Chapter Seventeen
AN: Thanks so much for all reviews! I really really appreciate them, and all your thoughts and suggestions. You guys are so great I never would have imagined getting more than 100 when I started, and I hope that when I continue this story, I'll be deserving of a lot more! And to the readers who don't review. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story.
This is the end of Part One.
Part Two, is going to have more chapters, and is going to be shippy, so don't worry. I've actually written out the plot, and then changed it, and then changed it again, there might be some 'Pete-whomping' in there if you want it (which I'm sure you do) and your good :D The plots a bit tricky which is why I've been changing it. A very kind reviewer pointed out that I don't update fast enough. Taking this into consideration I've decided to finish writing and type up at least ¾ of the story before I begin posting. As such, it might take a while before I get it. I'm hoping that it will be ready to post by New Years. Which will be exactly a year since I joined It's been a good year.
I dedicate this whole story, to Lynnie, Jennyvre Moss, for her support, for being my friend and Stargate buddy, for her advice on this story, and for her patience. :big hug: I hope you get to read this before you leave tomorrow!
Anyway, don't hate me when you read this, and keep swearing to a minimum (no I'm not joking) and with that said, I shall let you read… (wow my AN is bigger than the chapter practically)
'Jack!' Daniel came into the very very large garage, big enough to hold spacecraft probably, stood absolutely shocked at Jack's position. 'What are you doing?'
'Don't come any closer, Daniel.' He said warningly, a sharp, painful look in his eyes. 'I have to do this.'
Daniel immediately knew what he was on about. 'Jack, Sam wouldn't have wanted this. You know how she feels about it.' Daniel was horrified. How had this idea ever come into his head? Considering what had happened the last time…
'No, Daniel. Sam's lost to me now, and I can't live without her. I want it to be me. It should be me. We should be raising a family, the two of us. Together. I love her and I can't handle it anymore. I thought I could but it hurts too much. This is the only way I can change it.' Daniel took a tentative step forwards. Well, at least let me-.'
'No!' Jack shook his head sadly. 'I have to do this alone.' He looked at his friend.
'See you 'round, Daniel.' With a final fiddling of the triggers, he pulled it, and with a resounding crack, he disappeared, and the world turned black before Daniel's eyes.
End of Part One….
TO BE CONTINUED!
Stay tuned for Part Two… Coming in the New Year… or maybe sooner depending on how many reviews I get! I'd love to know what you think:hint hint: