AN: I know it has been forever, but this week was final week. I have reworked this chapter. I hope you guys find it more to your liking.
And now onto the good stuff!
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Oh my Gawd! Jesse was walking towards me—leaning down on his bed—and taking off his shirt! It was finally happening. Jesse and I were going to make love all night long. Oh God…
Once Jesse shucked his shirt to the floor somewhere near my jeans, all I could do was stare at his chest. I had seen it before (his chest), but I mean, at this moment, it was perfect. I just wanted to get up and touch it to feel his heart beat through the tips of my fingers.
He came closer to me; I uncrossed my legs and sat up on the bed. Jesse's eyes were filled with hunger again, and I nearly swooned at the depths of them. No matter what we were doing, Jesse could always take my breath away.
Jesse reached out and pushed me down gently onto the bed. I fell back onto the soft bedspread and sighed as Jesse stared down at my almost naked body.
"Querida," he whispered while he brushed his fingers over my bare stomach. Oh God, my stomach flipped and I felt like jumping out of my skin.
Jesse looked me over and his eyes darkened and then he leaned himself down onto the bed and kissed me. My mind blew into a million pieces…
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I was bracing myself up while kissing Susannah. We were so close…and almost naked. I could smell her, not that perfume she insisted on wearing, but her honest honeysuckle smell.
Susannah moaned my name. I nuzzled her neck and then nipped her ear and she moaned again.
I moved my hand down her side to her hip and then pulled back her undergarment. While I slipped my hand just under the waistband, Susannah moaned and I caught my breath.
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Jesse was now kissing me with tongue, oh, so much tongue and his hand well was stroking me…and not down there you dirty little people, I mean all over—except there. My stomach, my hair, my neck, my chest. Yes, he had finally gotten to second base. And somewhere along the line, Jesse had taken off my bra.
I was distracting Jesse with my kisses, while my hands were down at his waist, trying to unbutton his pants, so we could be well "matching" if you will. It was really hard to keep my hands at his waist, since his perfect chest and killer abs were right there letting off all this heat.
After concentrating really, really hard I finally got the first button undone and Jesse's head snapped up from our kissing. I looked at him, my eyes innocent.
Needless to say it worked, and Jesse went back to kissing and nuzzling me while I undid the rest of his buttons. Finally (FINALLY!) I was done, and I pushed him off me and unto his feet. He looked down at me puzzled, but then blushed when he realized that I was sliding his jeans off of him. Jesse tried to swat my hands away so he could do it himself, but I wasn't about to let him do it, I wanted to do it. I had been waiting forever to do this with Jesse.
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I was pantless in front of Susannah. Thank God, I still had on my boxer shorts, or I would have been blushing even more than I already was.
She was staring at me. Her eyes scanning me from the tops of my feet to my, well, cough, and up my chest, which she seemed fascinated with and then finally she landed on my eyes. As I stared into hers, I got hopelessly lost.
Without waiting a second longer, I had been pulled off my feet and down onto the bed, with Susannah straddling my sides. She was leaning over me, her hair brushing my chest. It tickled slightly, but if anything it made me even more turned on. I looked mi querida in the eyes, bypassing everything physical about her and going straight to her soul to find the answer to my question.
"Querida," I started, but Susannah put a finger over my lips and shut me up successfully. I had to admit, I loved it when she did that to me. She leaned down and started kissing me on the lips, the neck, and on the chest. I loved the way she ran her hands through my hair and down my side, slightly tickling me on the way down to my waist, where she would then trail my stomach all the way back up to my chest and then finally land in my hair again.
I tore myself away from her lips suddenly and flipped her over. Susannah looked at me with startled eyes, then smiled and leaned up to kiss me, but I put a finger to her lips. I gave her a smile of my own, and saw her eyes light up. I leaned down and kissed her softly while my hands worked their magic getting her bottom undergarments off of her. After she caught on, she helped and they came off in an instant. It was like she has done this before, but when I looked at her with questioning eyes, she just looked at me as if asking, "So when are you going to take off yours?"
I smiled at her, mi querida. I couldn't help it; she made me melt inside.
"Querida," I said while she stared up at me, love filling her eyes and making this easier than I had anticipated. Leaning down, I kissed her soft, luscious lips slowly and tenderly. I admit, I was teasing her, but I needed her clear headed to answer my imperative question.
"Yes Jesse?" She asked me while brushing her fingertips lightly across my chest, tempting me. Oh, how she was tempting me.
"Susannah…will you marry me?"
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I stared at Jesse. I couldn't believe it…he had just asked me to marry him, and I was out of words. I tried to find some, or any, quickly so he wouldn't think that I was hesitating.
I started trying to articulate the simple and obvious answer; Jesse just looked down at me expectantly.
Finally, it came out in a whisper, "Yes."
His eyes lit up and he let out his breath, which I hadn't even noticed he had been holding. I stared into his eyes and then he took my breath away with a kiss.
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AN: Tell me if you guys think this one is better than the first chapter 2!