Souvraya: Gomen nasai, minna-san. Onegai, forgive me for taking so long to
update this... I've been struggling with an itsy bitsy writer block. I hate
when that happens... -.- So this chapter is late for a reason. I just hope I
manage to continue this as soon as possible, because I really don't want to
keep you people waiting... This is a bit shorter, but I think it's livable
and... I'll just... stop this rant, ne?
Disclaimer: See chapter 1...
Pairings: I think I promised to come up with an overview of which pairings could be expected, so... ZabuHaku, SasuNaru, ZabuNaru, and, if I get enough requests for this pairing, I might write some HakuNaru too. So there...
Story: Haku's sent to collect someone... And Zabuza's eagerly waiting for the kitsune...
Warning: None yet...
A/N: This is slightly AU, and somehow (don't ask how, but somehow) Haku and Zabuza survives the bridge... Naruto would be 15 in this fic.
Explanations:
"blah" = talk
//blah// = thoughts
~POV~ = changing point of view
Why won't you love me?
Chapter 8
Tsunade looked at Sasuke and Kakashi with a worried expression on her face. "You have no idea?"
"No. He is a missing-nin from the Mist, and where he might be, is beyond me," Kakashi answered.
"But he can't have gone too far. Naruto wouldn't have come willingly, so he's probably somewhere around the village." Sasuke stated.
Kakashi nodded, and, thinking loud, said: "Demo... he probably teleported, that's the only way he could've gotten out of the village with Naruto without being discovered. Naruto isn't exactly the most quiet in the world...So... presuming he teleported..." He grew silent.
Sasuke continued. "So if he teleported, he must at least have gone as far as he gets in one move (1). Which means we should start searching around the village at that distance."
Tsunade nodded. "That makes sense... We will start there."
~ – ~
Sasuke looked at the assembled ninjas waiting for the go from the Hokage.
They were more than he had thought they'd be; the three rookie teams from the chuunin exam, minus Naruto, of course, and plus the sensei. The Neji, Lee, Ten Ten team with Gai. Iruka. And Jiraiya. He had the feeling Tsunade would've wanted to go too, but... She was the Hokage, after all...
"I'm sure you all understand the importance of what you are doing now. We need to find Naruto as soon as possible, and I'm counting on you to manage that. You've gotten your instructions. Now, go!"
The teams nodded, and disappeared.
TBC
(1) -- I don't know if there's a limit to the distance you can teleport, but in this story it is. It would be about 5 km, I think.
A/N: So... It could've been better, I'm sure. But I still don't have a beta... If anyone's interested in helping me, please contact me at
Souvraya@hellokitty.com
Next chapter's probably gonna have some lime or lemon, if I can manage it... But don't be too disappointed if it isn't there... I still feel a bit uncomfortable writing lemon at school... T.T And some of my teachers really aren't helping things either... The day you get Randi in Norwegian, run for your life...
Replies to reviews:
hanachan: ^ ^ I'm glad you like it. I can't promise you HakuNaru though... The pairings might've changed a bit since first chapter was posted...
Sakaba Sharpie: ^ ^ Thanks for telling me who's getting OOC. And I knew I would've problems with Zabuza-san before I even started, because even though I think he rocks and is just soooooo cool, I've never really gotten him... He's hard to understand if you ask me... Personally I must say I think Naruto turned out a bit too serious, but... He must've realized it's a serious situation... ^_~
someone: And I'll even try to keep the chapters from getting shorter again... ^ ^ And I'm so so so so so sorry that I haven't updated in a little while... ^ ^'
Princess-Vash: ^ ^ Of course shounen-ai isn't creepy. It's kawaii... ^ ^
Me-la Kenzu: Thank you! ^ ^ It really makes me happy to read all this credit I'm getting for my story. So thank you again and again and again! ^ ^
Disclaimer: See chapter 1...
Pairings: I think I promised to come up with an overview of which pairings could be expected, so... ZabuHaku, SasuNaru, ZabuNaru, and, if I get enough requests for this pairing, I might write some HakuNaru too. So there...
Story: Haku's sent to collect someone... And Zabuza's eagerly waiting for the kitsune...
Warning: None yet...
A/N: This is slightly AU, and somehow (don't ask how, but somehow) Haku and Zabuza survives the bridge... Naruto would be 15 in this fic.
Explanations:
"blah" = talk
//blah// = thoughts
~POV~ = changing point of view
Why won't you love me?
Chapter 8
Tsunade looked at Sasuke and Kakashi with a worried expression on her face. "You have no idea?"
"No. He is a missing-nin from the Mist, and where he might be, is beyond me," Kakashi answered.
"But he can't have gone too far. Naruto wouldn't have come willingly, so he's probably somewhere around the village." Sasuke stated.
Kakashi nodded, and, thinking loud, said: "Demo... he probably teleported, that's the only way he could've gotten out of the village with Naruto without being discovered. Naruto isn't exactly the most quiet in the world...So... presuming he teleported..." He grew silent.
Sasuke continued. "So if he teleported, he must at least have gone as far as he gets in one move (1). Which means we should start searching around the village at that distance."
Tsunade nodded. "That makes sense... We will start there."
~ – ~
Sasuke looked at the assembled ninjas waiting for the go from the Hokage.
They were more than he had thought they'd be; the three rookie teams from the chuunin exam, minus Naruto, of course, and plus the sensei. The Neji, Lee, Ten Ten team with Gai. Iruka. And Jiraiya. He had the feeling Tsunade would've wanted to go too, but... She was the Hokage, after all...
"I'm sure you all understand the importance of what you are doing now. We need to find Naruto as soon as possible, and I'm counting on you to manage that. You've gotten your instructions. Now, go!"
The teams nodded, and disappeared.
TBC
(1) -- I don't know if there's a limit to the distance you can teleport, but in this story it is. It would be about 5 km, I think.
A/N: So... It could've been better, I'm sure. But I still don't have a beta... If anyone's interested in helping me, please contact me at
Souvraya@hellokitty.com
Next chapter's probably gonna have some lime or lemon, if I can manage it... But don't be too disappointed if it isn't there... I still feel a bit uncomfortable writing lemon at school... T.T And some of my teachers really aren't helping things either... The day you get Randi in Norwegian, run for your life...
Replies to reviews:
hanachan: ^ ^ I'm glad you like it. I can't promise you HakuNaru though... The pairings might've changed a bit since first chapter was posted...
Sakaba Sharpie: ^ ^ Thanks for telling me who's getting OOC. And I knew I would've problems with Zabuza-san before I even started, because even though I think he rocks and is just soooooo cool, I've never really gotten him... He's hard to understand if you ask me... Personally I must say I think Naruto turned out a bit too serious, but... He must've realized it's a serious situation... ^_~
someone: And I'll even try to keep the chapters from getting shorter again... ^ ^ And I'm so so so so so sorry that I haven't updated in a little while... ^ ^'
Princess-Vash: ^ ^ Of course shounen-ai isn't creepy. It's kawaii... ^ ^
Me-la Kenzu: Thank you! ^ ^ It really makes me happy to read all this credit I'm getting for my story. So thank you again and again and again! ^ ^