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It had been weeks since her first day at school it had been rought and a knew experiance. But ginny and emma thought they handled it well. She had her first flying lesson harry helped to teach seeing that they had such a big class and the teacher was getting old. And the point he is the best flyer in centuries. He told she was a natural and the teacher thought so too. Mcgonagal said she was at the flying leval harry potter was in his first year maybe even above.
They wanted to put her on the team like they had harry potter. But there was only one problem they had second years who wanted to try out to and that was only fair. She had to go throught tryouts just like the second years if she realy wanted a position. Angelina was out this year because she had a condition that if she hot pushed arround could make her go into trauma. And she may never be able to fly again so she had to tack a year or soo off.
The tryouts were a week away and many anxiouse kids in harry, hermione, and rons grade. The week passed by fast and soon the saterday morning that she was to try out arrived. Harry and hermione made her eat it was the best thing even if thought she didnt want to. Harry walked down with her to the field. Seeing that he was already on the team and had to judge wheather she was going to make it or not.
Things whent by god when they were all teasted in a group then they were broken down individually. They were played in the position that they would be filling and there were many magnificent flyers but they just couldent get the job done hold on to the ball or they would get flown of there brooms. Then it was emmas turn to shine she hoped on her broom and sored into starting possition. the other players were in aww of what she could do in such a short time frame. Then it was all over and other second yearers had to tryout to.
They had to wait a week to find out the results to the tryouts. The week was a living hell for emma not knowing was her worst subject. The gang tried to get he throught it the night before she found out she had one of her dreams that soon after become reality. She fell asleep after reading some more of her book "Little Women" and she found herself on the ground of the quiditchs stadium she had fallen of her broom. Harry bent over and kissed her on the face and emma on the ground woke up.
Emma in the dream asked what happened harry explained one of the beaters on the slitherin team had nocked her to the ground. He picked her up and the snow begain to gover the bloody snow in the stadium.He held her to his shoulder and carried her to the hospital wing everyone had thoughjt her dead and left her there but she was alive and invicibal. Before they made it to the hospital wing she woke up with a sense she was going to make it! She woke up the next day and practically hurried to get dressed and tell harry, hermione, ron , and ginny the good news but she remembered she couldent tell them. Well not untill she read the papper so they won know her secreate.
She ran down stairs to the great hall all she had to waith throught was breakfast because after breackfast the person who made Angelinas spot will be posted.She ate pancakes and syrup and many other foods. She ate so fast that they thought she would choke if she went any faster.When she was done she hurried upstairs it was a saterday and the first practice if she made it whichh she knew she did. When she got inside the commen room nobody had posted the paper yet so she waited by the fire.
Everyone piled into the commen room for the announcement of who mad the team. Angelina started talking " Everyone was very good and it was hard to choose from so many amazing athleates". " But i made a decision with the help of the reast of the team". " And the knew adition of the Grifindore team is Emma she seems to have the same geanes and anticipation that our own Harry Potter has". Everyone clapped and clapped and angelina gave emma a bit of advice " If you thought tryouts were hard guess again because practices are even harder.
They went down to the Quiditch field and started to work.Emma fit in just nicley and seemed to get along with everyone. Everything came easy to her and she never had a problem. For weeks they had many practices. And soon the day before their big first match against Slytherine came. Emma was excited but yet scared. Was she really as good as everyone said she was. Would she mess up. Wouls she ever be as good as angelina was . would she be a disgrace .
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