Ok heres my update. Please Read and Review!

Oh and these characters, some are not like the real person. Like Juliana does not have a voice that sounds like chimes. Not that I'm saying her voice is bad, it just doesn't sound like chimes. But some are almost exactly the same as the real person. Like the character Brittany is my friend in real life. (A character later on in the story) She has a very big ego like the character in the story. No offense to Brittany, it's just the truth and she herself accepts it.

Juliana

When Emily woke she noticed she was in a dirty abandoned warehouse. Old cardboard boxes were scattered all over the floor. She saw two rats scurry from a box into a hole in the wall. She shuddered and tired to rub the cold out of her shoulders.

But she couldn't, she was sitting in a steel chair that was bolted to the concrete floor. Her hands were tied to the arm rests and her feet were tied to a metal bar holding the legs of the chair together. She struggled, she tried to make the ropes more loose so she could slip her hands out. But try as she might she could not loosen the ropes at all.

Silly Girl...

It was a female voice, it sounded beautiful. All most like chimes, it was musical and made her ears tingle. She turned to look around to find where the voice had come from. She found no one, she looked everywhere around the room.

Then she saw someone step out from behind a stack of boxes. Emily gasped, the girl was stunningly beautiful. The girl was wearing a black spandex outfit with a fur linned cape. She had pitch black hair to her waist, icy blue eyes, a slender figure, anda skyblue jewel on the base of her throat.They matched the one Raven from the teen titans. She reconized it as the kind of jewel people who use Chakras. Chakras are like power points used in meditation. There is a line of them running down the front of the body. She knew that the Chakra's at the base of the throats were called Cornucopia Center.

She wondered if this girl used Chakras. The jewel have nothing to do with the Chakras, their just to help identify people that use Chakras. The girl stepped forward, towards Emily. Emily shivered, those eyes were staring at hers. It seemed as if they looked right into her soul. Like she knew what Emily was thinking.

Hello, you must be wondering what your doing here tied up. Well see I'm going to kill you and I didn't want you to escape. My name is Juliana, I've been tracking you for quite some time. Your a very slippery fish but now I've caught you and you are mine to kill.

When Juliana spoke her lips did not move. It was almost like she was mind speaking, but her voice seemed to fill up the whole room. It was very odd how she was speaking.

"Why do you want to kill me, I've done nothing to you. I don't even know you!" Emily said.

Oh, but you've done more to me than most could accomplish in a life time. You have succeeded to do this all in a matter of years. I loathe you and your existance!

Juliana was getting angry, a bright red flushed over her cheeks. Juliana closed her eyes and found her center, she calmed herself. Emotions would just make this even harder. She sneered at Emily.

Do you even know who your parents are dear Emily?

Emily got angry "No, I do not I'm an orphan. The couple that adopted me died two years ago in a car crash. I have not been able to find anything out about my birth parents." She got a confused look on her face. Why did I tell her all that?

How old are you?

"Eighteen" Emily replied.

Of course, Well I'll tell you a story that started eighteen years ago:

Once apon a time there was a girl named Celeste...