Hello all, I have read and reread Tenkuu, and I came to the conclusion that it needed a major rewrite! So that is what I have done. I have taken the old Tenkuu out and replaced it with this new version. It is a bit different so if you think that since you have read the first version that you shouldn't read this one, think again! I hope you have fun reading it and I will post the new chapter right away!

As you might have noticed there are 2 Tenkuu stories. Now I would like you all to vote and tell me which is the better story, if it is the second one then i am going to continue with that version. if it is the original then i will use that one have fun reading

TENKUU: CHAPTER ONE

"She betrayed us, murdered us, she must die!" A dark figure stood in front of a large fire, the figure pointed at the pictures that played in the fire. A woman flew down from the clouds, she slowly and meticulously killed each and every one of them as she smiled, taking pleasure in their deaths.

"She prevented us from becoming gods." The woman with golden hair appeared out of the clouds proclaiming that she was the number one fighter for the Negaverse.

"She was never our princess; she fooled us, made us believe in her."

"We gave her the crystal."

"We must retrieve it before her memories return and she uses it against us."

Legs burning; lungs almost exploding. Blood flowing. Tears stained her face as she ran with all her might to get away from her attackers. Biting her already broken lip, she could taste the metallic blood slowly oozing into her mouth and on to her tongue, her entire body screamed for her to stop; cried out for her to heal the broken and cracked bones. Her torso burned from the hot gold chain that was still embedded in her skin. There was ice stuck to her boots and legs, making her lower half numb and that made it even harder to run. She ran till she collapsed against the hard pavement, skinning her palms, arms, legs and anything else that connected with the ground. Tears continued to flow as she desperately tried to figure out what made them attack. What did she do? Her mind went back over the past few hours. 'It was my entire fault. It must have been.'

Usagi's day started out like usual, she woke up late for school, again. Missed breakfast, again. Got detention, again. You would figure that after being late so many times that she would learn to wake up earlier. The crystal took so much energy every time she transformed, that no matter how early she went to bed, or how many alarm clocks she set, Usagi could never wake up, and she was always tired. After detention, Usagi was starving. Not just because she missed breakfast and forgot her lunch, she was also still recovering from her battle last night and the crystal was still needed her energy. She ran to the arcade where she would feast on junk food. On her way, Usagi literally ran in to Mamoru, looking up at him she smiled.

"Mamo!" Jumping into his arms, she hugged him fiercely. Usagi didn't see it but Mamoru frowned then smirked. An idea had struck him, an idea so bad, so evil; he knew that it would be the perfect revenge.

"Usako," he whispered into her ear. "I have an early birthday present for you at my place." Her eyes widened.

"Really!" she cried out happily. "A present? For me?" Mamoru smiled and nodded "Really."

"Yeah...Um, can I eat first? I am really hungry." He growled himself, but agreed to her request.

"Yes, you may eat first."

"Alright, let's go!"

They arrived at the arcade, Usagi picked out a corner booth to be alone. A pretty brunette with dark brown eyes came up to take their order; Mamoru looked her up and down, giving her a look. The waitress blushed, and then looked over at Usagi, who was too busy looking at the menu to notice what happened between the two. The waitress went in to shock as she heard Usagi's order, shaking her head, she wrote down the order then left. 20 minutes later, three milkshakes, five cheeseburgers, four large French fries, nacho's and a banana split was placed in front of Usagi, and a cup of coffee and a folded up piece of paper was placed in front of Mamoru.

It took all of thirty minutes for Usagi to finish all the food, Mamoru looked a little green from watching her devour it all.

"Are you finished?" Mamoru asked annoyed at the fact that he had to watch her eat.

"Yup!" Usagi sighed, she was finally full and it only took ten hours.

"Good, can we go get your present now?" Opening one eye she looked at Mamoru to the clock that was placed on the wall above his head, and back to him.

"I better get home Mamo; my mother will ground me if I am late again." His smile turned into a snarl, he did not just sit and watch the little bitch eat and get nothing in return. Grabbing her by the arm, Mamoru hoisted her up into his arms and left the arcade, heading for his apartment. Usagi screaming and protesting the whole way there. No one helped her, they were all afraid of the look that was on Mamoru's face. It was a look that could kill.

Stepping into his apartment, he dropped Usagi on the floor, then turned around and locked the door.

"Mamoru! That hurt. How dare you drag me here, I would have come back tomorrow." Glaring down at her, he smirked. Grabbing her by the throat, he slammed her against the wall.

"If they are going to kill you anyway, I might as well have my own type of fun first." Her eyes widened in shock as he grabbed her top and ripped it off. Usagi began to fight him but Mamoru punched her in the gut and in the face, making her pass out instantly.

Rain began to fall, each droplet that touched her skin burned. Usagi reached up and touched her right eye. Wincing in pain, she began to feel the deep cut that started above her right eye and ended at her jaw.

"Mamoru, why did you do this?" Usagi lost her sight in that eye and she knew it would never heal. Any wound that a planetary warrior inflicted on another warrior would never heal. Not even her crystal could heal the wounds. Forcing herself to stand, Usagi could feel them closing in on her.

I must live. Gritting her teeth, she began to run again. Forcing herself not to cry out in pain. They're here.

"Supreme Thunder!" A ball of lightning flew out of no where and hit Usagi in the side. The explosion sent her flying into a tree, breaking her right arm in the process.

"We finally found you Usagi. I hope you are ready to die." Leaning against the tree, Usagi glared at them. Tears now being washed away by the rain, blood soaking into her tangled hair, she watched them as they surrounded her. Glares and smirks that held the promise of a long and painful death.

"Mercury Aqua Rhapsody!"

One at a time they attacked.

"Mars Flame Sniper!"

For each attack Usagi held her tongue.

"Jupiter Oak Evolution!"

Forcing herself to take the pain.

"Venus Love and Beauty Shock!"

Without the crystal and her locket, she was as good as dead. The planetary warriors prepared for their final attack. Usagi was leaning against the tree, using the only bit of strength that she had left to hold herself up. She would not show how much pain she was in to satisfy them. Mars held her attack pointed right at Usagi's heart. The others did the same.

"Give us the crystal and you can have a quick death!" Mars yelled, smirking as she awaited an answer.

"I don't have it." Usagi tried to yell, but it hurt to speak. Mercury stepped forward, computer in hand.

"You have it traitor! Hand it over at once."

Traitor? Usagi had a confused look on her face. "What have I done?" She whispered; Usagi could not feel any evil energy coming from them. They were doing this because they wanted to.

"Why?"

Mars yelled out for them to ready themselves for the final attack. Usagi knew that this was it; she had no way of defending herself. Mamoru had taken her locket when he…Biting her lip, she looked at all of them strait in the eye.

"I am sorry." Please someone, save Me. The warriors let their attacks go, they all combined as they flew closer to her, they were meant to kill. The bright light of the crystal surrounded her, it was taking Usagi away. But not before the attack hit her, cracking the crystal into three perfect pieces. Once the smoke died down all that was left was one perfectly broken piece of the silver crystal that they so desperately wanted.