Hey, still working onthis piece but jus wanted to show ya's see what ya thnk... hope ya like it...
Wisteria Lane - Nighttime
: Susans house:
It was a steaming hot night on Wisteria lane, the heat made it hard to sleep so almost everyone one was wide awake. Over at Lynettes she sat in Pennys room nursing her hot sweaty baby back to sleep, lynette took one look at those hot little cheeks and knew that it was goingn to be along night. In the next roomover... the boys were wide awake also... Tom crept in to check on them. As he entered the boys closed there eyes tight and tried to hide thier happy smiles from their father... as soon as Tom left the boys opened their eyes jumped from their beds and started squirting each other with water guns they had hiden in their beds..
Bree didnt like the heat...at all she sat at her kitchen table eating ice cubes... her hair was messed and tangled at the front because of the heat which had caused her to sweat. she layed her arm long on the tabled and her head rested on her arm. Danielle was perched infront of the fridge wih bothe the fridge and freezer doors open to cool her...
Susan, julie and Asha... were lying across the lounge room and kitchen, where they had dragged their mattresses... down from up stairs... Susan tosses and turned... making it hotter... while the girls Julie lyed on half on her bed with her legs from the knee down rested on the couch as she sucked on an red ice block. Asha... laid on her matress with her legs folled up with one leg crossed and rested on the other... she swayed slightly with one hand holding a green ice block and the other twirling her hair.
At Gabrielles house it was quiet not a stir it was darkened downstairs. Upstairs in her bedroom... there was a night light on next to her side table on the side table was two pieces of paper... one was a fact sheet , it had a spill on it but there was a collection of informations and facts about anaemia still ledgible on it. The other piece of paper a photo of her baby... under the photo it had written... SGB (small-for-dates-baby) "Solis".
Gabrielle was wide awake rearranging her house... a side to gabrielle that wasn often seem was in full force. in one hand she held a catalouge... full of baby furnitue ... the other was rested on her hip... she stood in a room with a chair and a book case and pointed out things... as if she were setting up a room...(babies room :) ) she seemed unphased by the heat ...she was content...
:Gabrielles house, babies room, she has the phone in one hand:
MARY ALICE: "The summer brought many things... the heat was one of them! When i was alive i never enjoyed the heat along with my four friends... now a year later maybe things had changed maybe the heat had melted... the ice... from Gabrielle solis heart?
Gabreille: humming (dialing a number on the phone)
Bree: Hello...(sort of whinning)
Gabrielle: Bree! your up...
Bree: Gabby... yea im up... whats wrong ?
Gabrielle: Its late you should be in bed not answering your phone...
Bree: Gabrielle... you rang me what did ya want me to do.. listen to the phone ring?
Gabrielle: Well ...no..i..
Bree: Sorry...its hot and im tired... i didnt mean to be grumpy...
Gabrielle: No . no its okay...so anyway... i was wondering... do u preffer carpet or polished floor...?
Bree: WHat...?
Gabrielle: Carpet or polished floor come on bree you kno this stuff ..
Bree: Ah... polished floor i guess... why..?
Gabrielle: Well i wa...s(takes a bit to say this) i was... jus ya kno figurring out some ideas for a... nusery
Bree: Gabby...im so happy! so it clicked huh..?
Gabrielle: (silent) so polished?
Bree: Yea maybe a bunny mat or something ...
Gabrielle: Bunny mat got it!.. okay...
Bree:chuckles
Gabrielle: WHAT!...Bree...
Bree: (Laughs a little) Oh no honey its nothing ... its jus cute... thats all...
Gabrielle: Yea yea...well if u can manage to keep cuteness outta this i could do with a hand over here ... say tomorro?
Bree: Of course... ! cuteness gone... id love to help...
Gabrielle: Thanks i could use the help..
Bree: So tell me ... you okay about yesterday you kno susan was only...(gets cut off)
Gabrielle: I kno i kno she means well and hey... its not like i havent cheated on my husband before
Bree: Gabby..
Gabrielle: No its okay... i overreacted... i haven been feeling well lately so... ive been snappy
Bree: Is everythink okay honey?
Gabrielle: ya...(she sits in a rocking chair) no... i had an appointment last week i though something was wrong ...ya kno i had pains an stuff ... but its okay...im fine now..
Bree: Oh Gabby...what was it
Gabrielle: The doctor says i have anaemia... its not serious im fine...
Bree: And the baby? (concerned)
Gabrielle: The baby too.. the doctors says the baby is a bit too small but everythinks fine now...
Bree: Oh sweetie why didnt you say anythink?
Gabrielle; I didnt kno what was going on... i dnt wana bother you guys with my things...
Bree: Its not bother
Gabrielle: Im fine now okay... really anyways ... im getting some more ideas so... i better i go
Bree: Okay...sweetie (yawns)
Gabrielle: Go get some sleep (hangs up)
:CUT TO SUSANS LIVING ROOM:
(susan is sleeping out on a chair on the porch, Julie and Asha are wide awake talking sucking on thier ice block while lying around the floor)
Julie: Am not!
Asha: You so are..
Julie: Im so not!...am i...is it that obvious?
Asha: Its completley obvious...only too me tho he doesnt kno your madly in love with him ...and planning your wedding everytime u speak to him (giggles)
Julie: (throws pillow) Shut up! Billys nice...he nice right
Asha: Yea, yea hes nice okay... what do i care as long as im bridesmaid in the wedding im happy! (the girls play fight with pillows)
Julie: (after long pause from the playful fight) So... you ever think about what your weddings gonna b like?
Asha: (Laughs)Billy and Julie sittin in a tree...K-I-S-S-I-N (CUTS OF)(Julie hits her playfully)
Asha: Okay okay...(shielding herself from julie) ya wen i get married im going to have pink as my theme colour...six bridesmaids... flowers will be pink littlies...(turns to julie) there really hard to get ya kno...!... how about you what are you and Billy gonna have?
Julie: (the pair exchange looks) Well im happy with simple... nice dress ... lilac for my one bridesmaid (grabs Ashas hand acknowledging that she will be the bridesmaid) and then white flowers...any i dont care...and purple ribbons... and then ya kno jus a small reception maybe at home or somethin... nice and simple..
Asha: Not me i want big... all big buffet, waiters you name it!
Julie:(laughs) Oh and how are you gonna pay for it...?
Asha: Well we both kno ma parents wont chip in right...! maybe ...i dunno my sister...or mayb ill jus marry some really rich guy!
Julie: (they become serious) It must be hard ...living withyour parents...
Asha: (silent) yah...it never use to be so bad...like when i was little ... i was the baby... i mean my dad he use to pick on my brother sister but never me...i wasnt ever scared or nothing...
Julie: So what do u thnk happened...why are they so mean now?
Asha: I dont kno... when my brother died everythink jus fell apart from there... my sister.. she lost it he- my dad- started to take it out on her...like he use to with Theo, sometimes he'd hit her so much she would have to stay home from school so no one would kno...she got so sick of it one day i woke up and she was gone... she always use to say she would leave she use to tell me she would come back for me...
Julie: And...
Asha: She hasnt as yet...but hey ya never kno...
Julie: ... must suck ... you can stay here as long as you like...my mom doesnt care...
Asha: I wish my parent were like your mum... i dnt think ive ever had a converstaion with my dad that hasnt endedin tears... or bruises!
Julie: Im sorry Ash... i dnt kno what to say... its not right that he can do that
Asha: Hey its okay... its not ...but... i can deal with it... i can leave 4 good soon...
Julie: Where would you go... you should jus live here.!
Asha: Hm...yea ur mom would love that...hey jules dont worry... i think i can come outta this relativley normal..thats . . if i get out..
Julie: I wish we could tell my mom so they couldnt hurt you no more...(Asha looks at julie) i know...we cant... but dont you wish...jus sometimes...
Asha: Ya i wish...but hey listen (she sits up) a few years ago i heard that my sister ... was happily married...and rich in some big old house.. some people from my street said they saw her.. jus wait when i am old enough to move out for good... that could be me some day...
Julie: Yea well i hope you do end up happy... but hey u dont gotta b rich jus take a look at my mums friend across the road she is rich married has everythink she could ever want... but shes not happy... she had an affair with the gardener and then her husban went to jail... now she's having a baby that sge doesnt want... jus promise youll get the happy part first...then jus let the rest follow..okay...
Asha: Yes MOM!... Hey as long as were still friends ill be happy... and i guess it wouldn be all bad to ya kno get a little of Gabrielles luck either huh...ya kno as long as im happy...
Julie: Gabrielle?
Asha: yah...thats my sister... Gabrielle
(julie quickly sits up)
Julie: Oh boy' she looks jus like you right blonde hair blue eyes..?
Asha: Hmm..no... i was the outcast looked nothing like Theo or Gabrielle...they both have dark hair and eyes and tanned skin not like me all pale n stuff..we were all short tho...
Julie: Oh boy!...
MARY ALICE: "It was true the ice had thorn... but was it about to freeze once more...?"
TO BE CONTINUED...i see some stairs in the near future... hint hint