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Chapter 4-Hogsmeade
Daphne put on pale jeans and a white t-shirt. She then tied a orange and gold floaty scarf around her hips and put a fluffy orange bobble in her hair to hold it in its high ponytail. She put on golden orange eye shadow and black mascara and repainted her trademark black nails.
When she looked at herself in the mirror she had to admit that she was pleased. Lily came out of the bathroom wearing jeans and a green shirt that brought out her eyes. Daphne noted that she had left the top couple of buttons undone.
Carla emerged from the bathroom ten minutes later wearing a baby pink t-shirt with 'Its not legal to be this cute' written across it. She had left her curly hair loose.
When Daphne had eventually found her jacket (a close fitting black number) the girls went down to the common room.
Sirius gaped as Daphne came down the stairs. She looked beautiful. He whispered to her when she was close enough,
"Will you come to Hogsmeade with me?"
She blushed "Yes of course I will. As a date?"
"Yes, as a date." He linked arms with her and said out loud, "Right people, lets go!"
When they reached Hogsmeade they split up. Remus and Carla went to the book shop. Sirius and Daphne went to the Shrieking Shack, and James and Lily went to the Three Broomsticks (much to Lily's displeasure) Peter hadn't come.
Up at the Shrieking Shack Sirius was telling Daphne horrible stories about it. Eventually she so freaked out that she demanded that they go for a walk away from the Shrieking Shack.
As they walked they slowly got closer, first holding hands, then linking arms, then Sirius put his arm around her waist. They stopped at the top of the hill that they had been climbing and Sirius put his arms completely around Daphne. Pulling her close to him.
She looked up at him, his handsome face, his amazing eyes, his sexy smirk...
He slowly lowered his head and brushed his lips against hers. Her hands crept up to the back of his head pulling him closer. He pressed his lips to hers again feeling her respond. He slid his tongue into her mouth and they ended up standing there, making out.
Many minutes later he pulled away, panting. She pouted in disappointment.
"Later," he said "At Hogwarts there are plenty of places we can go." Daphne smiled.
"By the way," she whispered, "you're an incredible kisser."
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