Review please there's something I don't like about the story but I can't pin point it...help me!

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((Kagome pov))

I groaned and rubbed my eyes... god I hate waking up to sunlight... I sat up and hit my alarm clock so hard it fell off my table. I lay back down and fell back asleep. Exactly 9 minutes later I re awoke to that infernal beeping. I climbed out of bed and woke up sango. "You sleep like a rock," I said pushing her off her bed.

"Come on kag 5 more minutes" I heard her mumble in to her mess of pillows and blankets on the floor.

"Whatever sango, but if you're not ready I'm leaving without you, and I know how much you love walking to school...." I said grabbing my towel and heading to the bathroom.

20 minutes later, I emerged drying my hair and wearing my robe. "Hey kag who gave you this?" sango asked holding up a crystal vase with a black rose in it. I gasped. It was so beautiful. I picked up the card and read it.

Sorry about last night, I hope you forgive me...

I.

But it wasn't your fault I thought I kissed you.....

I touched the rose and a flood of memories invaded my brain. Inuyasha standing in front of me looking into my eyes. "I love you" floated across my mind. Inuyasha grabbing my hand just before I fell to my doom, Inuyasha cleaning and dressing my wounds, The love I had was beginning to return to my heart, I could feel a warmth spreading across my body, this was so right.....

'Are you stupid kagome what about your boyfriend kouga' I looked down at the cuts on my arms. 'He would kill me if he knew, I'd be dead, or at least I'd wish I was' I frowned.

"What's wrong kagome?" sango asked. She looked at my arms. "OH MY GOD KAGOME WHAT ARE THEY?!?"

"Nothing" I mumbled as I lowered my head to hide my eyes, I shuffled over to my closet. Pulling out a uniform. Sango grabbed my wrist and pulled me back, reopening several cuts in the process. I gasped and grabbed my arm.

"Kagome tell me right now what is going on." Sango had that look in her eyes, oh man I can't get out of this...what am I going to say??

"Uhhh its nothing real-"

"KAGOME! ´sango screamed. "DON'T YOU LIE TO ME!!" she glared at me "crazy as it may seem, I am your older sister, and I don't want you doing this I won't let you." I kept staring at the ground. "Could you just tell me why?" she pleaded.

"Do you really want to know sango?" I looked at her glaring through my tears. "For some reason I've felt sad ever sense dad died last year." I said sarcastically, "and call me crazy it makes me sad when my boyfriend hi-"oh shit oh shit did I really just say that. I'm soo screwed...

"When your boyfriend does what kagome?" I tried to turn away. "When he does what kagome?' sango grabbed my shoulders and held me in the spot. I looked down at my shoeless feet.

"When he hits me" I mumbled my gaze never leaving my feet.

"I'm gonna kill that ass hole I'm gonna fuckin kill him" I started to cry

"No sango don't he'll kill me he told me if I told anyone he'd kill me..." I moaned blinking away tears. Sango looked at me for a while and let go of my shoulders and got up from her knees.

"Get dressed kagome. We need to go to school." She walked away. I sat there for a while and cried, I finally pulled myself together and grabbed my shoes out of the closet. I walked over my dresser and looked at my self in the mirror. I threw on some makeup, and straightened out my uniform. Glancing at the rose I said softly "ye gods inuyasha, why do I feel like I know you so well? Save me inuyasha, save me...."

"YOU READY KAGOME?" I heard sango scream from down stairs.

"Coming" I said as I grabbed my bag. I touched the rose one last time before I ran out the door.

Ok so it's not that great so uh review ok?