The Middle Missing Scene"
Rating: NC-17
Author's notes: This is the first fanfic Ive written in over 4 years...bear with me! Also, I am 100 city girl, so I TRIED with the cowboy dialouge...sorry if its not up to par! One more thing, I've never written male-male stuff before...so if i offend anyone with my naivity, i apologize!
Disclaimer--Not mine, so sad. I'd have them living happily till they were 100!
"…Jack and me, we're going to go drink. We'll probably get drunk and just pass out, so don't wait up."
Jack and Ennis ran down the stairs, as Alma looked out the window and began to cry. She cried not because she had lost her husband, but because she realized that she had never really had him to begin.
Jack and Ennis ran down the steps like it was Christmas morning. They couldn't reach Jack's truck fast enough. They got and just looked at each other. It was a look neither one had given the other before. They were looks of happiness, relief, desire, lust, and pure fire. Jack was still looking over at Ennis when Ennis leaned into Jack. Jack was half afraid Ennis was going to kiss him right then and there, where people might see him; but also half amazed that Ennis might have had become that comfortable with the idea of them together.
Ennis leaned in, putting his mouth right on Jack's ear. Jack could feel ever piece of stubble Ennis's face possessed. He could feel the warm breath encompassing his ear, the steamy breath that was still left over from their passionate, heart stopping kiss on the stairs.
"Jack fuckin' Twist. Hurry up and get us the fuck outta here," said Ennis. Jack realized that this was still the same Ennis, the same Ennis he hadn't stopped thinking about for four years, the same Ennis he fell in love with on Brokeback Mountain. Jack grinned back at Ennis and shifted his truck in reverse and sped out of the parking lot as fast as possible.
The two men drove down the old dusty road. Each man looking at the other, smiling and grinnin'. Nothing was said, nothing needed to be said. They were together after for long years apart and that's all that matter.
Jack was driving south. He knew he had passed a motel about an hour before he got to Ennis's house. He figured that would be far enough away for either man not to be recognized. After about twenty five minutes of driving, and countless stares and grins at each other, Ennis couldn't stand it. They were on a deserted country road and he knew with it being about 3 o'clock in the afternoon, not many people would be driving down this road anyways. Ennis got a smirk on his face and looked over at Jack. Jack looked back with a look in his eyes that looked slightly confused. Ennis didn't say anything still, he gently scooted over just a few extra inches closer to Jack, but still not too close. Jack was looking more and more confused. Ennis only grinned wider, especially when he took his hand and started rubbing Jack's thigh. Jack sighed and slightly shut his eyes. He had been waiting for Ennis's sweet touch for a long time. Ennis's hand rubbed up and down the thigh, putting Jack in a sweet nirvana like state.
Ennis enjoyed making Jack happy like this. But Ennis also liked making Jack squirm; it had been one of his favorite things to do during their nights up at Brokeback. Ennis wanted to make Jack squirm again. He kept rubbing Jack's thigh, and by now Jack was slightly moaning. Ennis moved his hand up and down and finally all the way and grabbed the massive erection that was growing on Jack's other leg. Jack's eyes flew up as he lost control of the wheel for a minute.
"Whoa there cowboy, this is just the beginning, can't get that excited yet," Ennis said with a devilish grin on his face.
"You fucking piece of shit Ennis." Ennis just smiled wider as he put his hand back on Jack's erection. He rubbed it up and down, and squeezed it. He remembered every inch of it from before. He remembered the vein that ran along the left side of Jack's penis. He remembered the softness of the head. He remembered how Jack's pre-cum felt on his own dick while he lubed it before fucking Jack. He remembered it all and couldn't stand it. He needed Jack NOW.
"Fuck this shit," Ennis said in a mumble Jack hardly heard. Ennis reached over and grabbed the waistband of Jack's jeans. He pulled hard, so the button would come undone. He ripped the zipper down and shoved his hand inside Jack's pants.
"WHOOAA! Ennis! What the fuck are you doing!" Jack yelled, bewildered at what Ennis was doing.
"…take it anymore. Need it…" Ennis mumbled as looked out the windshield and then out the back window. When he saw the coast was clear, he pulled out Jack's throbbing, rock hard cock. Ennis took one more quick look and sank down, putting his head just inches from Jack's cock.
"Ennis!" Jack screamed again. Ennis didn't care. He needed this. He had craved this for four years. He couldn't wait thirty more minutes until the motel; not when Jack's cock was throbbing in front of him right now. Here goes nothing Ennis thought. He opened his mouth wide and went down as far as his throat would let him.
"HOLY FUCKING SHIT ENNIS!" Jack felt like he was going to cum right then. Never had Ennis done that during their summer at Brokeback. Ennis ignored Jack and continued on his mission. He forced himself to go further and further down on Jack's cock. Ennis had never had a cock in his mouth before, but knowing it was just another part of Jack he could suck on and kiss, it made it one of the best things he had ever done. He wasn't sure exactly what to do, so he thought about what Jack had done four summers ago. It would be more difficult because of being in truck, but Ennis was willing to give it a try.
Ennis started bobbing his head up and down on Jack's aching cock. He relaxed his throat, allowing his mouth to go all the way to the base of Jack cock. He sucked as hard as he could, and came up, slowly, sucking hard with each inch upward. He finally got his mouth off Jack's cock and there was a loud POP sound because the suction had been so great.
"Holy mother of God…ENNIS!" Jack couldn't believe what was happening. Ennis had his mouth around his hard cock and was performing a miracle. Jack truly believed that if God struck him down dead at that very moment, he would die a happy man.
Ennis ignored Jack. Jack bitched too much sometimes. Jack didn't know what was good for him, but Ennis was determined to show him what was. Ennis took his hot tongue and licked Jack's cock up and down. He spent extra time on the vein on the left side. He saw the pre-cum at the top of the head of Jack's cock. He eagerly licked it up with his tongue. He liked the salty taste of Jack. He sucked on just the head of the cock and swirled his tongue around it. He took his tongue and ran it along the small slit at the top where Jack's cum would eventually come out.
Jack was in heaven. Laureen had never done this before. She had fucked him when they first met, but once she got pregnant with Bobby, the fucking stopped. Jack couldn't believe Ennis was doing this too him. It felt so good. He couldn't help himself, he reached down, flicked Ennis's hat off and wrapped his hand in Ennis's hair. He didn't want to be forceful with Ennis, didn't want to make Ennis want to stop what he was doing, but he couldn't stop himself from caressing and feeling Ennis anymore.
Ennis felt Jack's hand on his head. He didn't mind. Only made him want to work harder. Ennis felt like he was slowly getting the hang of this blow job thing. He started to gently caress Jack's balls while he was going up and down with his mouth on Jack's shaft. He attempted to spread Jack's legs a little wider. He kept sucking and took his finger and ran it down Jack's balls and then further down. He ran it down Jack's crack, as far as he could go.
Jack knew what Ennis wanted and wanted to let Ennis have it so bad. Jack tried his hardest to slouch down and spread his legs wider.
Ennis smiled around Jack's cock as he realized that Jack knew what he doing. Ennis tried again with his finger. Slowly tracing it down the crack and finally reaching the spot he wanted. Ennis kept sucking, but felt like being a tease too. He drew circles around Jack's hot hole. Tracing his crack up towards his balls and further back to his ass, but refusing to actually touch the hole.
"You fucking tease Ennis Del Mar," Jack snarled at the man who was sucking his cock. Jack gripped Ennis's hair tighter and pushed a little.
Oh, so that's how he wants to play thought Ennis. Ennis started sucking Jack's cock like his life depended on it. He sucked and sucked and cupped his balls and touched the beginning of his crack. He did this for a few more minutes until finally, "Oh God Ennis…I…so…close…" Jack half moaned and half uttered.
Good thought Ennis. He kept sucking hard. And after about another minute, he felt Jack's cock slowly begin to stiffen. As soon as he felt that against his mouth, he took his finger and without warning, shoved it into Jack's asshole.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" screamed Jack as Ennis's finger entered his ass and then as he cummed so hard and violently in Ennis's mouth.
Ennis sucked up every drop up. When Jack's cock finally stopped convulsing, he took his mouth off, licked the head once more to get up any left over cum and looked up at Jack.
Ennis looked right at Jack and said "So tell me about Laureen."
"You fuckin sonnabitch," Jack said.
"Shut your mouth, you know you liked it."
Jack could only smile. He had loved it. It was amazing. He couldn't wait until he could return the favor later for Ennis.
"Here, hold the wheel for me, so I can put my pants back on." Ennis held the wheel as Jack struggled to redo his pants. Ennis could only smile at his lover's effort to pull up his pants.
"Need help there cowboy?" Ennis said in a teasingly way.
Jack didn't respond. He didn't want to encourage Ennis anymore. Jack finally got up his pant and took the wheel back from Ennis.
"Sonnabitch," Jack said to Ennis.
"Look, we're here!" Ennis said in an annoyingly happy voice as the hotel came up on their right.