Chapter two is up!Please review.This is the first fanfic I write based on the series.I need to know if it's good or bad.
She walked to the training ground. It was her usual spot. Hardly anyone came to the ground. She sighed. 'More training.' She thought. 'It's getting kind of boring.'
'I agree.'
"When can you leave me alone?"
'Never.'
"Need of medication."
'Shut up!' her inner self-yelled. 'Who helps you all the time?'
"You."
'So as repayment you have to keep me.'
"Why me?"
'Don't ignore me!'
(The conversation goes on and on.)
Sasuke walked to his training ground. 'It's quite. Too quiet in my head.'
'You wanted noise you got it!'his inner-self yelled.
"Oh crap," Sasuke said.
"Sasuke-kun!" a voice yelled. He twitched. 'Shit! What now?' he thought.
"What now?" he asked annoyed to the girl who walked next to him. The girl's name was Sandra. (Made her up.) The name matches her best. Her hair is blonde like the sand and she has brown eyes. The girl was pretty as well. She had a small fan club. Well a small one.
"A date!" she exclaimed. He sighed.
"Hell NO!"
Sakura heard a yell. It seemed familiar. 'Sasuke.' Her mind thought.
'You can tell him how you feel.'
"Not now."
'Why not?'
"He might be in trouble."
'Quiet true. He might be near death and then we confess and get a k...'
"Not now! Shut up!" she yelled. Surprisingly her inner-self shut up. 'What's going on Sasuke?'
Sasuke was trying pushing the girl off him. Surprisingly she was strong. He couldn't use his chakra though. If he would he would get into a lot of shit. He tried pulling her away again. No use. From far away Sakura was watching. If you looked it seemed as if Sasuke was holding the girl by the waist. It looked like they were a complete couple.
"Sasuke," she said. "Your already in love."
Sasuke sensed a familiar chakra. He turned to the direction. Not knowing that if he did he would accidentally kiss Sandra.
Sakura saw this. Her eyes looked sad. ' I better go.' She thought. 'They might need privacy.'
Sasuke saw her leaving.
"Sakura!" he yelled. She stopped and looked at him.
"I' am sorry for disturbing you two," she said. She looked at Sasuke. She gave him a heart broken smile. Sakura was holding back her tears. "I better go. It was nice seeing you two. And I repeat I' am sorry for disturbing you two."
With those words Sakura disappeared.
She jumped from tree to tree. She couldn't hold back the tears this time.
"Why?" she asked herself. She slammed her fist into the tree. Sakura fell down to her knees. "Why Sasuke?"
'I don't know.' Her inner-self said.
"Am I not pretty enough! Is it my pink hair! Or is it my jade green eyes?" she yelled out. "Am I still a weakling to your eyes?"
'Calm down.' Her inner-self said.
"Why?" she yelled out. She put her hands to her face. "What did I do? What did I do to deserve this?"
Sakura was on her bed. She stopped crying. She was trying to hold back her tears. 'Don't cry.' She thought. 'Crying is for weaklings. You're the leader of the number 1 best ANBU captain. You have to be strong.' She paused. 'But how if I was working to make someone love me when they found another?'
'Stop crying.' Her inner self said.
"I just can't."
'Yes you can.'
"How?"
'Forget about him. Just focus on the ANBU squad and training.'
"I might just do that."
'That's the spirit.'
"Sasuke I' am giving up on you. I no longer love you. I no longer love anyone. I will do anything to protect the village. I will never show any weakness or emotions. My ANBU mark will be a reminder of this. "
'Be the captain.'
"Yeah. I will."
Sasuke wanted to call Sakura. He wanted to say it was a misunderstanding. Yet he felt as if he didn't have the guts to.
"Why can't I tell her?" he asked himself. " Am I scared?"
'You chicken.'
"Shut up!"
'Don't yell at me you asshole! You messed it up!'
"I said shut up!" he yelled. His inner-self closed his mouth after that. "Sakura how will I make you forgive me?"
So how was this chapter?I italicized the inner-Sasuke and inner-Sakura.Please reveiw.I ain't writing this story on paper.It might and that is a small might that it will take me longer to finish this fanfic.Still please review.
