All right, guys... I haven't updated this in... wow, it's been over a year. I've abandoned it, I'm afraid, in favor of a similar, but much longer, more detailed novel which is going to be submitted to publishers soon! If anything comes of it, I'll let you all know. Until then, this is just an update in case anyone remembers this, and I'll be removing the story soon. Thanks to everyone who's read and given feedback!