Kakarott: hey everybody……well that was lame anyway a few days ago somebody criticized my story this was the first person to criticize me - I'm not mad or sad or offended I actually like the fact that someone was paying that much attention to notice all the mistakes I made and I'll admit I like writing stories but I'm not to good at it so all I have to say is thanx and I'll try not to make those mistakes again. Peace out.
Ren's pov
The laughter stopped when horo realized that I had to go home soon at least I don't live in china any more. "Horo I know you're sad but I do have to go" I said. "Okay" horo said with sad eyes. "Oh horo don't worry we'll see each other again." I said hoping horo wouldn't cry. "Y-yea……senpai senadie" horo said weakly.
Horo's pov
Oh man I can't believe he has to go home I wish I could just roll over and die. "well Ren lets go" I said sadly hoping he would change his mind and stay with me. "yes lets go" Ren said. I walked out the front door following Ren but only my dad heard me say "damn"
Ren's pov
That night
My family was waiting for me to arrive home I didn't get any sleep that night. All I did was do chore after chore after chore.
Horo's pov
Hmmm I wounder what Ren is doing I asked myself when I arrived home and played video games until the sorrow was gone. I was playing sonic adventure 2 the first level all I had to do was escape a city using a snowboared.