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Love Hina: Evil Edition
Chapter three
A/N some people have been wondering why I choose the title of Love Hina: Evil Edition for this story. Well they say he doesn't seem really evil which is true. The original Keitaro was so nice that this Keitaro would seem evil by comparison and if you were on the receiving end of his lessons then you would had thought that he was evil too.
Naru was in her room thinking about yesterdays events.
I can't believe it! Why did old granny put her grandson in charge of the Hinata Sou. This is an all girls dorm and he thinks he can push me around. I take orders from no one and I don't care that he is the manager. I did nothing wrong. I wonder if he is all that he says he is. I think that I am going to do some searching in his room and see if I can find anything to reveal his true nature. I know that all men are just vile perverts and he is no different. He can't fool me and when I am done. . . they will all know the truth. Naru thought to herself.
She removed the piece of wood covering the hole that separated Naru's room from the manager's room and noticing that no one was in his room. She decided that she would sneak in for some investigation work by searching through Keitaro's things.
Hmm. . . lets see if what I can find. . . oh look this is Keitaro's diary. Lets see what it has to say about our manager. Naru thought to herself.
She starts to look through the diary and look for any incriminating evidence to use against Keitaro. She got so caught up in reading his diary that she didn't notice Keitaro opening up the door to his room.
He noticing Naru looking through his diary and for a moment thought he should surprise her at such an embarrassing moment but decides against it.
Look at her. Miss high and mighty doing something wrong. No that is beyond wrong, that is despicable. I could just surprise her but I can see that she doesn't respect me or my authority. I think Motoko and Kitsune should see this. I will let them do the talking since she respects them more. Keitaro thinks to himself.
He closes the door and walks up to Motoko and Kitsune who were in the living room.
"Hey Kitsune and Motoko." Keitaro said.
"Yes, Keitaro. What do you want?" They both ask.
"I want to show you something." Keitaro replies.
"And what do you want to show us?" They both reply seemingly confused at this moment.
"Let's just say it is a surprise. Come on just come over and take a look." Keitaro says.
"Ok. come on Kitsune. Lets just take a look and find out what Keitaro is so insistent on getting us to look at." Motoko says to Kitsune since she doesn't want to get up from the couch.
"Ok. Ok. I will come." Kitsune replies.
She gets up off the couch and goes to where Keitaro wants them to go to.
"I want you two to go to my room and open the door and what you will find may surprise you." Keitaro says to Motoko and Kitsune.
They walk up to the door leading to Keitaro's room and open it and what they find was something they never expected to find.
Naru was still in his room looking through his stuff and holding Keitaro's diary. It was at that moment that Motoko and Kitsune surprised Naru.
"Hey what the hell do you think you are doing?" Kitsune said to Naru.
"How despicable. Your actions are disgusting. How can you expect Keitaro or any of us to respect you if you do this?" Motoko said to Naru.
Naru seemed to almost jump out of her skin when she was spotted in Keitaro's room.
"No, Kitsune and Motoko! It isn't what it looks like!" Naru pleaded to her friends.
"I know exactly what it looks like. You go and call Keitaro a pervert and then go snooping around in his room. What kind of a girl does that, huh?" Kitsune told Naru
"What do you got there Naru?" Motoko asked as she ripped the book out of Naru's hands.
She reads the cover of the book that Naru had held so tightly.
"How could you invade the privacy of someone like this? Reading someone's diary is the most despicable thing you could have done! What were you trying to prove by doing that? That we would turn on our manager who so far has done nothing wrong but has used his authority that he rightly earned by becoming the manager and being a relative of our previous manager. I may feel that men are nothing more then perverts but I know a good person when I see it and so far, this is only showing that you obviously need to grow up?" Motoko said while angry at what she discovered what Naru has been doing.
Keitaro just stood there and said nothing as they both told her off for doing something wrong and completely stupid. He felt that there was nothing that he needed to say that wouldn't just be repeating what they both said. They all left the room and Naru ran into her own room and closed the door.
"I am going up to the roof to train and to calm myself." Motoko said.
Motoko walked up to the roof.
What Naru did was so wrong and I became angry for it. I am a warrior and a warrior must control their anger or they will be consumed by it. I don't what made me so mad but I hope that this training session may help me to realize what caused me to get so vocal and mad. Motoko thought to herself.
"I should go speak with her. I may not like her but I hope that I can knock some sense into her head for once. She probably won't like it but she needs to hear it from me as well." Keitaro thought to himself.
He walks up to Naru's room and knocks on the door.
"Who is it?" Naru asked.
"It's me, Keitaro."
"Go away!" Naru replied.
"Ok fine. I won't come in but at least listen to what I have to say.
You know what you did back there was wrong and even though it really pissed me off and I don't have any need to forgive you for it. I will anyway. I feel that your friends needed to see this so they could speak with you since I feel you may trust them more then me. Anyone else in my shoes would probably had gotten mad and threw you out of the house by way of eviction. I can see through your actions as not an act of evil but more of a lack of trust.
You know that you have to be able to trust people because if you don't have that. You are going to find yourself having no friends and if you ever want someone to call your own later in life, you need to give trust where it is due. What have I done to make you think that I wasn't worthy of your trust and respect?
As much as I don't like you know that doesn't mean anything later on. You have to learn to trust people and if you keep doing this to others. . . Who will want to trust you with anything when you can't do the same for others? Think about that for a while and when you want to apologize to me go on ahead because my door is always open. I will see you later I hope." Keitaro said.
Behind the door to her room Naru just stood there completely confused and not knowing what to say.
Keitaro walked up to the roof and saw Motoko practicing her sword techniques by herself.
Motoko noticed that someone was coming and sent a ki attack towards the stairs but Keitaro dodged it.
"Hey what was that for?" Keitaro asked.
"I don't like it when people watch me train." Motoko replied.
"Why is that, huh? Don't feel that you can measure up to them?" Keitaro asked.
"I don't want distractions such as that when I train." Motoko said.
"Hey how do you learn anything by yourself? Do you want someone to spar with?" Keitaro asked.
"You need to have skill to face me!" Motoko yelled to Keitaro.
"I don't know if I am better then you but I feel good enough to try. You got a sword that I can use?" Keitaro asked.
Motoko throws him a sword and Keitaro catches it.
This is a good high quality sword but these marking they seem so familiar. Keitaro thought to himself.
As they dueled using every ounce of their skill, the clanging of swords could be heard. The other residents hearing the clanging sounds went up to the roof and watched as they dueled.
"Hey you're pretty good. Why don't you want anyone to see your amazing skills?" Keitaro asked.
"Hey you aren't half bad yourself but not good enough to defeat me!" Motoko said as she readied herself for the next attack.
"You're brimming with confidence, I can see that." Keitaro said as they continued their duel.
As Motoko was dueling with Keitaro, she was looking for an opening, a weakness in his defense and she just spotted one. She attacked through the hole in his defense and rested her blade next to his neck.
"Do you yield, Keitaro?" Motoko asked.
"You are quite skilled but you shouldn't sacrifice your footing or you will leave yourself open for attack." Keitaro said as he tripped her up and she fell down on her back with the point of Keitaro's sword resting at the center of Motoko's neck.
"Do you yield, Motoko?" Keitaro asked.
Motoko just laid there on her back wondering what her next move should be.
Motoko kicked her foot and tripped up Keitaro and he fell the floor and his sword fell out of his hand and was out of reach.
Motoko was kneeling on her knees while over Keitaro with her sword at his neck.
"So are you going to yield, Keitaro?" Motoko asked.
"Damn you got me good this time. You know at this angle it makes you look incredibly sexy." Keitaro said.
The words he spoke made her freeze up and blush. It gave Keitaro enough time to grab the handle of Motoko's sword and point the blade at Motoko.
"I guess I win." Keitaro said with a smile as they both stood up..
"I. . . . I lost to a man." Motoko said in total shock.
"Hey, don't be so hard on yourself. You lack focus but you are incredibly skilled. You are a skilled warrior and a beautiful, strong woman. Strong enough to make a decision on your own but humble enough to accept someone's help when you need it. I meant it when I said you are sexy so why don't you show off a little. You know enough to say I know I got it but tasteful enough that you show that you got class." Keitaro said.
The spectators were shocked at seeing Motoko lose a fight because they never seen her be defeated by anyone.
"Wow, what a fight!" Kitsune said.
"He probably cheated because I know Motoko and she wouldn't lost to a man." Naru said.
"Hey I heard that you stupid bitch. Why don't you take your half baked accusations and shove them up your ass?" Keitaro yelled.
"How dare you say that?" Naru yelled as she threw a punch at Keitaro and he grabbed it and squeezed it until it started to hurt.
"Ow, that hurts you asshole!" Naru yelled while obviously pissed.
"I know what you are but what am I?" Keitaro said with a smirk on his face.
Naru tried to kick Keitaro in the family jewels since her hand was still sore but tripped on something and went rolling off barely grabbing onto the gutter while hanging over the hot springs.
Keitaro walked up to where Naru had rolled off and looked at her dangling from the roof while struggling to get up.
"You know, if it was a punch in the face it wouldn't bother me much but trying to kick a man like that is just showing you have no respect and deserve none. Hey lets play a game shall we?" Keitaro said.
"This girl was very respectful." Keitaro said as he grabbed her pinky finger and pulled it off the gutter.
Her eyes widen as he started to pull off her fingers that were holding onto the gutter.
"This girl was very energetic." Keitaro said as he grabbed her ring finer and pulled it off the gutter.
He is going to make me fall. Naru thought to herself.
"This girl tried to seduce me for favors and I taught her a lesson." Keitaro said as he grabbed her middle finger and pulled it off the gutter.
He is really going to do it. I am starting to regret that decision I made earlier. Naru thought to herself.
"This girl tried to challenge my authority but I showed her that I was the boss." Keitaro said as he grabbed her index finger and pulled it off the gutter.
"Keitaro, I beg of you! Please stop! I forgive you just stop doing it." Naru pleaded with him.
"You said it before but I guess your word means nothing as you seem to lie when ever it suits you. This girl fell off the gutter and slammed into the hot springs because she is nothing but a bitch with no self respect." Keitaro said.
She lost her grip and fell into the hot springs.
"Okay class, Naru has shown what happens when you try to kick a man in the privates who has done nothing wrong but talk back to a girl who seems to like hurling insults at me for no reason at all. Now Shinobu?" Keitaro said.
"Yes! Keitaro." Shinobu replied still scared at what just happened. .
"What's for dinner?" I am so hungry." Keitaro asked.
She tells him what is for dinner.
"Oh that sounds so delicious. So when are we eating?" Keitaro asked.
She looked at her watch. Oh no I forgot all about the dinner. It was supposed to be done three minutes ago.
Shinobu runs down stairs to pull the dinner out of the oven.
There was nothing wrong with it but Shinobu seemed to apologize throughout the meal even though Keitaro repeatedly told her that there was nothing wrong with her cooking.
As for Naru, well she got a cold plate of food that she had to microwave instead of the usual warm meal because she had to change her clothes and dry herself off while everyone else ate. She couldn't cook a meal if her life depended on it so the food tasted like crap because she overcooked it. Keitaro probably would have said that it serves you right for being such a dumbass.
End of Chapter Three