Love hina: Where is my world?
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Author: You all won't believe how long it took me to get into the site, the bouncer at the door thought I was dead for some reason.

Naru: Well you haven't been around for three months. You left us in the same position for three months! What kind of author are you!

Author: Look, when you get buy Tekken 5, Dynasty Warriors 5, and Diablo II in three weeks of each other. You don't think about fan fiction! I stopped playing Tekken and Dynasty Warriors for now but Diablo II, hah! If you wan't me to update then bring your little scrawny behind to the diablo server and...

Naru: WOULD YOU STOP BEING SUCH A DUNCE AND GET ON WITH THE STORY!

Author: Actually, I don't feel up to it right now.

Naru: right eyebrow twitches Are you serious?

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Knuck: Uhh…sorry? Love Hina crew falls in the background

A. Mills: Yeah, big mistake in uploading. Dial up really screws up when your trying to upload, especially when you are using a slow school computer with about more spy ware than the internet itself. Either way, thanks for the complement.

Shinji the good sharer: I swear these fan fiction dudes don't miss a beat! They smell blood and run straight for it! No offense of course.

DMage96: Thanks for the complement. That means a lot considering I haven't played final fantasy VIII in years. YEARS! I completely forgot almost everything about FFVIII. Except for Fujin, one hitter quitter lines. I'll never forget about those.

Dimitri Plabato: I see the complement and everything but as far as you not writing…I'm not gonna respond to that one.

Sci-fi raptor: Oh my god it Sci-fi raptor! Bows. You wrote the straw the broke the perverts back and the other me! The rest of the dark icon show up and bows "We are not worthy! We are not worthy!"

Disclaimer: Hey! Why is my bank account empty! Love Hina and Final Fantasy sold over a million copies! WHERE IS MY MONEY! WHAT DO YOU MEAN I DON'T GET MONEY BECAUSE I DON'T OWN IT! DAMNIT!

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Chapter 3: Squall vs Motoko

"Those eyes," Motoko said to herself, "those aren't Urishima's eyes." The sun shine reflected off of Motoko's blade right into his eyes. He didn't turn away, and Motoko noted that. She had seen a fierce determination in his eyes. This irked her a bit, but she would be damned if she let that stop her from punishing this Keitaro fill in. Squall bent his knees a bit, then charged at Motoko. She bought her sword up to block Squall's strike. The swords clashed and Motoko found herself on one knee.

'He's strong,' Motoko noted to herself, 'I will have to be on my guard for this one.' Motoko charged her katana with a thin layer of ki and then used her sword to push Squall off of her. Squall stumbled slightly, Motoko saw this as a point of weakness so she went on the offensive. Squall barely brought his blade up to counter Motoko. He didn't know of Motoko's ability to use ki in her attacks so Squall went down to one knee at Motoko's attack. He then swung his leg around to try to trip Motoko. She jumped back a couple of yards before Squall's leg hit.

"Cheap tricks male," Motoko said lightly to herself, "trying to make a fool out of me."

"Are you saying I can't fight because I'm a male," Squall inquired.

Motoko, surprised that he actually heard her comment, "I don't have to answer to you!"

Before Squall could respond to that Motoko swung her blade, "BOLDER CUTTING BLADE."

Squall gave her a confused look, 'bolder cutting blade,' he thought. Before he could figure out what was going on, he was blown towards the edge of the roof. By the time he stood up Motoko was about three yards away from him, katana above her head.

"Zankusen" Squall had predicted that she would do another ki attack so he jumped as soon as he heard her call out the attack. Motoko saw him jump in the air. "Got you," she said lightly to herself. She swung her sword towards Squall's direction, "BOLDER CUTTING BLADE!" Squall knew that the ki blast would blow him off of the roof and the reunion with the ground below would have been painful. Almost without thinking, he went into a nose dive. The blast blew him upward a bit but because of him putting all of his strength and weight into his dive he was able to fall right through it.

'How did he,' Motoko thought to herself, 'no matter, as soon as he gets down he'll have no time to recover.' Motoko traced her adversary carefully as he landed gracefully on the ground. 'Now,' her mind shouted, "Zankusen!" Once again Squall was sent rolling towards the opposite side of the roof. He recovered quickly and stood up, gunblade at the ready.

'Huh," Squall mused, 'she's gone.' Motoko was no where to be found.

"Looking for me," Motoko asked sarcastically appearing behind Squall, blade above her head. Squall did a 180 (term from resident evil) and used his blade to hit Motoko's katana, knocking her off balance. Squall saw this weak point in her defense and capitalized on it. "RENZOKUKEN" (you all remember what Squall's first limit break looks like right?). Motoko found herself struggling to block Squall's onslaught, she was starting to get frustrated and she was breathing heavily. The way she figured, the only person that should be able to make her struggle against was her sister. Out of desperation she charged her katana with ki and aimed for Squall's neck. His gunblade happened to be at the right place and at the right time to block.

Squall was shocked at how close the blade came to his neck. He convinced himself that this would be a fight for survival but he had no idea there would be any truth to that statement. Motoko, however, was extremely pissed off that someone other than her sister would make her feel inferior, let alone a male. Still in the deadlock, Motoko took a cheap shot with her foot towards Squalls shin. That brought him down to one knee. Motoko stopped the deadlock, jumped about three feet in the air and came down with all her might, "ROCK SPLITTING SWORD!" Squall bought his gunblade up to counter. After Motoko figured Squall had successfully blocked her attack again, she canceled it and jumped back about five yards. Squall got back on his feet, dusted himself off, and looked Motoko dead in her eyes.

"Congratulations," he said still holding his gunblade. It split in half vertically across the blade as soon as he let go of the handle. 'Attack him again,' Motoko's mind screamed, 'honor and tradition be damned!' Motoko obeyed her thoughts and charged Squall again.

'I thought with sword fights the match would be over if a person lost their weapon, or their life' Squall thought, 'doesn't matter, if she wants to keep going, fine!'

Squall stretched his arms out in front of him, "FIRA!" A blaze of flames rushed at Motoko. She was too far gone in her own rage to care. Squall had successfully pressed the kendo girl's buttons enough to push her over the edge in battle. She charged right through the flames and was able to send Squall flying off of the inn roof.

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"That's all you remember," Kitsune asked with a hint of concern while scrubbing Naru's back. The two were soaking in the hotsprings.

"I'm pretty sure that's it," Naru confirmed, "I vaguely remember what happened before I fell asleep. But I woke up at the bottom of the stairs leading to the roof. My stomach was hurting for some reason so I came here."

"Do you remember anything before that," Kitsune asked.

"Not really," Naru answered, "I remember," her eyes widened suddenly as something clicked in her mind, "Keitaro! That little perverted troll!"

"Keitaro put you to sleep," Kitsune asked

"No," Naru roared, "he was trying on my panties!"

"Maybe you should give him a break," Kitsune suggested pouring a bucket of water on Naru.

"Give that little pervert a break," Naru scoffed, "HA! I've seen bad things from him before but trying on my panties? How many times do I have to say that! Trying-on-my-panties!"

"I know it looks bad," Kitsune continued, "but seriously hon, do you think Keitaro would actually sneak into your room, go through your clothes in your room to pick out a pair of panties, then go back to his room and try them on?"

"Yes," Naru said without hesitation, "sounds just like the little perv. Besides, why are you defending him?"

'The way you and Motoko was threatening to skin him alive might have something to do with it,' Kitsune thought. "No reason, it just doesn't sound like something Keitaro would do."

Before Naru could say anything else, something landed right in the middle of the spring, causing a big wave to lift the two girls from their seats and out of the springs. "Oww," Naru complained, "what was that about?"

Before Kitsune could say anything Squall stood up from the spring. Naru and Kitsune looked at each other, then ran into the dorm screaming their lungs out. Squall looked over at the two towel clad girls, then directly into the sky, he had barely enough time to jump as Motoko impaled the spot he was standing in with her katana. Squall stretched his arms out in front of him again, "THUNDARA!"

Now we all know electricity and water don't mix. So imagine if a bolt…err…bolts of lightning was to strike down in a hot spring…not pretty. Motoko had no time to get out of the spring before the lightning hit. The initial shock sent her flying out of the spring, while the others made the hinita sou hot spring into a death trap. From Squall's viewpoint Motoko was done for the night. He slumped down on the side of the building staring at a not moving Motoko. "God, that was intense," he said to himself. He shut his eyes and let his head slump down slightly.

"Get up male," Motoko's voice knocked Squall out of his early since of victory. Squall opened his eyes to find himself sitting on Motoko's blade. She forcefully swung her blade, launching Squall about eight feet into the air, "EVIL CUTTING BLADE!" Squall had no time to react, he was at the mercy of a deadly female supremacist. Lucky for him, the water and lightning combination drained her of most of her strength, so her attack wasn't as fatal as she hoped. However, her attack was still strong enough to send Squall up in the air, high enough to hit a few high flying birds.

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The roof was on the verge of breaking apart when Squall and Motoko took their fight to the hot spring. If a person was standing up there, they could almost feel the pain of every crater and crack, from hard landings here to missed attacks there. So when Squall came crashing back onto it from Motoko's last attack didn't help it at all.

"What do I have to do to make her stay down," Squall yelled clearly frustrated. Motoko landed on the roof shortly after. Instead of landing with her usual grace she stumbled slightly. Squall struggled to his feet, feeling completely naked without the gunblade in his hands.

"This ends now," Motoko said pointing her blade at Squall. It shook violently as it seemed she was struggling to stand on her own two feet.

"It should have been over already," Squall said between staggered breathing.

"I will admit," Motoko continued, "you are a formidable adversary but you mistake….WAS FILLING IN FOR URISHIMA!"

With that said she started to charge all of her remaining ki into her blade. She was hell bent on ending this now. Squall put two fingers in the middle of his forehead with closed eyes. All of a sudden the sky darkened and the wind started howling. Motoko was still charging her blade, but these strange events caused her to stand and observe. The wind blew harder and harder while the sky turned completely black.

"What's going on," Motoko asked no one in particular. All of a sudden a path was lit by flames starting from the sky and ending where Motoko was standing (does anyone remember this?). All of a sudden a big train with a skull on the front came out of the sky and roared down the path.

"What is that," Motoko yelled. She felt like she was staring in the face of death himself. Instead of bowing out, she went into a full sprint down the fire lit path. Squall was standing in the middle, with his two fingers still on his forehead. As soon as the train got behind Squall, Motoko jumped into the air, "EVIL CUTTING BLADE SECOND FORM!" Squall, Motoko and her attack, and doom train collided into one.

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Aftermath: I'm sure some of you readers may have noticed a time conflict. Apparently, Keitaro was dropped off a little before the Dollet mission, but in Hinita Sou, Squall has the ability to call Doomtrain. Well, remember when Keitaro was swimming around in between dimensions in the first chapter? Because of that, Keitaro was able to go back in time instead of just making a normal switch. Anyway, you people don't want to hear this, this is just me trying to cover up for a bad plot hole. grins