I apologize FIRSTLY (if any of you were at all uncomfortable) for Kartik's ahem overt show of emotion during the "Emily" scene. I'm afraid I've put a bit too much of myself into Kartik's character ...and he was originally supposed to be furious at Emily not sad...well a bit of both, but more furious.
Also, Maddycat2000's comment of how Emily knew of Kartik's staying at the pub (check the reviews page) is a very intelligent one, and I forgot to assess this very important factor when "writing" the chapter. I am truly sorry for the mix-up, and I don't see how I can rectify the chapter aside from rewriting it all over ..and to be honest, I don't think I'll be able to, due to lack of time (School is coming up, to my great chagrin).
And Lily (bless her) provided the author of the quote I had used at the very end of the chapter: Jonathon Larson.
Thank you all for being so patient with my mistakes, and for the constructive criticism. Regarding updates, I am unsure of when the next chapter will be up (I shall have to nick my friend's copy of Rebel Angels...somehow...I am of course joking, by 'nick' I mean 'beg shamelessly for'.) Til then, you'll probably see me reviewing some of your guys' works! (during weekends, of course.) grins
I hope you've all had a Merry Christmas, and best wishes to the upcoming year!
