IM BACK, and heres chapter 4.
This chapter has a few (hopefully unexpected) twists to it. I hope you like it.
I have 2 reasons for not updating sooner, the first one and the bigger of the 2 is that I just started collage yesterday, it was long, but good. The second one is I had to run this chapter threw my FIRST BETA READER, Faith's melody,YAY. Thank you so much for your help. I will try to update at least once a week from now on, heres hoping.
She pointed out that I apparently have some sort of obsession with commas, I cant belive I didnt see that before, I mean its so obviouse, I just kept using comma, after comma, after..., darn, I am doing it again, arent I? And from now on, the Voice In Head is going to be condesed into VIH.
"Talking"
'Thinking'
'VIH'
"Reading"
Purple Monkey: Its me again, just here to say that XTempest888X does not own Danny Phantom, now if you will excuse me, I will go eat some bean paste now.
Chapter 4: C.E.?
(Sams POV)
A person from Amity Park was the other student, but who? 'Could it possibly be him, honestly, what are the chances of that?' I thought to myself.
'You never know unless you check'
'Finally you give some good advice,' I thought.
'Hahaha, very funny' That darn voice said sarcastically. Actually, could I really consider what it did talking? I mean, it was all in my head.
I walked to the door and opened it, I turned to the left to head father to the back of the plane, but there was a door there that said "Employees only" so I turned around instead and headed to the first room.
When I got to it, there was a C.E. on the door in blue and white. 'Ok, so its not him, but who is C.E.?'
'Only one way to find out' The voice stated.
'Why not, I have nothing better to do.' I thought.
I knocked on the door. There was a loud crash from the other side followed by some cursing and rushing around, then a frantic voice called out, "Just a second!"
After another crash and a defeated sigh, the door opened to reveal a young man with blond, messy hair that hung down onto his face and greenish-hazel eyes covered bytransparent blue framedglasses that fit his head perfectly. He wore what looked like a whitelab coat, baggy black cargo pants, and, strangely enough, green Reef sandals. The strange thing was that he seemed strangely familiar to me. His eyes reminded me of the pilot's.
"Hello, how may I help you?" He asked, voice still sounding stressed.
"Hi, I am Sam Manson and I am in the next room over." I said, still confused by the crashes.
"Oh, how rude of me, I am Chase Edwards, nice to meet you." He said, sounding only slightly more relaxed.
"Umm, what where those crashes?" I asked, letting my curiosity get the better of me.
"The first one was me falling out of my chair because your knocking surprised me." He stated.
"Ok, and the second one?" I asked.
"That was me trying to clean up the room a bit, and failing miserablely." he sighed.
"Really, how messy can a room get in an hour?" I asked, still confused.
"You would be surprised. I am not the most organized of people." he said, sounding embaressed andrubbing the back of his head with his hand.
"Whatever, anyway, are you from Amity Park?" I asked,getting back to my original question.
"Ya, been there my whole life. Wait, did you say your name was Sam Manson?" He asked, which for some unknown reason made me become really nervous.
"Yes," I said unsurely.
"As in Samanth Manson, from Amity Park?" He asked, making me feel even more nervous.
"Yes." I said, curious, andkind of scared, asto where this was going.
"Didnt you always hang out with that tech guy, Tucker Foley I belive his name was, and that other guy-what was his name again? Oh ya, Danny Fenton." He said sounding a lot more confident then he had started out.
"Yep, that's me. I don't seem to remember you though," I said trying to calm down.
"And that's just the way I like it, I like to blend in and not be noticed, it makes life a lot easier," He said, smiling widely.
"Ok then, so you're going to Storm University as well?" I decided to ask the obvious question as we both began to head to the room in front of the plane called the "Interaction Area" for some reason.
"Ya, I am not sure how they chose me though. I thought they usually chose the people who stood out more." He said while sitting down, sounding rather confused, but it sounded more forced then real.
"Hey, I guess they choose at random. How else would you explain the only Goth at Harvard getting chosen?" I said in what I thought was a convincing voice as I sat down.
"Actually, it's not that surprising. It actually plays into my theory about it being only people who stand out. Personally, I thought Danny would have been chosen, considering how much he stands out from everybody else at Phantom University." He said, seemingly unknowing that is what I had hoped for.
"Ya, do you know how he is doing?" I asked. It had been such a long time since I had last seen him. I just had to know how he was doing.
"He is doing pretty well. He seems in pretty good shape and is one of the most well known people at Phantom University. All the girls hang all over him, even Paulina." He said, trying to surpress a smile and failing.
"Oh." I said sadly. 'I should have known that he would have forgotten about me by now, I mean, it has been 6 years.' I thought.
"Strangely enough, he doesn't seem to like it. He keeps telling them that there was only one girl he would ever love, and she had gone off to Harvard like 6 years ago." He said, smiling from ear to ear while looking away from me.
'HARVARD, he didn't forget me, the only girl he would ever love.' I thought, my joy overloading so much I was sure I was going to explode in a shower of happenis.
'Of course, he didn't forget, what did you expect? He would never betray your memory.' said the voice.
'You make a good point, for once,' I thought.
"Sam, hellooooo, is anybody in there?" Chase said, looking worried.
"Oh, sorry. I guess I just zoned out there for a minute. I got to go, see you around Chase." I said, rushing back to my room.
(?'sPOV)
I just smiled as I watched her run back to her room. I got up from where I was sitting and went back to my room which was still a mess. I walked over to my bag and pulled out a small blue and white circle communicator.
"Gothgirl's fire has been fueled." I spoke into the communicator.
"Good, now Storm Wolf, its time to tend to the Ghostboy's flame." said a scrambled voice from the other side.
"Right away, Artic Wolf." I said, smiling slyly.
So what did you think, was it better sense I had a beta read it first, I did change a few mor things after the beta fixed it though, so there could still be some mistakes, and before you ask me anything Faith's melody, I changed it from (Chase's POV) to (?'s POV) to make things more interesting, I know its obviouse that its him, but I did it anyway, you will see why later, oh gosh darnet(she pointed out a curse as well so I am working on that to), I am doing the comma thing again, I need help.
Ok, R&R, and be bluntly honest with me, Faith's melody was and it made my story better.
!PURPLE MONKEY BEAN PASTE UNDERWEAR!