na-chan- rain's sort of my character...not of me but what i want to be you know...really glad that you liked the last chapter and ritszu...he's in this one for a bit too...
a dog demonus...wow...thats um...cool. nah just playin i luv ya\

TO EVERYONE: REVIEW YOU FUCKERS! I KNOW IT SUCKS BUT AT LEAST TELL ME WHY AND WHAT I CAN DO TO MAKE IT BETTER!


Haru and Daren

She can love right? I can't think about that now, now I just need to try and remember the way home. I think we pasted that tree before. That tree looks familiar too!

"Damn it! We'll never get back!" Haru screamed as he past yet another familiar tree (all the trees look alike).

"Yes we will just calm down, hey whose that?" Darren asked as he pointed to someone far off. They both ran after him thinking, our hero! They stopped about a foot away from him so they could ask directions when Haru realized who he was.

"Ritzu!"

"Haru, oh where you expecting someone different! Oh I ruined it! I'm so sorry!" he got real close to Haru, "I'M SO SORRY!" Sweat drop

"Um Haru, do you know this guy?" Darren whispered to Haru as Ritzu kept ranting.

"Yes he's part of the family." Taking a deep breath he tried to clam down the screaming monkey "Ritzu calm down, we need you help in something"

"You need my help really! I shall do everything in my power to help!"

"Yeeah, well what we need you to do is help us get back to the Shigure's house."

"Oh you got lost again! Oh course I will help you!" Ritzu started to lead them out of the woods. "I finally met Rain, she is so nice and sweet! Why is she with you Haru?" Daren started busting out laughing, unable to contain himself. Haru on the other hand was steaming.

"Because she is. Wait, you seen her? When?"

"Just about two days ago, she was in la-shi town, I accidentally bumped into her. She was so nice. I don't know why she was all the way out there, when I asked she just said she had to do something." Just as he finished they came out in front of Shigure's house. The two have been lost for about a week looking for the house while it only took Ritzu a couple of minutes. They walked onto the porch when Tohru came out.

"Oh you guys finally came home! We were so worried when Kyo came back alone a week ago! Is Rain with you?" she looked over them but still saw nobody. "Oh" from behind her Kyo appeared.

"Where the hell were you guys? You got lost again didn't you? Ew, that means you guys haven't had a bath in a week! That's just gross." Kyo said, but as quickly as he came he left, for Kagura was coming and he didn't want to see her…. yet.

"Hey where's Rain Drop?" Darren asked to Kagura as she came to stand beside Tohru.

"I think she's outside playing with the other kids." She said sadly. She still didn't know what to make of Kyo; she should have waited for his answer. Sadly she walked up to the roof to try and talk to Kyo again.

Daren walked around the house to see his daughter laughing and smiling with the other kids, he never see her so happy, he didn't want to ruin this for her so he just walked back into the house.

Shigure started questioning Haru about what happened, though Haru acted indifferent about what happened so it was hard to get information out of him. Sighing Shigure allowed Haru to leave, mostly because he was hoping he would take a bath.

KYO and KAGURA

Kagura went to the roof in hopes of finding Kyo. She found him on the edge, deep in thought. Silently she sat by him, waiting for him to notice her, trying to think of what to say.

"Ahhh! When the hell did you get here!" Kyo said, inching away from the boar incase she was going to beat him up again.

"Just a little while ago." She said softly, almost in a whisper. She turned to Kyo with sad eyes trying to figure out what to say. "Kyo, about yesterday-" she was cut off by Kyo putting a hand over her mouth

"Yeah I do." His grip loosened as he continued, " I like you as more then a friend, but its just that you come on so strong and always beat the shit out of me."

"I WOULDN'T HAVE TO IF YOU WOULD HAVE CONFESSED YOUR LOVE FOR ME SOONER!" she screamed as she pushed Kyo off the roof and stomped downstairs happily.

"What is it with these women!" Well at least she didn't try and kill me he thought to himself.

RAIN DROP

After giving Rain her message I went back to the house and surprisingly Hiro, Kisa, and Momijji were still there. They didn't ask any questions they just wanted to know if I'll play tag again, ok well Hiro didn't but the rest did. I said yes, and off we were playing, I wasn't it this time, Momijji was. And that's what we did till the sun went down.

Smiling I followed them inside I scanned the room for anyone else I knew and I saw daddy.

"Daddy!" I screamed heading towards him as if I was going to jump into his arms, but sadly I stopped myself in time. I smiled up at him, but I couldn't miss the hurt in his eyes.

"Hey pumpkin. I noticed you having some fun earlier today…. nothing happened right?" he asked worryingly. Good ole dad.

"Nope just happy." I smiled and ran into the room with Momijji and the other kids. I hope daddy didn't want to take me back just yet, I really liked it here and I wanted to stay as long as I can.

"Rainy! Earth to Rainy!" blinking I saw Momijji looking down at me. Blushing I pushed him away causing him to land on his butt. "Awww why'd you have to do that!" he said in mock seriousness. I started laughing so hard my sides hurt,

" You just look so cute!" …O.O what…. i stopped laughing and started blushing, hoping he didn't hear what I just said. But he did…he just looked up and gave me a hundred watt smile, causing me to blush even harder.


yes i understand that this chapter sucked...this whole story sucks, i think i should re-write it...