Author's Note: Hey, luv's! I just want to thank u for reviewing. ESPECIALLY WILLIZ, SAIYA-FLAME-FAIRY, BLACKMAGIC365, AND ROCKYRELAY! I love u guy's sooo much! wink
Williz- Hahahaha! When I read all the little laughs in your review, I started laughing myself. Weird huh? Lol. I'm so glad that I'm making you laugh happy left and right. Just to let you know, I've never written a romance chapter in my life. So it may not be all that and a bag o' chips. Hehe. blush Thanks for the little 'comical genius' remark. That made feel all warm and fuzzy inside. YAY! I'M A CHEEKY MONKEY! wink Luv ye, peach!
Rockyrelay- Luv ye, Luv Ye, LUV YE! OMG, what can I say about you Rocky? You're just so bloody awesome! What am I going to do with you? sigh Well, if I tell you everything about you that makes you such a terrific reviewer, IT WOULD FILL UP THIS WHOLE PAGE! So, I'll just dedicate this chpt. to you and the other 3. Hope you enjoy! BTW, I've never, in my whole 13 years of living, ever written a romance, so bare with me, mate! wink
Blackmagic365- hugs you tightly I LUV YOU BLACKMAGIC! You, Rockyrelay, Williz, and Saiya-Flame-Fairy have been with me ever since I first started writing this story. Well, three out of you four. But it's not you that hasn't always been here. Therefore, I thank you very, very, very, very, very, much. Lol. BTW, you're excitement about me continuing this story really made me smile. grins Oooh! You're sooo welcome for the comment about your grandfather. My granny died last year. So I give you empathy. YOU'RE UPDATING YOUR STORY! Booya! I've been waiting for it for quite some time now. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! BTW, I read the reviews for it. THOSE PEOPLE ARE SO UPTIGHT! I mean, so what you didn't use a name that was usually for a girl of that century. IT'S NO BIGGY! Sheesh. Then they flame you on saying your chapters are too short. SO? I've read a story that had one paragraph as a chapter before, and they expected me to review that. Pshaw. Wasanever! Lol. blush I'm feeling fuzzy inside for your comment about me being such a good updater. LUV YOU, PEACH!
Saiya-Flame-Fairy- Yes, that was a bummer for poor Jack. He told me because I kidnapped him and he's currently messing up the house, looking for some blasted rum! But anyway, shh, don't tell Disney. Hehe. THANKS FOR REVIEWIN', LUV! grinHarry Potter's Elf Friend- I hope I didn't keep you waiting too long for this chapter. I had lost my fan fiction notebook the other day and just found it today. You want to know how? BECAUSE MY FRIEND TOOK IT HOME TO READ WHEN I WASN'T LOOKING! She took it out of my book bag and took with her on the bloody school bus. So, I busted her today in orchestra class. Grr. I should have hit her with my violin for making me panic so much! But I won't because she's my beeest friend ever. Anywho, I hope you enjoy this chapter. See ya, matey! wink
Onto What You Guys Really Came Here For:
Will Turner walked down to the park to meet his beloved Elizabeth at around 5:00 PM, just so they could talk and have fun. When he arrived at Springfield Park, it looked amazing! The large green trees shadowed together above a brown sitting bench. The sun's setting colors painted the sky with beautiful reds, oranges, purples, Golds, ands pinks. Like some little kid who was finger painting in art class. There were colorful flowers planted in random areas, and occasionally, there would be a big butterfly that would land on said flowers. It was almost like some type dreamland.
"Maybe I should start coming here during the evening. This is so gorgeous."
"I know." Said a familiar female voice from behind him.
Will turned around quickly, only to come face to face with the beautiful Elizabeth Swann.
"Hi. I didn't hear you."
She only smiled.
"Well," Liz started. "shall we walk?"
"We shall." Then he held out his arm and Liz looped hers through as they walked down the store path, towards the large lake area.
"You know, Liz, this day just gets stranger and stranger."
"What do you mean?"
"Well…I went to Jack's house today."
"And?"
"He was having…tea."
"Regular tea or tea tea?"
"Tea tea."
They looked at one another for a brief second and then started laughing. Once they were done, they had arrived at the little sitting area by the sparkling lake.
In the far distance, you could hear a quartet of musicians. There was a viola player, a cello player, and two violinists. (A/N: Hey, I play a violin too! lol.) They played the song "My Heart Will Go On". (A/N: Hey, I played that song too! lol)
"Milady." Will said as he held out his hand for a dance. Elizabeth smiled and took his hand as he led her to a grassy area. She blushed when he kissed her hand and she did her best to curtsy in reply. Then, they began to dance.
"You know what, Will?" Asked Liz as they glided across the flowered field.
"What?"
"I've never seen the romantic side of you before. You're usually being silly."
"Oh?"
"Yeah. But don't get me wrong, love, it doesn't bother me at all. Just a comment."
Will smiled. "Well, I think it's time for me to change that."
"Meaning?" She asked as he twirled her, making her skirt blossom out and then reattach itself to her legs.
"I mean that I very much love you and I'm going to show it a lot more often."
The music got slower and Elizabeth rested her head on Will's left shoulder as they continued to fly. Her eyes were closed and the setting sun shone down on her peach skin, making it look like a golden blanket. The light breeze blew her hair and eyelashes and when she reopened her eyes to look up at him, you could see the reflection o f the large lake in her brown orbs.
'She looks like one of those magical goddesses that you would read about in a fairytale.' Will thought as he looked back down at the young beauty. He took this opportune time to tighten his grip on her waist exposed her skin due to the fact that she was wearing a short white shirt, Will used his other hand to hold her chin, and he gently, oh so gently, kissed her.
The whole thing was like a dream, except he was awake and he wanted it to stay that way. The sun finally disappeared, almost as if it was trying to give them privacy. When the two teenagers looked back at each other, they smiled lovingly at one another. Will took this as his cue, so he picked her up by the waist and spun her around until the music stopped. Liz smiled and giggled. As soon as the song reached its end, Will placed his girlfriend back on her two feet.
"I love you, Miss Swann." He said, trying to catch his breath.
"As I do you, Mr. Turner." She replied laying her head on his chest as he rubbed small circles on her lower back.
At around 7:30 PM, Will looked down, only to see Elizabeth sleeping. He smiled, picked her up gently, and carried her back to the car.
"I'll always cherish this memory, love. Now and forever." He whispered to the sleeping girl as he headed towards the exit.
When he reached his destination, he buckled Liz in the car, got in the driver's seat, and drove her home. He also noticed that they had a witness who saw the two them in their endearing moment, the stars above.
Author's Note: So? What do you think of my first romance story? Too mushy? Not mushy enough? But hey, what did you expect! They're teenagers for goodness sake. Lol. Anywho, please, please, please, please, please leave me a review. LUV YOU ME PEACHES! wink
P.S. I know this chapter was way too short. SO DON'T FLAME ME ON IT!;)
