Story: Can Love Be Withheld
Author: ClarinetChica2009, What happens when Maddie and Zack start to date, at his prom. But what happens when they decide not to tell the hotel staff or his mother, and they want to find out who was seen kissing Maddie?
Genre: Humor/Romance/Comedy.
Rating: T
Disclaimer: I do not own the "Suite Life of Zack and Cody'' Disney does, and who knows if I did I might have turned into London )! (Sorry, if this offends some of you. Just so you know I love London's character) and for this chapter I don't own Ugg Boots Australia, The Notebook, Wet Seal, Claire's, Abercrombie and Fitch or Hollister.
Authors Note: Hey Guys, I changed the way the top and bottom will read now. I hope it looks better. Thanks to all of those who reviewed, and if you haven't and are reading this please, my goal is 5 reviews a chapter I had four this time so thanks guys! I also need to know if anyone knows If you do an M rated scene/flashback, can you say and warn the people and do an M rated chapter or not? My story can be seen without it, so I'm not sure. I might not do it. I really want to though, I have seen people do it before and no one has done it yet. I want my readers opinions though, so if you will oppose it than tell me if not it might come up in the next chapter. I also accept Anonymous Reviews, so if you don't have an account and are reading this thanks. I also added a main character section, which will help you with what has happened with the main characters in 5 years. I will also add a character profile to the bottom of each chapter where the new character is introduced, and once every 3 new characters are introduced, it will be added to the main page. Also consider giving me how you would lay out the next part, I enjoy helping you be incorporated into my stories like on other boards. But for now on with the story:
Previously on The Suite Life: She was interrupted as the bell on her table rang. " MADDIE!" it yelled, "MADDIE!" "Yea" she replied." When she saw him. He was 6 feet tall, with dirty blond hair, and was wearing jeans, a Hollister shirt, and flip-flops. "Zack" she said as he kissed her. They turned around so that the back of his head was facing towards the elevator. At that very moment, no one other than London Tipton stepped out of the elevator in shock.
London looked at them who was this tall, blonde boy who Maddie was kissing, how come Maddie had a boyfriend, and she hadn't told her she thought they were best friends. It could be Lance she thought to herself. He was somewhat casual and nice; in fact, she hadn't seen a guy look as hot as him in Hollister, since well the Hollister model himself. She was about to go towards the Candy Counter when she heard, "London?" a female voice asked. London turned around she saw someone with a familiar face.
As the girl started to enter the lobby and walked towards her London looked over at the girl who had just cried her and name and started to evaluate her. She was somewhat tall at least 5 feet 8 inches. Gorgeous blonde hair that went below her shoulders however, it laid towards the middle of her back more than her shoulders, it was crimped and curled so that it was somewhat wavy, in what was considered loose mermaid curls. She had beautiful ocean-blue colored eyes that were big not too big but fit her face. They were the kind when someone else was to look into them their soul might spill to her regardless if she wanted them to. The girl also wore a long sleeved crimson red Hollister shirt with a white-laced camisole under it. A short jean skirt with fringe on the end with silver weaved belt that lay on her hips over the skirt. They belt contained glitter and stars meshed into the normal silver and glittering silver weaves, London realized she had seen the belt at Wet Seal. The girls feet were adorned with tall sand colored Ugg Boots that ended three inches below her knees. Underneath the boots, she sported red with many multi colored striped socks that brought out the color and accent in the shirt. " London is that you?" the voice asked again. "Kristin?" London asked curiously. "Yea" the voice replied. London and Kristin started to scream and this is what broke Maddie and Zack from their kiss.
Squirming around frantically after hearing a familiar scream Maddie saw her roommate had entered the Tipton. "Zack! Take off your shirt!" she said eagerly "What!" he exclaimed to her "Take off your shirt, and flip-flops, pull your pants down to below your boxers. Give me your belt." She finished. "Why are we getting our groove on?" he asked her. "No!" she exclaimed, "It's my roommate! Kristin won't remember you from last night, trust me, she's too big of a slut, and if she can remember hit on her, and London for that matter, I don't care no one is going to know about us." Maddie started to think back to when her relationship had started to form, and when Kristin had gotten to meet her one true love
Maddie had been sitting in the cab Zack had sent her in to get ready for their first official date. He had only given her 45 minutes to change and Boston University was 15 minutes away from the Tipton. As soon as the cab had arrived, she paid him the fee, with no tip. She then raced across the campus. She arrived exhausted at the dorm entrance and raced in and ran towards her dorm. She fiddled with the key as she opened it, and ran inside exhausted. Her roommate Kristin was sitting on her bed watching "The Notebook" on T.V. "Hey Maddie." Her voice echoed. " What are you doing home so early? Prom crash?" she asked laughing. "Actually we ditched the prom," Maddie stated, "He is picking me up in 30 minutes." She finished with a smile as she thought of Zack. 'MADELINE FITZPATRICK! What happened?" Kristin asked wanting to know. Maddie was happy to explain and was glad someone had wanted to listen, " Well half way through are first dance we kind of kissed." She stated remembering it "WHAT!" she heard Kristin scream. "He kissed you and you didn't stop him?" she questioned Maddie. "No." Maddie finished quite surprised herself. "His tongue went in your mouth" Kristin added, knowing she was right. "What, no… How did you know?" she finished surprised at yourself. "Because you are acting like a 5 year-old on Christmas who just received a new Barbie doll." Kristin stated. "Anyways, I guess I kind of wanted him to, I thought it might be kind of awkward the 3 year age difference but he turns 18 in 2 weeks, and graduates in a month so I'm not so sure, plus he's going to Boston College so he won't be far away," She stated before adding, "He's cute though I wouldn't let his tongue in my mouth and I made him beg, and I didn't let him and he got so forceful and aggressive. It gave me so much pleasure." She finished, "How much Maddie." Kristin asked wanting the most intimate details. "I think I moaned loud enough for people staying on the 31st floor to hear me." She stated, "God, I miss him." She added. "That's Hot Maddie." Kristin finished. "Kristin, I need to borrow one of your outfits, I want to look hot for him!" Maddie stated questioning herself. "Geez, Jealous he won't want you?" Kristin finished teasing her. "KRISTIN!" Maddie said annoyingly "Ok ok!" Kristin sorted through her clothes and handed Maddie a baby blue Hollister shirt that was a cross between ocean blue and baby blue that brought out her eyes, with the same color beads on one side of it. A white mini skirt was next from Hollister. Now normally Maddie would have considered too short, but she had no option. He would be here any second, and the second fact was well Kristin knew what she was doing. Finally, a gorgeous new pair of tall chocolate brown Ugg boots. As Maddie was picking them up a pair of tall brown socks, with baby blue polka dots on them complete with white bows on the sides hit her on the head. "OW!" she stated "Maddie they are socks!" Kristin finished. "Change!" she finished, as she grabbed a comb and weaved it through Maddie's hair and gave her a zigzagged part. "Grab the hair spray, and there are a thing of clips that we can twist into you hair that match the shirt that I found at Claire's today." She finished. At that very moment the buzzer rang. "Hello." Kristin stated "Sign in with the landlord." She finished knowing it wasn't necessary but now she was buying more time. "Ok" the voice finished. As Kristin hung up the buzzer Maddie walked out. Maddie looked gorgeous, any guy could have wanted her, and Kristin was proud of herself. "Your date is here!" Kristin finished, "WHAT!" Maddie screamed, "I made him sign in with the landlord, It will probably take him 20 minutes." She finished. "Just enough time to finish your hair "she smiled laughing. Kristin grabbed the clips and hairspray and quickly inserted them into her hair, and sprayed her hair with her hairspray. At that moment there was a knock on the door. Kristin screamed Coming to the door, and walked over. When she opened it she found a cute blonde boy waiting for Maddie in a brown Hollister polo, jeans with holes and them on the knees, and brown Abercrombie flip-flops. "Hi, I'm Kristin" Kristin said introducing herself. But Zack however was too distracted when he saw Maddie. "Hi" Maddie said somewhat embarrassed "Hey Hottie." He finished. Maddie blushed and her face turned red." Zack walked up to her and kissed him. Kristin looked at them, as their kiss became deeper and deeper and he was pushing her against the wall. How sweet Kristin was thinking. But as Maddie had ended up straddling him with her legs wrapped around his waist against the wall, and Maddie began to moan. Kristin grew squirmy at the sight of them, "I'll be back at 11." She finished "So um yea." As soon as she had finished her sentence she ran out the door.
"MADDIE! MADDIE!" Zack said becoming louder and louder, "They are coming!" Maddie quickly grabbed it and shoved it under the candy counter. "Hey Maddie" Kristin and London said together "Hey, how do you 2 know each other?" Maddie asked inquisitively. " Our fathers." They stated. " How you doing sweet thang?" Zack stated to Kristin. Maddie grew jealous and London sensed it. "Fine" Kristin stated shrugging it off. " Wait a second," Kristin started, "Isn't he your boyfriend?" Kristin asked.
Cliffhanger! Woot woot! Comment. Sorry the flashback is long! Decent sized chapter! Anyways, Read and Review if you want the next chapter up! )!
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ClarinetChica2009
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Lauren