Okay, Lesson 1 will be the next chapter, this is the part of the actual
story where Kenshin learns of this new training.
I don't own Kenshin or Hiko or any other charactures(but sure wouldn't mind
it).
Thanks to Volk Zyta, Arien2, and Hecate for reviewing, I hope you won't be disappointed with the story. I'm trying this present tense-ish form right now, R&R and tell me if you like it this way (like if you can follow it),
or think I should write with a different style.
thoughts inside Hiko's head
something said just between Hiko and Kenshin when people are around
A New Skill to Learn
The sun has risen barely above the horizon spreading a warm glow across the land. Hiko sits on a log, by the small campfire that is set up with breakfast cooking. He pours himself another cup of sake and slowly brings it up to his lips. (YES!!! Of course Hiko is drinking sake in the morning! What else would he be doing?)
Twelve-year-old Kenshin stumbles out into the warm morning sun, half dressed without his shirt on. Hiko calmly raises his head from his sake cup at the sound of Kenshin's footsteps. Without turning to look at his apprentice, Hiko speaks:
"Good morning Kenshin. Did you sleep well?"
Kenshin looks up, "Oro? Oh, hai Master, I slept well"
"Good, because today you learn something new, something powerful. It is a skill that will open you up to knew knowledge & wisdom."
"But you say that every day, Master."
"SILENCE BAKA DESHI!!! This is different. This is an art that uses the speed, power and agility of the Hiten Misurugi Style, along with personality skills, that you are yet to learn you pathetic, shy, naive little fool."
"And what is this art, Master?"
Hiko raises his sake cup triumphantly, "Womanizing, you will become a sex god Kenshin!!!
"A sex god, Master?"
"Oh yes, I haven't explained the birds and the bees to you yet, have I? Oh well," He takes a sip of sake "get dressed. We're going into town for this first lesson."
There, the first regular chapter, sorry that it's so short; the next one will be better. With school it's hard to get chapters done now. Oh well, it's a parody, not that much suspense or anything. I'll try to get next chapter done as soon as possible. Later, LC
story where Kenshin learns of this new training.
I don't own Kenshin or Hiko or any other charactures(but sure wouldn't mind
it).
Thanks to Volk Zyta, Arien2, and Hecate for reviewing, I hope you won't be disappointed with the story. I'm trying this present tense-ish form right now, R&R and tell me if you like it this way (like if you can follow it),
or think I should write with a different style.
thoughts inside Hiko's head
something said just between Hiko and Kenshin when people are around
A New Skill to Learn
The sun has risen barely above the horizon spreading a warm glow across the land. Hiko sits on a log, by the small campfire that is set up with breakfast cooking. He pours himself another cup of sake and slowly brings it up to his lips. (YES!!! Of course Hiko is drinking sake in the morning! What else would he be doing?)
Twelve-year-old Kenshin stumbles out into the warm morning sun, half dressed without his shirt on. Hiko calmly raises his head from his sake cup at the sound of Kenshin's footsteps. Without turning to look at his apprentice, Hiko speaks:
"Good morning Kenshin. Did you sleep well?"
Kenshin looks up, "Oro? Oh, hai Master, I slept well"
"Good, because today you learn something new, something powerful. It is a skill that will open you up to knew knowledge & wisdom."
"But you say that every day, Master."
"SILENCE BAKA DESHI!!! This is different. This is an art that uses the speed, power and agility of the Hiten Misurugi Style, along with personality skills, that you are yet to learn you pathetic, shy, naive little fool."
"And what is this art, Master?"
Hiko raises his sake cup triumphantly, "Womanizing, you will become a sex god Kenshin!!!
"A sex god, Master?"
"Oh yes, I haven't explained the birds and the bees to you yet, have I? Oh well," He takes a sip of sake "get dressed. We're going into town for this first lesson."
There, the first regular chapter, sorry that it's so short; the next one will be better. With school it's hard to get chapters done now. Oh well, it's a parody, not that much suspense or anything. I'll try to get next chapter done as soon as possible. Later, LC