A New Way to Meet

Ok people this is my second story. So i am still relatively new but all critism is wanted, but i would like more positive please. Ok on with the story.

A new way to meet---

Ch.1 The Place after the Chase

"Let's get her!" come a call from a band of boys.

"Yeah, that little thief needs to be taught a lesson." Called the leader of the group. The group consists of teenage looking boys. The leader, older looking that the others, was running after a dog that was all black except its paws, the tips of her ears and the end of her tail. She was holding a loaf of bread in her mouth. She was attempting to eat while running but was leaving a crumb trail behind her.
"Hey! She's eat it." Yelled a boy that had noticed her attempts.
"She'll get it now." Mumbled the leader. "Get her; throw things at her, do something to stop her." He commanded
The group started to pick rocks up along the trail they were chasing the dog down, and were chunking them at her.
When she felt stuff hit her hard she came into a clearing. Pausing to look around the clearing, she noticed a well. She ran over and saw nothing in it and decided to use that as a hiding place.
She jumped inside just in time because that's when the boys come to the clearing. They didn't see a trace of their culprit. "Check that well." Ordered the leader when he noticed id. "You never know. That dog could have picked up tricks from the demons around the area.
Two of the teens went over to check it out with a "Yes Sir." They peered in. "Sorry boss only water." They reported, and walked back to the group.
"Damn, bitch! Don't ever come back, bitch, or your hide'll be mine to wear!!!" With that the ban of boys left the leader in front. They didn't know that someone was watching them.
His eyes watching them leave. When they were out of sight, they turned their attention to the well. He had seen the dog with half a loaf of bread jump into it and just disappeared and water appeared.
All of the sudden the water rippled and the water popped out on to the grass forming the dogs shape. She shook off the water and was back to her black dog self with silver tipped ears, tail and paws. She still had the loaf of bread in her mouth. She layed it down and accessed herself for injuries.
She felt eyes on her, but didn't show it. Instead went about her business. She liked the how the clearing felt to her. She walked over to a great big tree that she suspected was a God tree by its size. She accessed the root placement and found a spot and dug out a small den for herself under the tree.
She went over to one of the bushes with the biggest leaves and picked one. She pick up the half of bread she had left and started to wrap it in the leaf. She held it together with one of the thorns she found and layed it by the entrance and barked into the tree then went to sleep in her den.

A.N.: I know that this story is going to be great because I have the next 4 chappies ready to be typed. Now I'm just waiting for the incentive to type. Oh and if you are wondering who is who just give me your e-mail and I'll tell you, but I have the intro to the characters in the next chappy. Oh and i noticed that the first chapter is always shorter thatn the rest. Hehe that means you get more the next time i update.

R&R please!!

P.S. I don't own inu, kag, or the gang