Well since a lot of you guys really liked my first Ben/Shanks story I decided to give you my other one as well. I'll probably start writing longer ones now too lol..Thank you for all the warm support of my stories!
Written for a lj community for One Piece yaoi. I just thought I'd share with you guys too. :) It was written late at night but I think it turned out ok. The topic was "Parental Figures" btw.
The grammar looks odd to me. O.o' However MW isn't pitching a fit so I'm going with it. It's the last sentence that's irking me too- When you use "'s" it often means ownership- but can you use it for a shorter way of saying "This is how Luffy has turned out"? (This is how Luffy's turned out.) Just curious I suppose, I pay attention in English, really. o.o That and I should probably be in bed now..and here I am worrying over grammar for a fanfic drab rofl. Enjoy never the less lol..
This is yaoi: meaning MALExMALE pairings. (There's hardly anything racy in here though, harmless stuff really)If you don't like this then please hit your back button, as I'm not in the mood for reading "OMG Shanks/Ben isn't gay!" No probably not but I wrote as such in here. It's not the end of the world, really. ;)
Shanks carelessly tucked a pillow underneath one of his arms, trying his best to ignore the tense atmosphere that was currently filling the room. Sometimes that man could be so thickheaded that it was maddening. It certainly wouldn't do any more good to exchange anymore words tonight anyways, not with the mood Ben was in. He stopped and slightly turned when he heard the other sigh.
"And where are you going now?" Ben sounded tired, still slightly aggravated but no longer mad at least.
"Figured I'd go bunk with Roux or Yassop tonight. Either that or I'll make me a spot at the crow's nest." Shanks replied stubbornly, trying to make his tone casual.
"It's cold out there you moron..get back over here." Ben grumbled, already shifting to his side of the bed.
Shanks practically jumped on the bed. A smile, so happy and childlike, was plastered on his face. This tended to happen a lot between them. Ben rolled over and tried to fix Shanks with a look as the redhead snuggled into him.
"I'm still mad; you're not getting off that easy. That was one of my favorite books." He said sternly.
"But I already said I was sorry!" Shanks whined while casually nibbling against Ben's neck.
"…You know, I'd hate to see how Luffy's turned out thanks to you."
"…OI!"