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The following review has been submitted to: Waiting here Chapter: 9

From: hey ()
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What the hell its not rape she kissed him you should know you wrote the fucking story. Also i don't have any feelings i'm as cold as can be. I had it worst than any one. Why should I treat people with kindness? Guys who cry are weak,pussys,or good actors. The last one wasn't a flame I didn't cuss at you did I? I only hated that chapter not the story. Kagome didn't stop him or scream she just sat there not trying to move. How do you know it won't happen agian? Ok nevermind you won't write it won't you. How were you being mean? You think calling me ignorant is bad. Do you think I really care? I been called worse than any of your insults you can ever bring up. Saying I have no feelings I dont care. Keep the chapter I don't care do what you want its your story.

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TO MAKE THIS CLEAR!

It ISISISISISISISISI IS! Rape if she said NO TO SEX! RAPE IS UNWANTED SEXUAL CONTACT! Just because you kiss someone does NOT give them the right to have sex with you if you say NO! If you think I'm lying, look it up, if at ANY TIME she says NO, it is RAPE!

And if you say that you have it worst than anyone, that right there is ignorance, I'm not being mean. But it's the truth. People say my life has sucked, but they are ignorant. There's always someone out there that has it worse than you, I apologize to you on behalf of the unkind world for what it has done to you, but please. Don't take it out like this?

Guys can cry.

Mean? Me? I'm generally (I try to be) nice to people, this, to me, is being mean. Very mean. DO I think you care? I care.

Sorry for the fake chappie again. I just think you all should understand the RAPE situation better. All as in ALL READERS!

Another note, I AM taking out the rape scene and diluting it, it's so graphic I can't read it without feeling like retching. Yeah, seen worse (life not fics, but they are blurred aren't they? Hahaha) but I don't like to add that to my stories.

I'm not tweaking over this review just cuz. I take criticism extremely well, it's just this reviewer is bothering me.

Tell me what you think. Is this what you all, out in reviewer-land are thinking?