I just want to say that I wasn't happy with the last chapter, but and this is a big but, all my faithful reviewers said that they loved it. So now I'm happy, but I still know I could've done better. With that said I want to take this time to say
(in Jim Carrey's voice) "You like me, you really, really like me!"
I just want to review what we know, please read this 'cause I forgot to mention something in the last chapter. We know that when Jean was a kid she was a pickpocket, was thought as a mental patient, and was raped by her 'doctors'. We know that she looked worse than the girl from 'The Ring' during that time. Her so called 'father' beat her mother. Scott lived on the streets too, but had already told Jean. So this is Jean's last secret that she hadn't told anyone.
NOTE! PLEASE READ!
What I forgot to mention in the last chapter was that she had forgotten most of her past because of all the drugs that she had taken when she was in the psychotic center when she was raped. So in a sense she was kinda like Logan (wow that's weird). She lied to Professor Xavier and told him that she got her powers when her bestfriend died in her arms ( I don't know if that's really lying since it was really her mother). After that her parents sent her off to that center. So the Professor sensed she was lying but didn't ask her anything else. I just want to tell you guys how I got this idea exactly, I started reading 'No Rain' by Slickboy444, then I read 'Jean and Scott Get Caught' by Missmishka, and then I thought of how much I love Jean's character. Then I read more Slickboy's stories and thought of Mr. Sinister (or is it Dr.?). Then I thought of Mrs. Jean Grey-Summers' 'The Lockdown'. So I kinda combined everything and added a few things.
Now a word to all my faithful reviewers.
jenskott: Thanks but I felt kinda disappointed because it was so short. But thankfully everyone who reviewed liked it. Thanks again
Slickboy444: I think I could've made it more dramatic but I felt kinda rushed because it's been about two weeks since I had last updated. But I'm still happy with all the positive feedback I've been getting. Oh and about yournew fic, it seems very, very interesting. Update soon! ; )
marvlix: Thank you sooooo much for the ideas. I think you're right, most jott fans are girls. I'm in the fanclub 'cause of Scott's hot body (he's got a really great personality too) and Jean's great personality (she's very beautiful too). I think that those people who draw Scott are amazing! (sigh) I wish I owned them.
Thanks to Wen1, jott luuuuuuuuuver, jacx, and Diaz F.
I want more reviews! So I've been giving small little hints about what's gonna happen in other chapters so here's a bigger one, the whole story is gonna involve a girls' night in, someone once thought dead comes back, and Mr. Sinister. Do ya know what's gonna happen? Well I challenge those who read this to send reviews of the story and your guesses. Whoever's close enough will get an e-mail of the new teaser poster of the movie. ( I hope that this is enough of agimmick to get more reviews. It's so sicking that I just can't send a giftcard or money in an e-mail. Damn Bill Gates).
Well here's chapter five. Hope you guys like it: p : )
Jean and Scott were walking downstairs (fully dressed) hand in hand. They were talking about something but Forge didn't care, right now he had another problem. He was angry (sounds like the hulk) you wouldn't like him when he's angry.
Goddammit, I can't believe they're going out! I'm not gonna risk getting caught by following them! This sucks (stamped foot on floor twice)! I knew we had to get cameras outside but 'noooooo' Professor X didn't want cameras he said ' there's enough security outside, there's no need'. But what about my needs (yelling up at the ceiling) huh what about me! I live here too!
It's a good thing it's too cold to do anything juicy outside...Muahaha, whoa where did that come from? Oh well. I better get something to eat.
Meanwhile, Scott and Jean went over to the lake and were putting their skates on.
"So...do you think you can beat me at a race this year?" Jean asked as she got up and started skating with a small grin.
"You only beat me last year because I let you." He said
"Fine then, this year no holding back. The rules this year are that there are no rules."
"Fine by me" He skated to her side and they got in position.
"On your marks, get set, go!" Jean said and they were off at a speed the Pietro would've had trouble to keep up with.
They were both neck-in-neck when they passed halfway through the lake. But right when it seemed as though it was gonna be a tie Jean sensed something. She felt a cold presence and fell on the ice.
Flash
It was a dark prison cell. Two guards came in holding a woman who was covered with a bag over her head. She kicking and screaming.
"Let me go! My friends are gonna come looking for me! Get off! Don't touch me!"
The guards left her in cell and closed the door. As soon as they let go she whispered
"Help."
Flash
Jean stumbled and tried to stop but at the speed they were going at she fell and slid in the pile of snow. When Scott saw her falling he tried to turn around but he was going too fast too and fell on the cold ice and slid in another pile of snow a couple yards away from Jean.
Scott stood up all wet from the snow (this is for marvlix) and ran over to Jean.
"Jean are you okay?" He said as he walked over to her. Jean was staring at the sky with a dazed look on her face.
"Yeah..." she trailed off
"What happened?"
"I'm not sure, but I have a feeling...something bad is gonna happen."
"What--what did you see?"
"Let me show you" Scott sat down beside Jean while she put her fingers on each side of his temples.
She showed him what she saw but the Flash didn't stop at 'Help' it kept going. Right when they were so close to seeing the woman's face someone stopped Jean.
"Why'd you stop?" Scott asked
"I didn't...someone did for me." Scott stood up and looked around, acting as if they were being watched (ironic right?).
"Do you think it's another mutant attack?"
"Scott, calm down we're not even sure if that was sent by a person. I might be remembering something." she said as she got up. "I don't think it's an attack, even if it were one then they're not very violent. I think it's more like a warning. I think that when all the girls come back from vacation we better keep an eye out for them."
"I think Logan's got that covered." Jean chuckled softly.
"We should head home"
"Why, it's not like anyone's gonna miss us."
"No but we're soaking wet and if you want to spend the rest of winter sick and drunk on Nyquil (that happened to me once...don't ever overdose!) then be my guest."
"But I want to show you something really quick" Jean was going to say something when Scott pouted and Jean couldn't resist (I wouldn't either).
"Fine" They started putting their shoes on. After that Scott took her hand and they walked over to the docks Scott scraped some of the snow off and they sat down. It was perfect timing because the Sun just started setting.
(this is normally the part where Jean saids' it's beautiful' and Scott says 'yeah' but he's really looking at her and they kiss. But I'm not gonna do that, nope I'm gonna do something completly original)
"I love this...being here with you ...all alone...and absolutly no interuptions." She turned her head to Scott and they kissed passionatly. After about five minutes of a jaw dropping make-out scene Jean stopped the kiss.
"We better get back. I don't want us to get sick." Scott thought that she had other intentions for them when they got back to the mansion.
Meanwhile...
When the hell are they gonna get back!
Right when he said that Jean and Scott stepped inside drenched in melted ice.
"Take your clohes off, Summers.(This is the time for all girls pant like a dog at the image I just made)I'll be right back." After a few minutes Scott was left in his boxers and Jean came back down wearing only a robe from what Forgeand S
Scott could see.
"Here" She handed him his robe and he put it on.
After that Scott took her hand and they was over to the couch in the living room. She opened his robe up and lied on his warm chest (lucky dog). After those few heartfelt moments when Forge thought he was going to throw up, they finally...'got down to business' as Forge would say. The rest of the night was followed by many powerful lovemaking scenes. By the end of that day Forge was so surprised that he started drooling because his mouth was hanging open. He started wondering What will they do next?
I hope you guys liked the jott. ;
All of those that read my other fic, I just want to say thanks for the reviews but I meant for that story to be a one shot only. But I love all the reviews it's been getting, so I'm thinking about makingit a ton of songfics that're all jott. I don't feel like making another serious fic right now because I have soooo many plans for this story.
Talking about plans, don't forget to leave a review and try your guesses andto whoever gets close enough I'll send you the picture of the teaser poster (isn't it sicking that I have to resort to this?).
Review, I beg you!