Kong, King
Chapter 2
Raoeaoer: Hey, what's up? Thanks for the R&R (he, he PUN XD). In reply to said reviews, I have a policy of always writing very short first chapters to hook your interest, and I only rewrote this iconic scene as a working concept! I appreciate your respect to give me signed reviews and honestly reviewing my work as fellow writers! Any way, it keeps going! ( I'm a big fan of sudden twists!)
Rayoer: Jack ran as fast as he could. A man grabbed his arm and spoke: "Hey, you're that Driscoll fella! The one that caught that big brute! Hey, ya know my kid…"Jack shoved the man out of the way as hard as he could and kept sprinting. Out of nowhere, a bicycle messenger speeded into Jack's way. Jack made an incredible dodge to roll out of the damn thing's path.
"Hey, Mr. Driscoll!"
"Damn, Jimmy, could you pedal any faster?" Suddenly a thought occurred to Jack. " Jimmy, I need your bike. I can't explain now. Ann's in trouble!"
Suddenly a voice rang out,
"Jack, let's go! Kong has Ann! We just sent planes after him! They'll get him!"
Carl Denham sat in an old Rolls smoking a cigar.
" Carl, gimmie yer car. I'm goin' after him!"
"Jack, be sensible, will ya? I can't give ya my car!"
At that point, Jack drew his pistol.
" I'm gonna count to three, and if you ain't out of the car by then, you'll be crawlin' to the ambulence. One."
Jimmie piped in,
" Mr. Driscoll…"
"Two."
Jack cocked the hammer.
"Three."
"Jack…!"
The bullet went into Denham's right thigh and exited though the back of his leg.
"Goddamnit, Jack, Oww! All right, take the damn thing! OWW!"
Araoer: Well, I heart cliffies! So if you don't like it, tell me! It will not stop me from doing whatever I damn well please in My own work! R&R me plz. Say Hello To My Little Friend! They call me Equinscu Ortcha! ( White Devil who believe he is blizack)