybe the grass really was greener in the other side or maybe jus everyone has a different shade of green"
WE SEE...
LYNETTE:
(standing with penny on her hip at a front door she knocks as she rocks the baby to settle her. The door opens and her 3 boys come running out ... there faces and clothes are all messed but she catches them with open arms...)
BREE:
( Bree is setting the table for dinner... she walks over to the dinning room cabnent to grab some nice plates on her way she passes a picture of rex...she stop picks it up and smiles. Danielle come down stairs and Bree puts the photo down and walks with her arm around her daughter to the table...Danielle (we dont hear this but..) she says something funny and the pair sit down both laughing..)
SUSAN:
( Susan, Julie and Asha are all cosy on the lounge watching "now and then" Julie points to the tv and Susan gasps then throws pop corn at her and then at Ash they all start throwing popcorn and running around the coffee table)
GABRIELL:
(Gabby is all cosy and rugged up in a big old arm chair in the corner of her room...she is looking at a picture of her baby and she sheds a tear... she holds its close then she shows a small smile as she picks up the phone and calls the number which she has on a piece of paper...above the number has written "Carlos"she waits for it to ring then she smiles slightly as she talks...)
MARY ALICE: "Maybe in life we are like garderners for our friends and family...when there grass fades we fix it and when it sprouts weeds we... fix them.."
NOTE: Enjoy... let me kno what ya'll think... good or bad...more to come soon promise